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假如你叫张明，最近在和美国朋友萨姆通过邮件谈论兴趣爱好，他想了解：你最喜欢的爱好是什么？你的兴趣爱好是怎样培养起来的？它对你有什么样的帮助或影响？请根据这些问题回复邮件，80 词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
提示词语：start, relaxing/relaxed, interesting, creative, keep fit, confident, make friends, at the age of
1. What is your favorite hobby?
2. How did you develop the hobby?
3. How does it help or influence you?
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
假如你叫张明，最近在和美国朋友萨姆通过邮件谈论兴趣爱好，他想了解：你最喜欢的爱好是什么？你的兴趣爱好是怎样培养起来的？它对你有什么样的帮助或影响？请根据这些问题回复邮件，80 词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
提示词语：start, relaxing/relaxed, interesting, creative, keep fit, confident, make friends, at the age of
1. What is your favorite hobby?
2. How did you develop the hobby?
3. How does it help or influence you?
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you.
Playing basketball is my favorite hobby. It's an important part of my life.
I started to play with the ball at the age of four and I showed great interest in it.
When I went to primary school, I began to learn to play basketball in a team.
Since then, it has been my favorite hobby.
Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit but also makes me relaxed and confident when I am under stress.
Besides,
I have made a lot of friends by playing basketball with them.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
答案
Playing basketball is my favorite hobby. It's an important part of my life.
I started to play with the ball at the age of four and I showed great interest in it. When I went to primary school, I began to learn to play basketball in a team. Since then, it has been my favorite hobby.
Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit but also makes me relaxed and confident when I am under stress. Besides, I have made a lot of friends by playing basketball with them.
I started to play with the ball at the age of four and I showed great interest in it. When I went to primary school, I began to learn to play basketball in a team. Since then, it has been my favorite hobby.
Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit but also makes me relaxed and confident when I am under stress. Besides, I have made a lot of friends by playing basketball with them.
解析
【分析】
回复邮件需紧扣题目提出的三个核心问题：①点明最喜欢的爱好；②说明爱好的培养过程；③阐述爱好的帮助与影响。写作时要合理运用给定提示词语，控制总词数，保持邮件的亲切语气，确保覆盖所有要求要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇直接点明最喜欢的爱好为篮球，呼应题目要求；
2. 结合提示词“at the age of”，叙述篮球爱好的培养过程：四岁开始接触篮球，小学阶段加入球队，明确爱好的形成历程；
3. 运用提示词“keep fit”“relaxed”“confident”“make friends”，说明篮球对身体、心态、社交的帮助，完成第三个问题的回答；
4. 调整语句使其自然流畅，符合邮件格式，控制在80词左右。
【答案】
Playing basketball is my favorite hobby. It's an important part of my life.
I started to play with the ball at the age of four and I showed great interest in it. When I went to primary school, I began to learn to play basketball in a team. Since then, it has been my favorite hobby.
Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit but also makes me relaxed and confident when I am under stress. Besides, I have made a lot of friends by playing basketball with them.
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、提示词运用、要点整合
【点评】
本文完整覆盖题目要求的三个问题，合理运用所有提示词语，结构清晰，内容具体，符合邮件的写作格式与语气，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
回复邮件需紧扣题目提出的三个核心问题：①点明最喜欢的爱好；②说明爱好的培养过程；③阐述爱好的帮助与影响。写作时要合理运用给定提示词语，控制总词数，保持邮件的亲切语气，确保覆盖所有要求要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇直接点明最喜欢的爱好为篮球，呼应题目要求；
2. 结合提示词“at the age of”，叙述篮球爱好的培养过程：四岁开始接触篮球，小学阶段加入球队，明确爱好的形成历程；
3. 运用提示词“keep fit”“relaxed”“confident”“make friends”，说明篮球对身体、心态、社交的帮助，完成第三个问题的回答；
4. 调整语句使其自然流畅，符合邮件格式，控制在80词左右。
【答案】
Playing basketball is my favorite hobby. It's an important part of my life.
I started to play with the ball at the age of four and I showed great interest in it. When I went to primary school, I began to learn to play basketball in a team. Since then, it has been my favorite hobby.
Playing basketball not only helps me keep fit but also makes me relaxed and confident when I am under stress. Besides, I have made a lot of friends by playing basketball with them.
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、提示词运用、要点整合
【点评】
本文完整覆盖题目要求的三个问题，合理运用所有提示词语，结构清晰，内容具体，符合邮件的写作格式与语气，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
