2026年通成学典课时作业本七年级英语上册译林版江苏专版第46页答案
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假设你是David,你校育才中学正在进行以“My school”为主题的征文活动。请你根据要点提示的内容,写一篇70词左右的英语短文介绍你的学校。
要点:
1. What is your school like?
2. What are your favourite places? Why?
3. How do you find your school?
[思路点拨]
①时态:一般现在时。②人称:以第一人称为主。③首先介绍学校概况,接着描述自己喜欢的场所和具体原因,最后对学校进行评价。
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答案

One possible version:
I am David, a Grade 7 student at Yucai Middle School. My school is big and clean. There are five classroom buildings. My classroom is on the first floor.
My favourite places are the playground and the hall. After school, I like to play ball games in the playground with my classmates. We can have meetings in our school hall, and some events take place there.
My school is great. I like it very much.

解析

【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以David的身份,围绕“My school”主题写70词左右的英语短文,需覆盖三个要点:学校概况、喜欢的场所及原因、对学校的评价。确定时态为一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。写作结构分为三段:第一段介绍自身身份与学校基本情况;第二段说明最喜欢的地方及理由;第三段表达对学校的整体评价与喜爱,同时注意控制字数,语言通顺。
【解析】
1. 开篇部分:点明身份(David,七年级学生),介绍学校名称(育才中学),描述学校外观(大且干净,有教学楼等);
2. 中间部分:说明最喜欢的场所(操场、礼堂),分别阐述喜欢的原因(操场可和同学打球,礼堂可开会、办活动);
3. 结尾部分:表达对学校的喜爱,总结评价,确保总词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I am David, a Grade 7 student at Yucai Middle School. My school is big and clean. There are five classroom buildings. My classroom is on the first floor.
My favourite places are the playground and the hall. After school, I like to play ball games in the playground with my classmates. We can have meetings in our school hall, and some events take place there.
My school is great. I like it very much.
【知识点】
英语要点写作、一般现在时运用、学校主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,覆盖所有要点,结构清晰,语言简洁通顺,符合七年级学生的写作要求,很好地完成了任务。
【难度系数】
0.6