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一、写作指导
【话题剖析】
本单元的核心写作话题是“介绍某处热门的旅游景点”。内容包括介绍景点的名称、地理位置等，点明该景点的特别之处及游客体验，总结该景点的地位、价值或意义。
【佳句积累】
1. Xi'an rests in the central part of Shaanxi Province.
西安位于陕西省的中部。
2. Luoyang is a perfect choice for nature lovers.
洛阳是自然爱好者的理想之选。
3. Rich in history and culture, Nanjing has long been a popular tourist attraction.
南京历史文化底蕴深厚，历来是热门旅游胜地。
4. The West Lake is a popular attraction for visitors from home and abroad.
西湖是中外游客的热门景点。
【话题剖析】
本单元的核心写作话题是“介绍某处热门的旅游景点”。内容包括介绍景点的名称、地理位置等，点明该景点的特别之处及游客体验，总结该景点的地位、价值或意义。
【佳句积累】
1. Xi'an rests in the central part of Shaanxi Province.
西安位于陕西省的中部。
2. Luoyang is a perfect choice for nature lovers.
洛阳是自然爱好者的理想之选。
3. Rich in history and culture, Nanjing has long been a popular tourist attraction.
南京历史文化底蕴深厚，历来是热门旅游胜地。
4. The West Lake is a popular attraction for visitors from home and abroad.
西湖是中外游客的热门景点。
答案
答案略
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要先明确核心写作目标是完成一篇介绍热门旅游景点的短文，首先第一步可以先挑选一个自己熟悉的知名景点，避免因词汇储备不足卡壳，接下来按照题目要求的要素顺序梳理内容逻辑：先交代景点名称、地理位置，再介绍景点的独特优势和游客可获得的游玩体验，最后收尾总结景点的文化地位和游览价值，过程中可以直接灵活套用题干给出的参考佳句，降低表达难度，确保所有要求的写作要点都覆盖到，就能顺利完成写作。
【解析】
我们可以按照三步法完成本次写作：
步骤1：选定写作对象，优先选择大众熟知、相关英语表达你比较熟悉的景点，比如长城、西湖、西安这类题干佳句里出现过的景点都可以。
步骤2：搭建三段式写作结构：
① 开篇段：直接点明景点名称，套用积累的句式引出它的热门属性，再补充对应的地理位置信息，比如写长城可以写"Rich in history and culture, the Great Wall has long been a world-famous popular tourist attraction. It lies across the northern part of China, with a total length of more than 20,000 kilometers."
② 主体段：介绍景点的特别之处和游客体验，比如可以介绍景点的历史底蕴、特色景观，再写游客可以在景点获得的游玩体验，比如攀登城墙俯瞰山景、了解古代历史文化、品尝当地特色美食等。
③ 收尾段：总结景点的地位和价值，点明它是海内外游客的热门打卡地，是来当地旅游不可错过的景点即可。
步骤3：通读全文，检查是否覆盖所有写作要求的要素，修正语法错误，调整语句通顺度，把题干给出的佳句自然融入文中即可。
【答案】
答案略
【知识点】
英语景点写作，方位表达，文化话题写作
【点评】
本题属于基础应用类写作，给出了明确的写作要素指引和参考佳句，大幅降低了写作门槛，学生只需要按照给定的逻辑框架填充对应内容，灵活套用参考句式就能顺利完成，同时也能锻炼学生用英语介绍本土文旅资源的表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先要先明确核心写作目标是完成一篇介绍热门旅游景点的短文，首先第一步可以先挑选一个自己熟悉的知名景点，避免因词汇储备不足卡壳，接下来按照题目要求的要素顺序梳理内容逻辑：先交代景点名称、地理位置，再介绍景点的独特优势和游客可获得的游玩体验，最后收尾总结景点的文化地位和游览价值，过程中可以直接灵活套用题干给出的参考佳句，降低表达难度，确保所有要求的写作要点都覆盖到，就能顺利完成写作。
【解析】
我们可以按照三步法完成本次写作：
步骤1：选定写作对象，优先选择大众熟知、相关英语表达你比较熟悉的景点，比如长城、西湖、西安这类题干佳句里出现过的景点都可以。
步骤2：搭建三段式写作结构：
① 开篇段：直接点明景点名称，套用积累的句式引出它的热门属性，再补充对应的地理位置信息，比如写长城可以写"Rich in history and culture, the Great Wall has long been a world-famous popular tourist attraction. It lies across the northern part of China, with a total length of more than 20,000 kilometers."
② 主体段：介绍景点的特别之处和游客体验，比如可以介绍景点的历史底蕴、特色景观，再写游客可以在景点获得的游玩体验，比如攀登城墙俯瞰山景、了解古代历史文化、品尝当地特色美食等。
③ 收尾段：总结景点的地位和价值，点明它是海内外游客的热门打卡地，是来当地旅游不可错过的景点即可。
步骤3：通读全文，检查是否覆盖所有写作要求的要素，修正语法错误，调整语句通顺度，把题干给出的佳句自然融入文中即可。
【答案】
答案略
【知识点】
英语景点写作，方位表达，文化话题写作
【点评】
本题属于基础应用类写作，给出了明确的写作要素指引和参考佳句，大幅降低了写作门槛，学生只需要按照给定的逻辑框架填充对应内容，灵活套用参考句式就能顺利完成，同时也能锻炼学生用英语介绍本土文旅资源的表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
【例文研析】
1. 写作任务
假设你是李华，去年夏天你和父母一起去西安旅行。请你根据下面的导图提示写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下西安这座城市。词数80～100，可适当发挥。
2. 思路点拨
3. 范文品鉴
Have you ever been to Xi'an? I went there with my parents for a holiday last summer.
Xi'an rests in the centre of Shaanxi Province. With a history of more than 3,000 years and rich culture, it has long been a popular tourist attraction. The Terracotta Army is a must-see. Be sure to make your way to the Bell Tower. Xi'an is also well known for delicious food. You can try many different kinds of local snacks here, such as yangrou paomo, roujiamo and biangbiang noodles.
In short, Xi'an is well worth a visit.
1. 写作任务
假设你是李华，去年夏天你和父母一起去西安旅行。请你根据下面的导图提示写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下西安这座城市。词数80～100，可适当发挥。
2. 思路点拨
3. 范文品鉴
Have you ever been to Xi'an? I went there with my parents for a holiday last summer.
Xi'an rests in the centre of Shaanxi Province. With a history of more than 3,000 years and rich culture, it has long been a popular tourist attraction. The Terracotta Army is a must-see. Be sure to make your way to the Bell Tower. Xi'an is also well known for delicious food. You can try many different kinds of local snacks here, such as yangrou paomo, roujiamo and biangbiang noodles.
In short, Xi'an is well worth a visit.
答案
Have you ever been to Xi'an? I went there with my parents for a holiday last summer.
Xi'an rests in the centre of Shaanxi Province. With a history of more than 3,000 years and rich culture, it has long been a popular tourist attraction. The Terracotta Army is a must-see. Be sure to make your way to the Bell Tower. Xi'an is also well known for delicious food. You can try many different kinds of local snacks here, such as yangrou paomo, roujiamo and biangbiang noodles.
In short, Xi'an is well worth a visit.
Xi'an rests in the centre of Shaanxi Province. With a history of more than 3,000 years and rich culture, it has long been a popular tourist attraction. The Terracotta Army is a must-see. Be sure to make your way to the Bell Tower. Xi'an is also well known for delicious food. You can try many different kinds of local snacks here, such as yangrou paomo, roujiamo and biangbiang noodles.
In short, Xi'an is well worth a visit.
解析
这是一篇城市介绍类应用文写作，可遵循“引入话题-具体介绍-总结感受”的结构创作。开篇以问句引出西安旅行经历，吸引读者注意力；正文结合导图提示，依次介绍西安的地理位置、悠久历史、知名景点与特色美食，保证内容条理清晰；结尾简洁总结，强调西安的游览价值，注意词数控制在80-100之间，使用符合八年级水平的词汇与句式。
二、实战演练
假设你是李华，你与家人在今年端午节去了一趟皖南地区，体验甚佳。你想把这次游览经历分享给你的英国笔友Samuel。请结合以下图示内容，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，简要介绍游玩经历和感受。词数80～100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
参考词汇:Mount Huangshan 黄山,pine 松树,
the sea of clouds 云海
Dear Samuel,
How is everything going? I'm writing to share my wonderful holiday with you.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华，你与家人在今年端午节去了一趟皖南地区，体验甚佳。你想把这次游览经历分享给你的英国笔友Samuel。请结合以下图示内容，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，简要介绍游玩经历和感受。词数80～100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
参考词汇:Mount Huangshan 黄山,pine 松树,
the sea of clouds 云海
Dear Samuel,
How is everything going? I'm writing to share my wonderful holiday with you.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Samuel,
How is everything going? I'm writing to share
my wonderful holiday with you.
We spent two days exploring the beautiful Mount
Huangshan. It was my first time seeing so many strange
pines and rocks with my own eyes. Early in the morning,
we were lucky enough to see the amazing sea of clouds!
We also visited an old town. The houses there were
traditional, and we tasted some local snacks. I really
enjoyed the peaceful feel there.
The trip was not only fun but also relaxing. It
helped me learn more about China's natural beauty. I
really hope you can visit China one day, and I can be
your guide.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Samuel,
How is everything going? I'm writing to share
my wonderful holiday with you.
We spent two days exploring the beautiful Mount
Huangshan. It was my first time seeing so many strange
pines and rocks with my own eyes. Early in the morning,
we were lucky enough to see the amazing sea of clouds!
We also visited an old town. The houses there were
traditional, and we tasted some local snacks. I really
enjoyed the peaceful feel there.
The trip was not only fun but also relaxing. It
helped me learn more about China's natural beauty. I
really hope you can visit China one day, and I can be
your guide.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一封给笔友分享旅行经历的电子邮件，解题时首先梳理所有必须覆盖的写作要点：1. 本次出行背景是端午和家人前往皖南游玩；2. 对应图示第一个活动“登黄山”，合理使用题干给出的参考词汇奇松、云海补充游玩细节；3. 对应图示第二个活动“游古镇”，补充古镇特色体验比如传统建筑、当地美食等内容；4. 最后对应图示的“感受”部分，写出本次旅行的整体体验，还可以自然延伸出邀请笔友来中国游玩的内容。写作时注意语气轻松符合好友交流的语境，控制总词数在80~100之间，保证语句衔接自然流畅。
【解析】
1. 承接给出的开头，首先介绍登黄山的游玩经历：说明我们花了两天游览黄山，第一次亲眼见到形态奇特的松树和岩石，清晨十分幸运地观赏到了壮观的云海，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 接下来介绍游古镇的相关内容：说明我们还游览了皖南的古老小镇，欣赏当地的传统民居，品尝特色的当地小吃，感受到古镇独有的宁静氛围，完成第二个要点的表述。
3. 最后书写整体游玩感受：点明这次旅行既有趣又放松，让自己领略到了中国的自然与人文之美，顺势发出邀请，希望未来可以当笔友的向导带他游览中国，完成最后的感受部分，收尾自然。
4. 最后通读全文，检查所有要点是否覆盖，语法是否正确，词数是否符合题干要求。
【答案】
We spent two days exploring the beautiful Mount Huangshan. It was my first time seeing so many strange pines and rocks with my own eyes. Early in the morning, we were lucky enough to see the amazing sea of clouds!
We also visited an old town. The houses there were traditional, and we tasted some local snacks. I really enjoyed the peaceful feel there.
The trip was not only fun but also relaxing. It helped me learn more about China's natural beauty. I really hope you can visit China one day, and I can be your guide.
【知识点】
英文电子邮件写作，旅行话题表达
【点评】
本题属于基础的应用文写作，难度较低，只需要完整覆盖题干和图示给出的所有核心要点，正确使用提示给出的参考词汇，语句通顺没有语法错误即可达标，加入邀请笔友来访的细节可以让文章内容更饱满，更符合日常交流的真实感。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一封给笔友分享旅行经历的电子邮件，解题时首先梳理所有必须覆盖的写作要点：1. 本次出行背景是端午和家人前往皖南游玩；2. 对应图示第一个活动“登黄山”，合理使用题干给出的参考词汇奇松、云海补充游玩细节；3. 对应图示第二个活动“游古镇”，补充古镇特色体验比如传统建筑、当地美食等内容；4. 最后对应图示的“感受”部分，写出本次旅行的整体体验，还可以自然延伸出邀请笔友来中国游玩的内容。写作时注意语气轻松符合好友交流的语境，控制总词数在80~100之间，保证语句衔接自然流畅。
【解析】
1. 承接给出的开头，首先介绍登黄山的游玩经历：说明我们花了两天游览黄山，第一次亲眼见到形态奇特的松树和岩石，清晨十分幸运地观赏到了壮观的云海，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 接下来介绍游古镇的相关内容：说明我们还游览了皖南的古老小镇，欣赏当地的传统民居，品尝特色的当地小吃，感受到古镇独有的宁静氛围，完成第二个要点的表述。
3. 最后书写整体游玩感受：点明这次旅行既有趣又放松，让自己领略到了中国的自然与人文之美，顺势发出邀请，希望未来可以当笔友的向导带他游览中国，完成最后的感受部分，收尾自然。
4. 最后通读全文，检查所有要点是否覆盖，语法是否正确，词数是否符合题干要求。
【答案】
We spent two days exploring the beautiful Mount Huangshan. It was my first time seeing so many strange pines and rocks with my own eyes. Early in the morning, we were lucky enough to see the amazing sea of clouds!
We also visited an old town. The houses there were traditional, and we tasted some local snacks. I really enjoyed the peaceful feel there.
The trip was not only fun but also relaxing. It helped me learn more about China's natural beauty. I really hope you can visit China one day, and I can be your guide.
【知识点】
英文电子邮件写作，旅行话题表达
【点评】
本题属于基础的应用文写作，难度较低，只需要完整覆盖题干和图示给出的所有核心要点，正确使用提示给出的参考词汇，语句通顺没有语法错误即可达标，加入邀请笔友来访的细节可以让文章内容更饱满，更符合日常交流的真实感。
【难度系数】
0.7
