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[小试身手]
请根据要点提示，以“Langshan, a charming place”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍南通的狼山。
要点：1. 狼山位于江苏省南通市。2. 狼山不高但充满魅力，以美丽的风景（scenery）和古老的寺庙（temple）而闻名。山上有许多绿树和五颜六色的花朵。你可以沿着台阶攀登，享受新鲜空气。在山顶，你可以看到城市和河流的壮丽景色。许多人来到这里在寺庙里祈祷（pray），享受宁静（peace）。3. 狼山是一个很棒的旅游胜地，欢迎来狼山。

[思路点拨]
① 时态：一般现在时。② 人称：第三人称。③ 先介绍狼山的地理位置，再介绍狼山的风景，最后再点明狼山是一个很棒的游览之地。

[写作提纲]

要点描述
第一段 - Langshan is in...
第二段 - Langshan is not... but... It is famous for... There are... You can... On the top, you can... Many people come here to...
第三段 - It's a... Welcome to Langshan!

[妙笔生花]
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One possible version:
Langshan, a charming place
Langshan is in Nantong City, Jiangsu Province.
Langshan is not very high but full of charm. It is famous for its beautiful scenery and ancient temples. There are many green trees and colourful flowers on the mountain. You can climb up the steps and enjoy the fresh air. On the top, you can enjoy a great view of the city and the river. Many people come here to pray in the temples and enjoy the peace.
It's a wonderful place to visit. Welcome to Langshan!