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四、书面表达
假设你是李华，近期，你校《英文校刊》的阅读专栏正在开展“读好书”征文活动。请你根据以下问题向该专栏投稿，推荐你最喜欢的一本书。
- What is your favourite book? How did you get it?
- What is it about?
- What have you learnt from it?
要求:(1)短文必须包括以上问题的所有信息，可适当增加细节；(2)80－100词。
参考词汇:鼓励 encourage
假设你是李华，近期，你校《英文校刊》的阅读专栏正在开展“读好书”征文活动。请你根据以下问题向该专栏投稿，推荐你最喜欢的一本书。
- What is your favourite book? How did you get it?
- What is it about?
- What have you learnt from it?
要求:(1)短文必须包括以上问题的所有信息，可适当增加细节；(2)80－100词。
参考词汇:鼓励 encourage
答案
One possible version:
Hi, I'm Li Hua. Since I started school, I have been a book lover. Among all the books, my favourite is *Journey to the West*. My father gave it to me as my birthday gift. Its colourful cover and exciting pictures caught my eye at once.
The story is about the Monkey King. He uses the magic stick to fight against bad people and help the weak. Every part of the story is full of exciting adventures.
Although the Monkey King meets many difficulties, he never gives up. The spirit encourages me to keep trying. Also, it reminds me to study harder so that I can help people in need. I truly recommend this book to all students!
(118 words)
Hi, I'm Li Hua. Since I started school, I have been a book lover. Among all the books, my favourite is *Journey to the West*. My father gave it to me as my birthday gift. Its colourful cover and exciting pictures caught my eye at once.
The story is about the Monkey King. He uses the magic stick to fight against bad people and help the weak. Every part of the story is full of exciting adventures.
Although the Monkey King meets many difficulties, he never gives up. The spirit encourages me to keep trying. Also, it reminds me to study harder so that I can help people in need. I truly recommend this book to all students!
(118 words)
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份向学校《英文校刊》的阅读专栏投稿，推荐自己最喜欢的一本书，需涵盖三个核心问题：①最喜欢的书是什么、如何获得；②书的主要内容；③从书中得到的收获。解题思路：1. 选择学生熟悉且适合推荐的经典书籍（如《西游记》）；2. 开篇点明书籍名称及获取途径，补充细节（如父亲送生日礼物、封面图片吸引自己）丰富内容；3. 简要介绍书籍核心情节（如孙悟空的冒险故事）；4. 阐述从书中获得的启发（如坚持的精神、帮助他人的意识）；5. 调整语言确保词数在80-100之间，符合投稿的正式且亲切的语气。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇：自我介绍后点明最喜欢的书为《Journey to the West》，说明是父亲送的生日礼物，补充“彩色封面和刺激的图片立刻吸引了我”的细节；
2. 主体：介绍书籍内容，围绕孙悟空用金箍棒对抗坏人、帮助弱者，充满精彩冒险展开；
3. 结尾：说明从书中收获的道理——遇到困难不放弃的精神鼓励自己，要努力帮助有需要的人，最后推荐给所有同学；
注意时态：介绍书籍内容用一般现在时，获取方式用一般过去时，收获用一般现在时，确保要点齐全，语言流畅，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hi, I'm Li Hua. Since I started school, I have been a book lover. Among all the books, my favourite is *Journey to the West*. My father gave it to me as my birthday gift. Its colourful cover and exciting pictures caught my eye at once.
The story is about the Monkey King. He uses the magic stick to fight against bad people and help the weak. Every part of the story is full of exciting adventures.
Although the Monkey King meets many difficulties, he never gives up. The spirit encourages me to keep trying. Also, it reminds me to study harder so that I can help people in need. I truly recommend this book to all students!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，英语记叙文写作，英语词汇运用
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，内容充实且有细节支撑，结构清晰（引入书籍-介绍内容-阐述收获-发出推荐），语言通顺自然，符合学生身份，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文，体现了良好的写作逻辑和语言表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份向学校《英文校刊》的阅读专栏投稿，推荐自己最喜欢的一本书，需涵盖三个核心问题：①最喜欢的书是什么、如何获得；②书的主要内容；③从书中得到的收获。解题思路：1. 选择学生熟悉且适合推荐的经典书籍（如《西游记》）；2. 开篇点明书籍名称及获取途径，补充细节（如父亲送生日礼物、封面图片吸引自己）丰富内容；3. 简要介绍书籍核心情节（如孙悟空的冒险故事）；4. 阐述从书中获得的启发（如坚持的精神、帮助他人的意识）；5. 调整语言确保词数在80-100之间，符合投稿的正式且亲切的语气。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇：自我介绍后点明最喜欢的书为《Journey to the West》，说明是父亲送的生日礼物，补充“彩色封面和刺激的图片立刻吸引了我”的细节；
2. 主体：介绍书籍内容，围绕孙悟空用金箍棒对抗坏人、帮助弱者，充满精彩冒险展开；
3. 结尾：说明从书中收获的道理——遇到困难不放弃的精神鼓励自己，要努力帮助有需要的人，最后推荐给所有同学；
注意时态：介绍书籍内容用一般现在时，获取方式用一般过去时，收获用一般现在时，确保要点齐全，语言流畅，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hi, I'm Li Hua. Since I started school, I have been a book lover. Among all the books, my favourite is *Journey to the West*. My father gave it to me as my birthday gift. Its colourful cover and exciting pictures caught my eye at once.
The story is about the Monkey King. He uses the magic stick to fight against bad people and help the weak. Every part of the story is full of exciting adventures.
Although the Monkey King meets many difficulties, he never gives up. The spirit encourages me to keep trying. Also, it reminds me to study harder so that I can help people in need. I truly recommend this book to all students!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，英语记叙文写作，英语词汇运用
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，内容充实且有细节支撑，结构清晰（引入书籍-介绍内容-阐述收获-发出推荐），语言通顺自然，符合学生身份，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文，体现了良好的写作逻辑和语言表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
