典型例题
假如你是李明,本周日由你组织国际交换生去the Dream City游玩。请用英语拟一份通知。内容要点如下:1. 集合时间和地点:上午九点,the Dream City入口处;2. 观看楚剧,学习剪纸,制作陶土作品;3. 自由活动一小时,可游玩、拍照等,五点乘地铁返校;4. 天气炎热,着轻便装;5. 请补充一至两点个人的想法或建议。
注意:1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;2. 词数80左右;3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:entrance n. 入口处;Chu Opera 楚剧;clay piece 陶土作品
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday.
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思路点拨
根据作文要求可知,本题要求写一则通知,体裁应为应用文,人称应以第一人称为主;文章主体部分介绍本周日的游玩安排,时态应为一般将来时。第一段:总体介绍安排;第二段:详述时间、地点、活动等;第三段:表达对此次活动的展望。
范文欣赏
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday.
We will meet at the entrance of the Dream City at 9:00 a.m. We can enjoy the Chu Opera, learn paper cutting and make clay pieces. We will be given an hour to do activities freely. We can do some things such as travelling around and taking photos. We will take the subway to go back to school at five o'clock. It is hot and you can wear light clothes. We must pay attention to safety and never go anywhere alone.
I hope we will have a good time at the Dream City.
假如你是李明,本周日由你组织国际交换生去the Dream City游玩。请用英语拟一份通知。内容要点如下:1. 集合时间和地点:上午九点,the Dream City入口处;2. 观看楚剧,学习剪纸,制作陶土作品;3. 自由活动一小时,可游玩、拍照等,五点乘地铁返校;4. 天气炎热,着轻便装;5. 请补充一至两点个人的想法或建议。
注意:1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;2. 词数80左右;3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:entrance n. 入口处;Chu Opera 楚剧;clay piece 陶土作品
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday.
______________________________
思路点拨
根据作文要求可知,本题要求写一则通知,体裁应为应用文,人称应以第一人称为主;文章主体部分介绍本周日的游玩安排,时态应为一般将来时。第一段:总体介绍安排;第二段:详述时间、地点、活动等;第三段:表达对此次活动的展望。
范文欣赏
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday.
We will meet at the entrance of the Dream City at 9:00 a.m. We can enjoy the Chu Opera, learn paper cutting and make clay pieces. We will be given an hour to do activities freely. We can do some things such as travelling around and taking photos. We will take the subway to go back to school at five o'clock. It is hot and you can wear light clothes. We must pay attention to safety and never go anywhere alone.
I hope we will have a good time at the Dream City.
答案
巩固练习
(2024·眉山中考)假定你是李华,打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行,请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友David写一封邮件,分享你的旅行计划。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear David,
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Li Hua
(2024·眉山中考)假定你是李华,打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行,请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友David写一封邮件,分享你的旅行计划。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear David,
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Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear David,
How's it going?
With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing. Now I'd like to share my travel plan with you.
We'll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. During that period, we're going to visit the Palace Museum to know about stories of the past. Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. We're going to take a walk there and admire how great we Chinese are!
I believe we'll enjoy ourselves in Beijing. What about your summer plan?
Li Hua
Dear David,
How's it going?
With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing. Now I'd like to share my travel plan with you.
We'll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. During that period, we're going to visit the Palace Museum to know about stories of the past. Besides, another place we must go is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. We're going to take a walk there and admire how great we Chinese are!
I believe we'll enjoy ourselves in Beijing. What about your summer plan?
Li Hua
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