【话题分析】
本单元的话题是“爱好与课后活动”,围绕介绍自己和他人的爱好展开,写作题目一般要求我们完成一篇介绍自己最爱的短文,学生需要运用一般现在时描述爱好内容,掌握第三人称单数的正确用法,合理使用“like/enjoy/love doing”表达喜好,并按“引出爱好→具体做法→感受收获”的逻辑组织内容,让文章层次清晰、内容充实。
【范文赏析】
Ⅰ. 例题
阳光中学七年级一班的同学们正在分享各自的爱好。校刊英语专栏正开展主题为“My Favourite Hobby”的征文活动。请根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍你最爱的爱好。
• What is your favourite hobby?
• What do you do for this hobby?
• How often do you do it?
• Why do you like it?
要求:1. 文中须包含以上要点,可适当发挥;2. 不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Favourite Hobby
Everyone has a hobby, and I am no exception.
Ⅱ. 写作策略
写介绍爱好的短文时,需按照“点明爱好→具体做法→频率时长→感受收获”的顺序展开。写作时以一般现在时为主,注意第三人称单数动词变化(he/she后动词加s/es)。表达喜好可用“like/enjoy/love+doing”结构。衔接上,用also、too递进补充,用because说明原因,用in my free time引出活动场景,避免句式单调重复。结尾可表达爱好带来的收获或对未来的期望,升华主题。
Ⅲ. 范文
Everyone has a hobby, and I am no exception. ①I love painting. It is my favourite hobby.
I often paint at my aunt's house. She knows a lot about art and she helps me a lot. ②I usually paint on Wednesday afternoons after school. Sometimes I paint at home on weekends too. I enjoy drawing animals and flowers. ③My aunt says I am getting better and better!
Why do I love painting? Because it brings me joy and helps me relax. ④When I paint, I forget all my worries. I also make new friends in the Painting Club at school. We share our ideas and learn from each other. I hope my hobby will bring me more fun in the future!
① 开篇直接点明爱好,用“I love+doing”结构,紧扣主题,简洁有力。
② 描述实践爱好的具体时间和场景,用usually和sometimes体现频率变化,内容真实具体。
③ 引用他人的评价,从侧面展现进步,比直接说“我画得好”更有说服力。
④ 用when引导的时间状语从句描述沉浸式体验,生动传达爱好带来的感受,避免空洞说理。
【写作积累】
本单元的话题是“爱好与课后活动”,围绕介绍自己和他人的爱好展开,写作题目一般要求我们完成一篇介绍自己最爱的短文,学生需要运用一般现在时描述爱好内容,掌握第三人称单数的正确用法,合理使用“like/enjoy/love doing”表达喜好,并按“引出爱好→具体做法→感受收获”的逻辑组织内容,让文章层次清晰、内容充实。
【范文赏析】
Ⅰ. 例题
阳光中学七年级一班的同学们正在分享各自的爱好。校刊英语专栏正开展主题为“My Favourite Hobby”的征文活动。请根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍你最爱的爱好。
• What is your favourite hobby?
• What do you do for this hobby?
• How often do you do it?
• Why do you like it?
要求:1. 文中须包含以上要点,可适当发挥;2. 不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Favourite Hobby
Everyone has a hobby, and I am no exception.
Ⅱ. 写作策略
写介绍爱好的短文时,需按照“点明爱好→具体做法→频率时长→感受收获”的顺序展开。写作时以一般现在时为主,注意第三人称单数动词变化(he/she后动词加s/es)。表达喜好可用“like/enjoy/love+doing”结构。衔接上,用also、too递进补充,用because说明原因,用in my free time引出活动场景,避免句式单调重复。结尾可表达爱好带来的收获或对未来的期望,升华主题。
Ⅲ. 范文
Everyone has a hobby, and I am no exception. ①I love painting. It is my favourite hobby.
I often paint at my aunt's house. She knows a lot about art and she helps me a lot. ②I usually paint on Wednesday afternoons after school. Sometimes I paint at home on weekends too. I enjoy drawing animals and flowers. ③My aunt says I am getting better and better!
Why do I love painting? Because it brings me joy and helps me relax. ④When I paint, I forget all my worries. I also make new friends in the Painting Club at school. We share our ideas and learn from each other. I hope my hobby will bring me more fun in the future!
① 开篇直接点明爱好,用“I love+doing”结构,紧扣主题,简洁有力。
② 描述实践爱好的具体时间和场景,用usually和sometimes体现频率变化,内容真实具体。
③ 引用他人的评价,从侧面展现进步,比直接说“我画得好”更有说服力。
④ 用when引导的时间状语从句描述沉浸式体验,生动传达爱好带来的感受,避免空洞说理。
【写作积累】
答案
My Favourite Hobby
Everyone has a hobby, and I am no exception. I love painting. It is my favourite hobby.
I often paint at my aunt's house. She knows a lot about art and she helps me a lot. I usually paint on Wednesday afternoons after school. Sometimes I paint at home on weekends too. I enjoy drawing animals and flowers. My aunt says I am getting better and better!
Why do I love painting? Because it brings me joy and helps me relax. When I paint, I forget all my worries. I also make new friends in the Painting Club at school. We share our ideas and learn from each other. I hope my hobby will bring me more fun in the future!
Everyone has a hobby, and I am no exception. I love painting. It is my favourite hobby.
I often paint at my aunt's house. She knows a lot about art and she helps me a lot. I usually paint on Wednesday afternoons after school. Sometimes I paint at home on weekends too. I enjoy drawing animals and flowers. My aunt says I am getting better and better!
Why do I love painting? Because it brings me joy and helps me relax. When I paint, I forget all my worries. I also make new friends in the Painting Club at school. We share our ideas and learn from each other. I hope my hobby will bring me more fun in the future!
解析
【分析】
写作时需遵循“点明爱好→具体做法→频率→原因→收获”的逻辑顺序,紧扣题目要求的四个核心要点(爱好是什么、实践内容、频率、喜爱原因),运用一般现在时,使用“like/enjoy/love doing”表达喜好,注意第三人称单数的正确形式,用衔接词使文章连贯,最后升华主题体现爱好的意义,确保字数达标、内容充实。
【解析】
按照以下步骤完成写作:1. 开篇用“I love doing”结构直接点明最爱的爱好;2. 描述实践爱好的具体场景、时间及内容,用usually、sometimes体现频率变化;3. 引用他人评价丰富内容,从侧面展现进步;4. 说明喜爱爱好的原因,结合具体体验(如放松、交友),最后表达对未来的期望,确保涵盖所有要求要点,语言准确、结构清晰。
【答案】
My Favourite Hobby
Everyone has a hobby, and I am no exception. I love painting. It is my favourite hobby.
I often paint at my aunt's house. She knows a lot about art and she helps me a lot. I usually paint on Wednesday afternoons after school. Sometimes I paint at home on weekends too. I enjoy drawing animals and flowers. My aunt says I am getting better and better!
Why do I love painting? Because it brings me joy and helps me relax. When I paint, I forget all my worries. I also make new friends in the Painting Club at school. We share our ideas and learn from each other. I hope my hobby will bring me more fun in the future!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、非谓语动词(like/enjoy/love doing)
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求,涵盖所有核心要点,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,运用恰当衔接词丰富内容,准确使用一般现在时及相关表达,通过具体细节和他人评价提升内容真实性,符合七年级英语写作的要求,是一篇优质的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
写作时需遵循“点明爱好→具体做法→频率→原因→收获”的逻辑顺序,紧扣题目要求的四个核心要点(爱好是什么、实践内容、频率、喜爱原因),运用一般现在时,使用“like/enjoy/love doing”表达喜好,注意第三人称单数的正确形式,用衔接词使文章连贯,最后升华主题体现爱好的意义,确保字数达标、内容充实。
【解析】
按照以下步骤完成写作:1. 开篇用“I love doing”结构直接点明最爱的爱好;2. 描述实践爱好的具体场景、时间及内容,用usually、sometimes体现频率变化;3. 引用他人评价丰富内容,从侧面展现进步;4. 说明喜爱爱好的原因,结合具体体验(如放松、交友),最后表达对未来的期望,确保涵盖所有要求要点,语言准确、结构清晰。
【答案】
My Favourite Hobby
Everyone has a hobby, and I am no exception. I love painting. It is my favourite hobby.
I often paint at my aunt's house. She knows a lot about art and she helps me a lot. I usually paint on Wednesday afternoons after school. Sometimes I paint at home on weekends too. I enjoy drawing animals and flowers. My aunt says I am getting better and better!
Why do I love painting? Because it brings me joy and helps me relax. When I paint, I forget all my worries. I also make new friends in the Painting Club at school. We share our ideas and learn from each other. I hope my hobby will bring me more fun in the future!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、非谓语动词(like/enjoy/love doing)
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求,涵盖所有核心要点,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,运用恰当衔接词丰富内容,准确使用一般现在时及相关表达,通过具体细节和他人评价提升内容真实性,符合七年级英语写作的要求,是一篇优质的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
Ⅰ. 话题词汇
1. 放松(v.)
2. 分享(v.)
3. 带来快乐
4. 课后俱乐部
1. 放松(v.)
relax
2. 分享(v.)
share
3. 带来快乐
bring joy
4. 课后俱乐部
after-school clubs
答案
1. relax
2. share
3. bring joy
4. after-school clubs
2. share
3. bring joy
4. after-school clubs
解析
【分析】本题考查基础英语话题词汇的汉译英,需根据给出的中文含义,结合对应的英语词性和固定搭配,写出正确的单词或短语。
【解析】1. “放松”作为动词,对应的英语单词为relax;2. “分享”作为动词,对应的英语单词为share;3. “带来快乐”是固定短语,译为bring joy;4. “课后俱乐部”是固定表达,译为after-school clubs。
【答案】1. relax
2. share
3. bring joy
4. after-school clubs
【知识点】英语词汇、汉译英
【点评】本题考查基础话题词汇的掌握,属于英语学习的基础题型,难度较低,用于巩固核心词汇基础。
【难度系数】0.8
【解析】1. “放松”作为动词,对应的英语单词为relax;2. “分享”作为动词,对应的英语单词为share;3. “带来快乐”是固定短语,译为bring joy;4. “课后俱乐部”是固定表达,译为after-school clubs。
【答案】1. relax
2. share
3. bring joy
4. after-school clubs
【知识点】英语词汇、汉译英
【点评】本题考查基础话题词汇的掌握,属于英语学习的基础题型,难度较低,用于巩固核心词汇基础。
【难度系数】0.8
Ⅱ. 佳句翻译
1. 爱好不仅让我们的生活更有趣,还帮助我们结交新朋友。
2. 每当我感到疲惫时,画画总能让我平静下来。
1. 爱好不仅让我们的生活更有趣,还帮助我们结交新朋友。
Hobbies not only make our life more interesting, but also help us make new friends.
2. 每当我感到疲惫时,画画总能让我平静下来。
Whenever I feel tired, painting always helps me calm down.
答案
1. Hobbies not only make our life more interesting, but also help us make new friends.
2. Whenever I feel tired, painting always helps me calm down.
2. Whenever I feel tired, painting always helps me calm down.
解析
【分析】
本题为汉译英的佳句翻译题,解题思路是:先找准中文表达对应的英文词汇、短语,再根据英语的句式规则(如并列结构、时间状语从句结构)调整语序,确保语法正确、表达符合英语习惯,准确对应中文含义。
【解析】
1. 中文“爱好”对应Hobbies,“不仅……还……”用固定句式not only...but also...连接并列谓语;“让我们的生活更有趣”译为make our life more interesting,“帮助我们结交新朋友”译为help us make new friends,组合成正确句子:Hobbies not only make our life more interesting, but also help us make new friends.
2. “每当”用Whenever引导时间状语从句,“我感到疲惫”译为I feel tired;主句主语“画画”是painting,谓语用第三人称单数形式,“让我平静下来”译为help me calm down,组合成句子:Whenever I feel tired, painting always helps me calm down.
【答案】
1. Hobbies not only make our life more interesting, but also help us make new friends.
2. Whenever I feel tired, painting always helps me calm down.
【知识点】
汉译英、并列句式(not only...but also...)、时间状语从句
【点评】
本题考查基础英语的汉译英转换,涉及常用词汇、核心句式的运用,难度适中,适合巩固基础翻译能力,需注意英语句式的语法规则。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为汉译英的佳句翻译题,解题思路是:先找准中文表达对应的英文词汇、短语,再根据英语的句式规则(如并列结构、时间状语从句结构)调整语序,确保语法正确、表达符合英语习惯,准确对应中文含义。
【解析】
1. 中文“爱好”对应Hobbies,“不仅……还……”用固定句式not only...but also...连接并列谓语;“让我们的生活更有趣”译为make our life more interesting,“帮助我们结交新朋友”译为help us make new friends,组合成正确句子:Hobbies not only make our life more interesting, but also help us make new friends.
2. “每当”用Whenever引导时间状语从句,“我感到疲惫”译为I feel tired;主句主语“画画”是painting,谓语用第三人称单数形式,“让我平静下来”译为help me calm down,组合成句子:Whenever I feel tired, painting always helps me calm down.
【答案】
1. Hobbies not only make our life more interesting, but also help us make new friends.
2. Whenever I feel tired, painting always helps me calm down.
【知识点】
汉译英、并列句式(not only...but also...)、时间状语从句
【点评】
本题考查基础英语的汉译英转换,涉及常用词汇、核心句式的运用,难度适中,适合巩固基础翻译能力,需注意英语句式的语法规则。
【难度系数】
0.6
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