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七、书面表达(共 1 大题,满分 20 分)
本学期,你所在的班级开展了生活技能学习活动,如地震逃生、入乡随俗、志愿服务等。请你根据以下
What skill did you learn?
Why did you learn it?
How has it changed your life?
Please write more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数 100 左右；开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Now I'd like to talk about my new skill.
本学期,你所在的班级开展了生活技能学习活动,如地震逃生、入乡随俗、志愿服务等。请你根据以下
内
容
提
示
,结合你的个人实践,写一篇英语短文,参加英语课前分享。内
容
提
示
：What skill did you learn?
Why did you learn it?
How has it changed your life?
Please write more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数 100 左右；开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Now I'd like to talk about my new skill.
答案
[参考范文]
Good morning, everyone! Now I'd like to talk about my new skill. This term, I learned how to be a good volunteer. I chose to learn it because I wanted to help people in our community and make a real difference.
I took part in activities like cleaning up parks and reading to children in the library. At first, I felt a little shy, but soon I found it very rewarding. This experience has changed my life by making me more confident and responsible. I now understand the importance of helping others. I also learned how to work better in a team.
In short, volunteering not only helps others but also helps me grow. I will continue to do it in the future.
Thank you!
Good morning, everyone! Now I'd like to talk about my new skill. This term, I learned how to be a good volunteer. I chose to learn it because I wanted to help people in our community and make a real difference.
I took part in activities like cleaning up parks and reading to children in the library. At first, I felt a little shy, but soon I found it very rewarding. This experience has changed my life by making me more confident and responsible. I now understand the importance of helping others. I also learned how to work better in a team.
In short, volunteering not only helps others but also helps me grow. I will continue to do it in the future.
Thank you!
解析
【解析】
1. 开篇紧扣主题，点明学到的新技能是成为一名合格的志愿者；
2. 说明学习该技能的原因是想要帮助社区人群、做出实际贡献；
3. 列举参与的志愿活动，如公园清洁、给图书馆儿童读书，描述自身心理变化；
4. 阐述该技能带来的改变：变得更自信、有责任感，懂得团队协作的重要性；
5. 结尾总结志愿服务的意义，表明未来会继续坚持，结构完整，符合题目要求。
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! Now I'd like to talk about my new skill. This term, I learned how to be a good volunteer. I chose to learn it because I wanted to help people in our community and make a real difference.
I took part in activities like cleaning up parks and reading to children in the library. At first, I felt a little shy, but soon I found it very rewarding. This experience has changed my life by making me more confident and responsible. I now understand the importance of helping others. I also learned how to work better in a team.
In short, volunteering not only helps others but also helps me grow. I will continue to do it in the future.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语话题短文写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕“学习志愿服务技能”展开，内容完整涵盖了学什么、为什么学、带来的改变等要点，结构清晰，语言表达流畅自然，符合词数要求，能很好地完成英语课前分享的任务，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
1. 开篇紧扣主题，点明学到的新技能是成为一名合格的志愿者；
2. 说明学习该技能的原因是想要帮助社区人群、做出实际贡献；
3. 列举参与的志愿活动，如公园清洁、给图书馆儿童读书，描述自身心理变化；
4. 阐述该技能带来的改变：变得更自信、有责任感，懂得团队协作的重要性；
5. 结尾总结志愿服务的意义，表明未来会继续坚持，结构完整，符合题目要求。
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! Now I'd like to talk about my new skill. This term, I learned how to be a good volunteer. I chose to learn it because I wanted to help people in our community and make a real difference.
I took part in activities like cleaning up parks and reading to children in the library. At first, I felt a little shy, but soon I found it very rewarding. This experience has changed my life by making me more confident and responsible. I now understand the importance of helping others. I also learned how to work better in a team.
In short, volunteering not only helps others but also helps me grow. I will continue to do it in the future.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语话题短文写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕“学习志愿服务技能”展开，内容完整涵盖了学什么、为什么学、带来的改变等要点，结构清晰，语言表达流畅自然，符合词数要求，能很好地完成英语课前分享的任务，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
