三、书面表达。
Mike 和他的朋友们正在不同的地方度假。现在请你根据表格中的提示,以 Mike 的身份报道他们正在做什么事。

要求:1. 短文须包含表格提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语言表达要准确,语句通顺,行文连贯;
3. 词数 80 左右。
参考词汇: thick 厚的
Mike 和他的朋友们正在不同的地方度假。现在请你根据表格中的提示,以 Mike 的身份报道他们正在做什么事。
要求:1. 短文须包含表格提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语言表达要准确,语句通顺,行文连贯;
3. 词数 80 左右。
参考词汇: thick 厚的
答案
Hello! My friends and I are on vacation in different places now.
I'm staying in Harbin with my family. It's cold and snowy here. We are wearing thick warm coats, skating on the ice and making a big snowman. We feel so excited.
Jorge and Bob are in Beijing. It's sunny there. They are visiting the Palace Museum, and they think it's really great.
Lily and her family are in Chongqing. It's rainy and foggy there, so they are shopping in the mall. All of us are having a wonderful time!
I'm staying in Harbin with my family. It's cold and snowy here. We are wearing thick warm coats, skating on the ice and making a big snowman. We feel so excited.
Jorge and Bob are in Beijing. It's sunny there. They are visiting the Palace Museum, and they think it's really great.
Lily and her family are in Chongqing. It's rainy and foggy there, so they are shopping in the mall. All of us are having a wonderful time!
解析
这篇书面表达考查现在进行时的场景运用,写作步骤如下:
1. 审题:明确身份为Mike,核心时态为现在进行时,需要覆盖表格所有提示信息,补充合理的游玩感受,词数控制在80左右。
2. 谋篇:开篇总起介绍自己和朋友们正在各地度假,依次分别介绍自己在哈尔滨的天气、正在进行的活动和感受,再介绍Jorge和Bob在北京的行程,最后介绍Lily一家在重庆的情况,收尾点明大家都玩得很开心。
3. 润色:正确使用现在进行时结构,适当添加细节,让语句通顺连贯,符合七年级英语的表达难度。
1. 审题:明确身份为Mike,核心时态为现在进行时,需要覆盖表格所有提示信息,补充合理的游玩感受,词数控制在80左右。
2. 谋篇:开篇总起介绍自己和朋友们正在各地度假,依次分别介绍自己在哈尔滨的天气、正在进行的活动和感受,再介绍Jorge和Bob在北京的行程,最后介绍Lily一家在重庆的情况,收尾点明大家都玩得很开心。
3. 润色:正确使用现在进行时结构,适当添加细节,让语句通顺连贯,符合七年级英语的表达难度。
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