2026年新课程学习辅导八年级英语下册人教版第73页答案
(二)书面表达
变幻莫测的天气常给平凡的生活抹上鲜艳的色彩。请你根据以下思维导图的提示写一篇英语短文,讲述你最难忘的一次与自然天气紧密相关的经历。

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)语句连贯,词数70左右。
写作指导
(1)审题定调
文体:
记叙文
时态:
一般过去时

人称:
第一人称和第三人称

(2)思路构建

答案

写作指导
(1)记叙文;一般过去时;第一人称和第三人称
One possible version:
Last summer, on a sunny Saturday, my friends and I rode bikes to the countryside. We enjoyed the beautiful scenery along the way. However, around noon, dark clouds filled the sky quickly and thunder rolled in the distance.
As the first raindrops fell, we tried to find a place to hide, but the storm hit so hard. The wind nearly blew us off our bikes, and the rain hit our faces. Wet and cold, we finally found a small house. The couple in the house warmly welcomed us with hot tea.
Though the storm caused our plan to fail, I realized that kindness can light up the world even in the worst weather. This unforgettable adventure taught me to face unexpected changes bravely.

解析

【分析】首先审题,明确文体为记叙文,时态需用一般过去时,人称以第一人称叙述;接着围绕“与自然天气紧密相关的难忘经历”构思内容:先交代事件背景(如和朋友的户外活动),再描述天气突变的过程,然后写经历中的具体情况,最后点明感悟;写作时要注意语句连贯,词数约70,适当拓展细节让内容充实。
【解析】第一步审题定调:确定文体为记叙文,时态用一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主;第二步思路构建:开头点明事件的时间、人物和活动,中间详细描述天气变化及经历的过程,结尾升华主题,表达感悟;写作时需贴合主题,语句通顺,词数符合要求,适当补充细节增强文章生动性。
【答案】Last summer, on a sunny Saturday, my friends and I rode bikes to the countryside. We enjoyed the beautiful scenery along the way. However, around noon, dark clouds filled the sky quickly and thunder rolled in the distance. As the first raindrops fell, we tried to find a place to hide, but the storm hit so hard. The wind nearly blew us off our bikes, and the rain hit our faces. Wet and cold, we finally found a small house. The couple in the house warmly welcomed us with hot tea. Though the storm caused our plan to fail, I realized that kindness can light up the world even in the worst weather. This unforgettable adventure taught me to face unexpected changes bravely.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、英语写作连贯表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求,围绕与天气相关的难忘经历展开,时态准确,内容完整有细节,结尾点明感悟,语句连贯流畅,符合词数要求,是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5