登录
Ⅶ. 书面表达。
今天是五一劳动节，李梅和她的同学们在干什么呢？假如你是李梅，请根据所给提示，写一封信给你在新加坡的朋友 Jane，描述你们所做的事情。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包含所给要点提示；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 书写工整，词数 60 个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
【写作指导】
一、审题
话题：
体裁：
时态：
人称：
二、思路点拨
三、句型提示
1. 今天是五月一日，劳动节。
Today is May 1st, Day.
2. 我和我的家人在桂林玩得很开心。
I'm a great time in .
3. 我正坐在游泳池边喝橙汁。
I'm by the pool and orange juice.
4. 张斌和他的家人在爬山。
Zhang Bin is mountain with his family.
5. Amy 正在学英语。
Amy is English.
6. 我想给你打电话，但是我的电话没电了。
I want to call you, but my phone isn't .
7. 现在是早晨八点。
It's o'clock in the morning.
【写作练习】
Dear Jane,
How is your vacation going?
今天是五一劳动节，李梅和她的同学们在干什么呢？假如你是李梅，请根据所给提示，写一封信给你在新加坡的朋友 Jane，描述你们所做的事情。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包含所给要点提示；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 书写工整，词数 60 个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
【写作指导】
一、审题
话题：
体裁：
时态：
人称：
二、思路点拨
三、句型提示
1. 今天是五月一日，劳动节。
Today is May 1st, Day.
2. 我和我的家人在桂林玩得很开心。
I'm a great time in .
3. 我正坐在游泳池边喝橙汁。
I'm by the pool and orange juice.
4. 张斌和他的家人在爬山。
Zhang Bin is mountain with his family.
5. Amy 正在学英语。
Amy is English.
6. 我想给你打电话，但是我的电话没电了。
I want to call you, but my phone isn't .
7. 现在是早晨八点。
It's o'clock in the morning.
【写作练习】
Dear Jane,
How is your vacation going?
答案
【写作指导】
一、描述活动；记叙文；现在进行时；第一和第三人称
三、1. Labor 2. having；Guilin 3. sitting；drinking 4. climbing 5. learning 6. work 7. eight
【写作练习】
Dear Jane，
How is your vacation going? Today is May 1st，Labor Day. I want to call you but my phone isn't working，so I'm writing to you.
I'm having a great time in Guilin with my parents. Guilin is a beautiful place and we have fun here. It's eight o'clock in the morning，it's sunny，I'm sitting by the pool and drinking orange juice. It's warm and sunny，and it's very relaxing here.
My friend Zhang Bin is in xi'an with his family，they are climbing mountain now，the weather there is cool and cloudy，just right for walking. Amy is studying at home，she has to finish her homework first.
See you soon.
Yours，
Li Mei
一、描述活动；记叙文；现在进行时；第一和第三人称
三、1. Labor 2. having；Guilin 3. sitting；drinking 4. climbing 5. learning 6. work 7. eight
【写作练习】
Dear Jane，
How is your vacation going? Today is May 1st，Labor Day. I want to call you but my phone isn't working，so I'm writing to you.
I'm having a great time in Guilin with my parents. Guilin is a beautiful place and we have fun here. It's eight o'clock in the morning，it's sunny，I'm sitting by the pool and drinking orange juice. It's warm and sunny，and it's very relaxing here.
My friend Zhang Bin is in xi'an with his family，they are climbing mountain now，the weather there is cool and cloudy，just right for walking. Amy is studying at home，she has to finish her homework first.
See you soon.
Yours，
Li Mei
解析
【解析】
1. 写作指导审题：话题为五一劳动节的活动；体裁是书信；时态用现在进行时；人称采用第一和第三人称。
2. 句型提示需填写的内容依次为：1. Labor 2. having；Guilin 3. sitting；drinking 4. climbing 5. learning 6. work 7. eight。
3. 写作练习需以李梅的身份给新加坡的朋友Jane写信，围绕五一劳动节描述自己和同学们的活动，运用现在进行时，内容涵盖要点，适当增加细节使行文连贯，词数控制在60左右（开头不计入总词数）。
【答案】
【写作指导】
一、描述活动；记叙文；现在进行时；第一和第三人称
三、1. Labor 2. having；Guilin 3. sitting；drinking 4. climbing 5. learning 6. work 7. eight
【写作练习】
Dear Jane，
How is your vacation going? Today is May 1st，Labor Day. I want to call you but my phone isn't working，so I'm writing to you.
I'm having a great time in Guilin with my parents. Guilin is a beautiful place and we have fun here. It's eight o'clock in the morning，it's sunny，I'm sitting by the pool and drinking orange juice. It's warm and sunny，and it's very relaxing here.
My friend Zhang Bin is in Xi'an with his family，they are climbing mountain now，the weather there is cool and cloudy，just right for walking. Amy is studying at home，she has to finish her homework first.
See you soon.
Yours，
Li Mei
【知识点】
现在进行时用法、书信写作格式、节日英语表达
【点评】
本题围绕五一劳动节活动展开书信写作，要求运用现在进行时描述场景，内容需覆盖提示要点并适当补充细节。范文内容完整，时态运用准确，行文流畅，能有效锻炼学生的情景写作能力和时态运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 写作指导审题：话题为五一劳动节的活动；体裁是书信；时态用现在进行时；人称采用第一和第三人称。
2. 句型提示需填写的内容依次为：1. Labor 2. having；Guilin 3. sitting；drinking 4. climbing 5. learning 6. work 7. eight。
3. 写作练习需以李梅的身份给新加坡的朋友Jane写信，围绕五一劳动节描述自己和同学们的活动，运用现在进行时，内容涵盖要点，适当增加细节使行文连贯，词数控制在60左右（开头不计入总词数）。
【答案】
【写作指导】
一、描述活动；记叙文；现在进行时；第一和第三人称
三、1. Labor 2. having；Guilin 3. sitting；drinking 4. climbing 5. learning 6. work 7. eight
【写作练习】
Dear Jane，
How is your vacation going? Today is May 1st，Labor Day. I want to call you but my phone isn't working，so I'm writing to you.
I'm having a great time in Guilin with my parents. Guilin is a beautiful place and we have fun here. It's eight o'clock in the morning，it's sunny，I'm sitting by the pool and drinking orange juice. It's warm and sunny，and it's very relaxing here.
My friend Zhang Bin is in Xi'an with his family，they are climbing mountain now，the weather there is cool and cloudy，just right for walking. Amy is studying at home，she has to finish her homework first.
See you soon.
Yours，
Li Mei
【知识点】
现在进行时用法、书信写作格式、节日英语表达
【点评】
本题围绕五一劳动节活动展开书信写作，要求运用现在进行时描述场景，内容需覆盖提示要点并适当补充细节。范文内容完整，时态运用准确，行文流畅，能有效锻炼学生的情景写作能力和时态运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
