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答案 D8
单元写作要求
本单元以“学校生活”为话题，谈论世界各地特色学校与学生的校园生活。书面表达常要求以建议信的形式，针对如何改善校园生活，提出建设性意见。
写作方法策略 如何写建议信
写建议信时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。信件开头要明确称呼；正文开篇要开门见山，表明写信的目的；主体部分可以从校园设施、课程活动等方面，提出改善校园生活的建议；结尾段表达期望，总结全文；最后，落款签名。
思路导引
佳作展示
高分词句
Dear Head Teacher,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life.
①First, the school library now has ②fewer books than we need, especially those about modern science. ③I suggest that our school offer more diverse books to students and organize regular book exchange activities to encourage reading. In this way, we can ④be more aware of the importance of opening minds through reading.
Second, I think that our school should pay more attention to sports education. More sports facilities should be provided to help students stay energetic. Physical health is as important as study.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. I am looking forward to the improvements in the school.
落款 Yours sincerely,
签名 Li Hua
①运用first, second提出建议，条理清晰。
②运用“fewer＋可数名词复数＋than”进行数量比较；运用“as ... as”进行同级比较，表示：“和……一样……”。
③运用that引导的宾语从句；宾语从句里还使用了省略了should的虚拟语气。
④ 运用高级词组be aware of, pay attention to, look forward to。
单元写作要求
本单元以“学校生活”为话题，谈论世界各地特色学校与学生的校园生活。书面表达常要求以建议信的形式，针对如何改善校园生活，提出建设性意见。
写作方法策略 如何写建议信
写建议信时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。信件开头要明确称呼；正文开篇要开门见山，表明写信的目的；主体部分可以从校园设施、课程活动等方面，提出改善校园生活的建议；结尾段表达期望，总结全文；最后，落款签名。
思路导引
佳作展示
高分词句
Dear Head Teacher,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life.
①First, the school library now has ②fewer books than we need, especially those about modern science. ③I suggest that our school offer more diverse books to students and organize regular book exchange activities to encourage reading. In this way, we can ④be more aware of the importance of opening minds through reading.
Second, I think that our school should pay more attention to sports education. More sports facilities should be provided to help students stay energetic. Physical health is as important as study.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. I am looking forward to the improvements in the school.
落款 Yours sincerely,
签名 Li Hua
①运用first, second提出建议，条理清晰。
②运用“fewer＋可数名词复数＋than”进行数量比较；运用“as ... as”进行同级比较，表示：“和……一样……”。
③运用that引导的宾语从句；宾语从句里还使用了省略了should的虚拟语气。
④ 运用高级词组be aware of, pay attention to, look forward to。
答案
符合要求的参考建议信示例：
Dear Head Teacher,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life.
First, the school library now has fewer books than we need, especially those about modern science. I suggest that our school offer more diverse books to students and organize regular book exchange activities to encourage reading. In this way, we can be more aware of the importance of opening minds through reading.
Second, I think that our school should pay more attention to sports education. More sports facilities should be provided to help students stay energetic. Physical health is as important as study.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. I am looking forward to the improvements in the school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Head Teacher,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life.
First, the school library now has fewer books than we need, especially those about modern science. I suggest that our school offer more diverse books to students and organize regular book exchange activities to encourage reading. In this way, we can be more aware of the importance of opening minds through reading.
Second, I think that our school should pay more attention to sports education. More sports facilities should be provided to help students stay energetic. Physical health is as important as study.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. I am looking forward to the improvements in the school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语建议信写作题，需围绕“改善校园生活”的话题，遵循建议信的标准结构展开：开头明确称呼，正文开篇点明写信目的，主体分点提出具体建议，结尾表达期望，最后完成落款。写作时需确定人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，运用条理化连接词梳理内容，结合高分词句与语法结构，保证内容清晰合理。
【解析】1. 确定体裁为建议信，人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主；2. 开头写称呼“Dear Head Teacher”，点明写信目的“I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life”；3. 主体分两点提建议：第一点针对图书馆书籍不足，建议增加多样书籍并组织读书交流活动；第二点针对体育教育，建议增加体育设施；4. 结尾表达期望，最后按书信格式落款；5. 运用高分词句和语法结构，如“fewer...than...”“as...as...”“be aware of”等，提升文章规范性。
【答案】Dear Head Teacher,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life.
First, the school library now has fewer books than we need, especially those about modern science. I suggest that our school offer more diverse books to students and organize regular book exchange activities to encourage reading. In this way, we can be more aware of the importance of opening minds through reading.
Second, I think that our school should pay more attention to sports education. More sports facilities should be provided to help students stay energetic. Physical health is as important as study.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. I am looking forward to the improvements in the school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语建议信写作、英语书信格式、英语常用句型
【点评】本文符合单元写作要求，围绕“改善校园生活”提出具体可行的建议，结构清晰，运用丰富词汇与语法，条理分明，是一篇优秀的建议信范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 确定体裁为建议信，人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主；2. 开头写称呼“Dear Head Teacher”，点明写信目的“I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life”；3. 主体分两点提建议：第一点针对图书馆书籍不足，建议增加多样书籍并组织读书交流活动；第二点针对体育教育，建议增加体育设施；4. 结尾表达期望，最后按书信格式落款；5. 运用高分词句和语法结构，如“fewer...than...”“as...as...”“be aware of”等，提升文章规范性。
【答案】Dear Head Teacher,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life.
First, the school library now has fewer books than we need, especially those about modern science. I suggest that our school offer more diverse books to students and organize regular book exchange activities to encourage reading. In this way, we can be more aware of the importance of opening minds through reading.
Second, I think that our school should pay more attention to sports education. More sports facilities should be provided to help students stay energetic. Physical health is as important as study.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. I am looking forward to the improvements in the school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语建议信写作、英语书信格式、英语常用句型
【点评】本文符合单元写作要求，围绕“改善校园生活”提出具体可行的建议，结构清晰，运用丰富词汇与语法，条理分明，是一篇优秀的建议信范文。
【难度系数】0.5
话题写作积累
1. 尝试;试图
2. 养成好习惯
3. 丰富的实践经验
4. 面对危险
5. 我建议每个学生都参加清洁活动，这样我们就能更好地保护环境。
6. 我们学校的课后活动要比其他许多学校多得多。
7. 忠告是无价之宝。
1. 尝试;试图
have a go/try
2. 养成好习惯
develop good habits
3. 丰富的实践经验
plenty of hands-on experience
4. 面对危险
in the face of danger
5. 我建议每个学生都参加清洁活动，这样我们就能更好地保护环境。
I suggest that every student take part in cleaning activities so that we can better protect the environment.
6. 我们学校的课后活动要比其他许多学校多得多。
Our school has much more after-school activities than many other schools.
7. 忠告是无价之宝。
Good advice is beyond all price.
答案
1. have a go/try
2. develop good habits
3. plenty of hands-on experience
4. in the face of danger
5. I suggest that every student take part in cleaning activities so that we can better protect the environment.
6. Our school has much more after-school activities than many other schools.
7. Good advice is beyond all price.
2. develop good habits
3. plenty of hands-on experience
4. in the face of danger
5. I suggest that every student take part in cleaning activities so that we can better protect the environment.
6. Our school has much more after-school activities than many other schools.
7. Good advice is beyond all price.
解析
【分析】本题为话题写作中的汉译英积累题，解题思路是：先明确每个汉语表达对应的英语常用短语或固定句式，注意短语搭配、词性及单复数，句子需符合英语语法规则（如虚拟语气、比较级），确保翻译准确地道。
【解析】1. “尝试；试图”对应常用固定短语have a go/try；2. “养成好习惯”中“养成”用develop，“好习惯”是good habits（复数表泛指），故为develop good habits；3. “丰富的实践经验”中“丰富的”用plenty of，“实践经验”是hands-on experience，组合为plenty of hands-on experience；4. “面对危险”的固定介词短语为in the face of danger；5. 句子翻译：“我建议”用I suggest，后接that引导的宾语从句，从句用虚拟语气（should可省，用动词原形），“参加清洁活动”是take part in cleaning activities，so that引导目的状语从句表“这样”，整句为I suggest that every student take part in cleaning activities so that we can better protect the environment；6. 比较级结构中“多得多”用much more修饰，“课后活动”是after-school activities，“其他许多学校”是many other schools，故为Our school has much more after-school activities than many other schools；7. “忠告是无价之宝”的地道表达为Good advice is beyond all price。
【答案】1. have a go/try
2. develop good habits
3. plenty of hands-on experience
4. in the face of danger
5. I suggest that every student take part in cleaning activities so that we can better protect the environment.
6. Our school has much more after-school activities than many other schools.
7. Good advice is beyond all price.
【知识点】汉译英、常用短语积累、句子翻译
【点评】本题是话题写作的基础积累题，考察常用英语短语和简单句式的翻译，是提升写作能力的必备基础，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. “尝试；试图”对应常用固定短语have a go/try；2. “养成好习惯”中“养成”用develop，“好习惯”是good habits（复数表泛指），故为develop good habits；3. “丰富的实践经验”中“丰富的”用plenty of，“实践经验”是hands-on experience，组合为plenty of hands-on experience；4. “面对危险”的固定介词短语为in the face of danger；5. 句子翻译：“我建议”用I suggest，后接that引导的宾语从句，从句用虚拟语气（should可省，用动词原形），“参加清洁活动”是take part in cleaning activities，so that引导目的状语从句表“这样”，整句为I suggest that every student take part in cleaning activities so that we can better protect the environment；6. 比较级结构中“多得多”用much more修饰，“课后活动”是after-school activities，“其他许多学校”是many other schools，故为Our school has much more after-school activities than many other schools；7. “忠告是无价之宝”的地道表达为Good advice is beyond all price。
【答案】1. have a go/try
2. develop good habits
3. plenty of hands-on experience
4. in the face of danger
5. I suggest that every student take part in cleaning activities so that we can better protect the environment.
6. Our school has much more after-school activities than many other schools.
7. Good advice is beyond all price.
【知识点】汉译英、常用短语积累、句子翻译
【点评】本题是话题写作的基础积累题，考察常用英语短语和简单句式的翻译，是提升写作能力的必备基础，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
