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Ⅵ. Writing（作文）
71. Write a speech of at least 80 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的演讲稿）
假设你是Li Hua，你校将举办“校园安全周(Campus Safety Week)”活动。你被选为学生代表，在学校大会上向全体师生发表一篇关于校园安全的演讲。请你根据平时在校园内的观察，说明你所见到的一些不安全现象，并谈谈这些行为可能带来的后果。同时，你希望同学们能够采取实际行动，共同营造安全、有序的学习环境。
注意：1. 演讲中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear teachers and students，
71. Write a speech of at least 80 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的演讲稿）
假设你是Li Hua，你校将举办“校园安全周(Campus Safety Week)”活动。你被选为学生代表，在学校大会上向全体师生发表一篇关于校园安全的演讲。请你根据平时在校园内的观察，说明你所见到的一些不安全现象，并谈谈这些行为可能带来的后果。同时，你希望同学们能够采取实际行动，共同营造安全、有序的学习环境。
注意：1. 演讲中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear teachers and students，
答案
71. One possible version:
Dear teachers and students,
Good morning. As Campus Safety Week begins, I want to share some things I have noticed around our school. Some students run quickly in the hallways, ride bicycles while using their phones, or push each other when going up and down the stairs. These actions may seem small, but they can easily lead to accidents and injuries.
A safe campus depends on all of us. I hope we can follow school rules, slow down, respect one another, and take responsibility for our own safety. If everyone makes a small change, our school will become a safer and happier place.
Thank you.
Dear teachers and students,
Good morning. As Campus Safety Week begins, I want to share some things I have noticed around our school. Some students run quickly in the hallways, ride bicycles while using their phones, or push each other when going up and down the stairs. These actions may seem small, but they can easily lead to accidents and injuries.
A safe campus depends on all of us. I hope we can follow school rules, slow down, respect one another, and take responsibility for our own safety. If everyone makes a small change, our school will become a safer and happier place.
Thank you.
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作（演讲稿）任务，解题思路需遵循演讲稿的标准结构：1. 开头问候并点明演讲主题（结合校园安全周背景）；2. 结合校园观察列举不安全现象，说明其可能引发的后果；3. 向师生提出营造安全校园的具体倡议；4. 结尾致谢。需注意不得出现个人信息，字数不少于80词，内容贴合校园实际。
【解析】写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：以指定称呼问候，点明校园安全周的背景，引出演讲主题；
2. 主体：列举观察到的校园不安全行为（如走廊快跑、骑车看手机、楼梯推搡等），说明这些行为看似微小却易引发事故与伤害；
3. 倡议：呼吁师生遵守校规、减速慢行、互相尊重，共同维护安全校园；
4. 结尾：致谢，完成演讲稿。
【答案】Dear teachers and students,
Good morning. As Campus Safety Week begins, I want to share some things I have noticed around our school. Some students run quickly in the hallways, ride bicycles while using their phones, or push each other when going up and down the stairs. These actions may seem small, but they can easily lead to accidents and injuries.
A safe campus depends on all of us. I hope we can follow school rules, slow down, respect one another, and take responsibility for our own safety. If everyone makes a small change, our school will become a safer and happier place.
Thank you.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、校园安全话题表达
【点评】本题结合校园真实情境，考查学生的演讲稿写作能力，要求学生结合实际观察展开，既贴近学生生活，又能考查语言组织与逻辑表达能力，符合英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：以指定称呼问候，点明校园安全周的背景，引出演讲主题；
2. 主体：列举观察到的校园不安全行为（如走廊快跑、骑车看手机、楼梯推搡等），说明这些行为看似微小却易引发事故与伤害；
3. 倡议：呼吁师生遵守校规、减速慢行、互相尊重，共同维护安全校园；
4. 结尾：致谢，完成演讲稿。
【答案】Dear teachers and students,
Good morning. As Campus Safety Week begins, I want to share some things I have noticed around our school. Some students run quickly in the hallways, ride bicycles while using their phones, or push each other when going up and down the stairs. These actions may seem small, but they can easily lead to accidents and injuries.
A safe campus depends on all of us. I hope we can follow school rules, slow down, respect one another, and take responsibility for our own safety. If everyone makes a small change, our school will become a safer and happier place.
Thank you.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、校园安全话题表达
【点评】本题结合校园真实情境，考查学生的演讲稿写作能力，要求学生结合实际观察展开，既贴近学生生活，又能考查语言组织与逻辑表达能力，符合英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.5
