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成长的道路漫长曲折，沿途也有美丽的风景。每一次改变都是这场旅途中的回忆。回首过往的初中时光，你的生活中也一定会有一些变化。请你根据下面表格中的信息，以“Great Changes in My Growth”为题，谈谈自己成长过程中的转变、收获以及打算。
Great Changes in My Growth
As time goes by, people surely change. I am no longer that little kid and have become quite different from what I used to be.
Great Changes in My Growth
As time goes by, people surely change. I am no longer that little kid and have become quite different from what I used to be.
When I was young,I was a slow reader. Now I read something I enjoy every day to improve my speed. And I'm developing an interest in reading. I also had difficulty in learning English. So I was quite poor at English. However,I have found some ways to improve my English,such as listening to English songs and reading English newspapers.
Looking ahead,I hope to become a better person and make my parents proud. Besides,I will work harder to get into my dream high school.
答案
One possible version:
Great Changes in My Growth
As time goes by, people surely change. I am no longer that little kid and have become quite different from what I used to be.
When I was young,I was a slow reader. Now I read something I enjoy every day to improve my speed. And I'm developing an interest in reading. I also had difficulty in learning English. So I was quite poor at English. However,I have found some ways to improve my English,such as listening to English songs and reading English newspapers.
Looking ahead,I hope to become a better person and make my parents proud. Besides,I will work harder to get into my dream high school.
Great Changes in My Growth
As time goes by, people surely change. I am no longer that little kid and have become quite different from what I used to be.
When I was young,I was a slow reader. Now I read something I enjoy every day to improve my speed. And I'm developing an interest in reading. I also had difficulty in learning English. So I was quite poor at English. However,I have found some ways to improve my English,such as listening to English songs and reading English newspapers.
Looking ahead,I hope to become a better person and make my parents proud. Besides,I will work harder to get into my dream high school.
解析
【分析】
本题为话题类书面表达，要求以“Great Changes in My Growth”为题，结合表格中“过去、现在、未来”三个阶段的信息，描述成长中的转变。解题思路：1. 明确各阶段对应时态：过去用一般过去时，现在用一般现在时，未来用一般将来时；2. 围绕表格信息补充合理细节，让内容具体：过去的不足（慢读、英语差），现在的改进措施（每日阅读、听英文歌、读英文报），未来的目标（成为更好的人、考理想高中）；3. 保持行文连贯，衔接自然，符合初中生表达习惯。
【解析】
首先承接给定开头，用一般过去时描述过去情况：“When I was young, I was a slow reader. I also had difficulty in learning English, so I was quite poor at English.”；接着用一般现在时写现在的改进方法：“Now I read something I enjoy every day to improve my reading speed and develop an interest in reading. I have found some ways to improve my English, such as listening to English songs and reading English newspapers.”；最后用一般将来时写未来打算：“Looking ahead, I hope to become a better person and make my parents proud. Besides, I will work harder to get into my dream high school.”，确保紧扣表格、时态正确、语言流畅。
【答案】
Great Changes in My Growth
As time goes by, people surely change. I am no longer that little kid and have become quite different from what I used to be.
When I was young, I was a slow reader. Now I read something I enjoy every day to improve my speed. And I'm developing an interest in reading. I also had difficulty in learning English. So I was quite poor at English. However, I have found some ways to improve my English, such as listening to English songs and reading English newspapers.
Looking ahead, I hope to become a better person and make my parents proud. Besides, I will work harder to get into my dream high school.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结合表格信息，时态运用准确恰当，内容充实具体，补充了合理细节，行文连贯流畅，符合初中生写作要求，是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为话题类书面表达，要求以“Great Changes in My Growth”为题，结合表格中“过去、现在、未来”三个阶段的信息，描述成长中的转变。解题思路：1. 明确各阶段对应时态：过去用一般过去时，现在用一般现在时，未来用一般将来时；2. 围绕表格信息补充合理细节，让内容具体：过去的不足（慢读、英语差），现在的改进措施（每日阅读、听英文歌、读英文报），未来的目标（成为更好的人、考理想高中）；3. 保持行文连贯，衔接自然，符合初中生表达习惯。
【解析】
首先承接给定开头，用一般过去时描述过去情况：“When I was young, I was a slow reader. I also had difficulty in learning English, so I was quite poor at English.”；接着用一般现在时写现在的改进方法：“Now I read something I enjoy every day to improve my reading speed and develop an interest in reading. I have found some ways to improve my English, such as listening to English songs and reading English newspapers.”；最后用一般将来时写未来打算：“Looking ahead, I hope to become a better person and make my parents proud. Besides, I will work harder to get into my dream high school.”，确保紧扣表格、时态正确、语言流畅。
【答案】
Great Changes in My Growth
As time goes by, people surely change. I am no longer that little kid and have become quite different from what I used to be.
When I was young, I was a slow reader. Now I read something I enjoy every day to improve my speed. And I'm developing an interest in reading. I also had difficulty in learning English. So I was quite poor at English. However, I have found some ways to improve my English, such as listening to English songs and reading English newspapers.
Looking ahead, I hope to become a better person and make my parents proud. Besides, I will work harder to get into my dream high school.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结合表格信息，时态运用准确恰当，内容充实具体，补充了合理细节，行文连贯流畅，符合初中生写作要求，是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.4
