Ⅶ. 书面表达(满分20分)
随着国家对青少年健康成长的日益重视,部分学校将课间时间延长至15分钟,并且积极增加每天综合体育活动时间。这一政策不仅让我们的校园生活更加丰富多彩,也给了我们更多锻炼身体的机会。请以“My Favourite Sport”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容需包含:
1. What's your favourite sport?
2. What do you like about it?
3. How often do you do it?
4. Why is it good for you?
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数不少于80;
3. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
My Favourite Sport
随着国家对青少年健康成长的日益重视,部分学校将课间时间延长至15分钟,并且积极增加每天综合体育活动时间。这一政策不仅让我们的校园生活更加丰富多彩,也给了我们更多锻炼身体的机会。请以“My Favourite Sport”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容需包含:
1. What's your favourite sport?
2. What do you like about it?
3. How often do you do it?
4. Why is it good for you?
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数不少于80;
3. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
My Favourite Sport
答案
One possible version:
My Favourite Sport
I am a sports lover. My favourite sport is football.
I like playing football because it not only helps me keep healthy but also makes me become strong. I play football three times a week and always feel relaxed after the game. What's more,it is a good way of making friends and building team spirit. Now I am in the school football team. We often play against other teams. We spend a lot of time practising and having fun. All of us are friends.
Sport is good for both body and mind. Let's get more exercise from now on.
My Favourite Sport
I am a sports lover. My favourite sport is football.
I like playing football because it not only helps me keep healthy but also makes me become strong. I play football three times a week and always feel relaxed after the game. What's more,it is a good way of making friends and building team spirit. Now I am in the school football team. We often play against other teams. We spend a lot of time practising and having fun. All of us are friends.
Sport is good for both body and mind. Let's get more exercise from now on.
解析
【分析】
本次书面表达要求以“My Favourite Sport”为题,需涵盖四个核心要点:最喜欢的运动项目、喜欢该运动的原因、运动频率、对自身的益处,同时满足词数不少于80、语意连贯、无真实信息等要求。解题思路为:先确定具体运动项目,再围绕四个要点展开内容,适当添加合理细节,最后组织语言确保语句通顺、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
写作时,开篇点明最喜欢的运动;接着说明喜欢的原因(如助力健康、交友、培养团队精神);再明确运动频率;最后阐述对身心的益处,结尾可发出运动倡议,确保所有要点齐全,内容充实,符合要求。
【答案】
My Favourite Sport
I am a sports lover. My favourite sport is football.
I like playing football because it not only helps me keep healthy but also makes me become strong. I play football three times a week and always feel relaxed after the game. What's more, it is a good way of making friends and building team spirit. Now I am in the school football team. We often play against other teams. We spend a lot of time practising and having fun. All of us are friends.
Sport is good for both body and mind. Let's get more exercise from now on.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有规定要点,内容充实且有合理拓展(如加入校队练习的细节),语意连贯、逻辑清晰,语言通顺自然,符合初中英语写作的要求,传递了积极运动的正能量。
【难度系数】
0.7
本次书面表达要求以“My Favourite Sport”为题,需涵盖四个核心要点:最喜欢的运动项目、喜欢该运动的原因、运动频率、对自身的益处,同时满足词数不少于80、语意连贯、无真实信息等要求。解题思路为:先确定具体运动项目,再围绕四个要点展开内容,适当添加合理细节,最后组织语言确保语句通顺、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
写作时,开篇点明最喜欢的运动;接着说明喜欢的原因(如助力健康、交友、培养团队精神);再明确运动频率;最后阐述对身心的益处,结尾可发出运动倡议,确保所有要点齐全,内容充实,符合要求。
【答案】
My Favourite Sport
I am a sports lover. My favourite sport is football.
I like playing football because it not only helps me keep healthy but also makes me become strong. I play football three times a week and always feel relaxed after the game. What's more, it is a good way of making friends and building team spirit. Now I am in the school football team. We often play against other teams. We spend a lot of time practising and having fun. All of us are friends.
Sport is good for both body and mind. Let's get more exercise from now on.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有规定要点,内容充实且有合理拓展(如加入校队练习的细节),语意连贯、逻辑清晰,语言通顺自然,符合初中英语写作的要求,传递了积极运动的正能量。
【难度系数】
0.7
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