思路点拨
　　My birthday is on the ... of ...
　　Time　　　　　　　　　　　　　Activities
　　My birthday　　　　　　　　　　sing, dance, play games ...
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　noodles, cake ...−Food
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Feeling. happy ...
佳作欣赏
　　　　　　　　　　My birthday
　　Today is the twenty - sixth of December. It's my twelfth birthday. I am very happy. In the morning, I have a big birthday party. Some of my friends come to my birthday party. They give me a lot of birthday presents. We sing and dance together. Then we eat a big cake. In the afternoon, we go to the park together. We play games there. We have a picnic too. We all have a good time.
　　文章开头直接交代自己的生日时间，开门见山，给读者留下鲜明的主题印象。
　　叙述时运用in the morning，in the afternoon等时间短语使文章条理更清晰。
　　结尾交代人物心情，以此抒发感情。
小试身手
　　请根据图片提示,以“Mike's birthday”为题写一段话。
　　要求:意思连贯，语句通顺有条理,书写规范工整，不少于6句话。
　　提示词:party，a birthday cake
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　 　　　　　 　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Mike's birthday
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Mike's birthday
Mike's birthday is on the eighth of April. He always has a party at home. Mike, Helen and Tim go to buy a birthday cake in the morning. Then, his parents and grandparents have a party for him. They eat the birthday cake together and play some games. They have a lot of fun.