主题写作提优
Mike is twelve. He is ill. He feels cold and tired. He goes to see the doctor. He has a cold and a headache. He should take some medicine and drink more warm water. He should have a good rest at home. He shouldn't watch too much TV. He shouldn't eat ice cream either.
写作指导
病情描述及建议
1. 开头引入：简洁点明人物与病情核心，快速让读者了解主题。
2. 主体分述：按“症状→病因→建议（正反两方面）”顺序，结合病历卡内容详细说明。
症状与病因：用清晰语句描述，让读者清楚病情。
建议阐述：正面建议用积极表达，说明怎么做对恢复好；反面建议强调要避免什么。
3. 结尾总结：简单表达对康复的期待，让内容有收尾。
按照这样“开头引入病情→主体详细说明症状、病因、建议→结尾盼康复”的思路，就能把病情和建议清晰、有条理地写出来，语句也会通顺自然。