典型例题
假如你是Kate,现在就读于北京某国际学校,上周你学校组织了一次旅行。你们游览了北京的许多名胜古迹(places of interest),如长城、故宫、天安门广场(Tian'anmen Square)等。请你给你的同学Mike写一封60词左右的书信介绍一下你的这次学校旅行。
写作思路
1.时态:主要使用一般过去时
2.人称:主要使用第一人称
3.结构:

写作模板(句式)
开头句:
1. How was your school trip?
你的学校旅行怎么样?
2. I went on a school trip with my classmates last week in Beijing,China.
上周我和同学们在中国北京进行了一次学校旅行。
过渡句:
1. We went to the Great Wall and it was great and exciting.
我们去了长城,那里棒极了,让人很兴奋。
2. Next we visited Tian'anmen Square.
然后我们参观了天安门广场。
结尾句:
All of us had great fun on the school trip!
我们所有人在这次学校旅行中都玩得很开心!
范文欣赏
Dear Mike,
How are you? How was your school trip? I went on a school trip with my classmates last week in Beijing,China. It was great. You know Beijing is the capital of China. It has lots of places of interest. Last Sunday,the weather was sunny. We went to the Great Wall and it was great and exciting. Then we went to the Palace Museum. It was cool! Next we visited Tian'anmen Square. It was beautiful. Oh,I took a lot of photos on the trip.
All of us had great fun on the school trip!
Please write back soon and tell me about your trip.
Yours,
Kate

Dear Mike,
How was your school trip? I went on a school trip with my classmates last week in Beijing. We first visited the Great Wall, it was amazing. Then we went to the Palace Museum and saw many old relics. Next we visited Tian'anmen Square, it was really beautiful.
We all had great fun on the trip! Please tell me about your trip soon.
Yours,
Kate

【分析】
这是一道英语书信写作题，要求以Kate的身份给Mike写信介绍北京的学校旅行。解题思路：1. 确定时态：因描述上周的旅行，主要使用一般过去时；2. 确定人称：以第一人称“我”“我们”为主；3. 结构遵循“开篇点题-描述活动-所感所思”的逻辑，开篇点明旅行的时间、地点，中间按顺序写游览的名胜古迹，结尾表达感受并邀请对方回信；4. 控制字数符合要求，遵循书信格式。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开头：写称呼Dear Mike，引出话题并点明旅行：Dear Mike, How was your school trip? I went on a school trip with my classmates last week in Beijing.
2. 中间：按顺序描述游览的景点：We first visited the Great Wall, it was amazing. Then we went to the Palace Museum and saw many old relics. Next we visited Tian'anmen Square, it was really beautiful.
3. 结尾：表达感受并邀请回信：We all had great fun on the trip! Please tell me about your trip soon. 最后署名Yours, Kate。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How was your school trip? I went on a school trip with my classmates last week in Beijing. We first visited the Great Wall, it was amazing. Then we went to the Palace Museum and saw many old relics. Next we visited Tian'anmen Square, it was really beautiful.
We all had great fun on the trip! Please tell me about your trip soon.
Yours,
Kate
【知识点】
英语书信写作；一般过去时；名胜古迹表达
【点评】
该写作符合题目要求，结构清晰，时态正确，涵盖指定景点，语言简洁，符合书信格式和字数要求，是一篇合格的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6