思路点拨
Hello, I’m ...
I study ...
beginning
I live...
HellIo,sttuId'ym....... beginning
body I go to school...
This is mywayto...
ending
This is my way to ...
Can you tell me your way ...?
佳作欣赏
The way I go to school
Hello, I’m Lily. I’m twelve years old. I study at No. 1 Primary School. It’s near the hospital. I live on Apple Street. It’s far from my school. I go to school by bus every day. I take Bus No. 2 in front of my home and get off at the ninth stop. Then I get to my school.
This is my way to school. Can you tell me your way to school?
开头介绍自己并描述自己就读的学校,为后面介绍自己如何上学做铺垫。
文章主体交代自己的家庭住址以及具体的上学方式,结构清晰,表达精准。
结尾进行小结并期待读者与自己产生共鸣。
小试身手
假如你是苏海,请根据图片及提示,以“How do we come to school?”为题写一篇短文,介绍一下你和你的好朋友住在哪儿以及怎样上学。要求语句通顺,不少于5句话。
提示:Moon Street/far from/by bus,near school/on foot,Sunshine Town/by metro,Park Street/by taxi
How do we come to school?
______________________________
Hello, I’m ...
I study ...
beginning
I live...
HellIo,sttuId'ym....... beginning
ending
This is my way to ...
Can you tell me your way ...?
佳作欣赏
The way I go to school
Hello, I’m Lily. I’m twelve years old. I study at No. 1 Primary School. It’s near the hospital. I live on Apple Street. It’s far from my school. I go to school by bus every day. I take Bus No. 2 in front of my home and get off at the ninth stop. Then I get to my school.
This is my way to school. Can you tell me your way to school?
开头介绍自己并描述自己就读的学校,为后面介绍自己如何上学做铺垫。
文章主体交代自己的家庭住址以及具体的上学方式,结构清晰,表达精准。
结尾进行小结并期待读者与自己产生共鸣。
小试身手
假如你是苏海,请根据图片及提示,以“How do we come to school?”为题写一篇短文,介绍一下你和你的好朋友住在哪儿以及怎样上学。要求语句通顺,不少于5句话。
提示:Moon Street/far from/by bus,near school/on foot,Sunshine Town/by metro,Park Street/by taxi
How do we come to school?
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答案
How do we come to school?
I'm Su Hai. Su Yang and I live in a new house now.