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家庭是幸福的摇篮。家庭成员齐聚一堂、相亲相爱是我们心中最美好的画面。全家福不仅是一张照片,更是一份情感的见证。假如你是Sally,你家有四口人,根据图片提示介绍每位家庭成员的外貌、性格、爱好等信息并表达对家人的情感。

要求:1. 短文须包含以上要点中的所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3. 词数60~70。
50 英语 七年级 上册 外研版
家庭是幸福的摇篮。家庭成员齐聚一堂、相亲相爱是我们心中最美好的画面。全家福不仅是一张照片,更是一份情感的见证。假如你是Sally,你家有四口人,根据图片提示介绍每位家庭成员的外貌、性格、爱好等信息并表达对家人的情感。
要求:1. 短文须包含以上要点中的所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3. 词数60~70。
I'm Sally. This is my family photo.
There are four people in my family. My dad is tall. He's handsome and he likes playing basketball. My mum has long hair.
She's kind and she enjoys cooking delicious food. My brother is tall with brown hair. He's lively and he loves playing with toys.
I have a round face and I like playing basketball, too.
I love my family deeply—we're always full of love.
50 英语 七年级 上册 外研版
答案
One possible version:
I'm Sally. This is my family photo.
There are four people in my family. My dad is tall. He's handsome and he likes playing basketball. My mum has long hair. She's kind and she enjoys cooking delicious food. My brother is tall with brown hair. He's lively and he loves playing with toys. I have a round face and I like playing basketball, too.
I love my family deeply—we're always full of love.
I'm Sally. This is my family photo.
There are four people in my family. My dad is tall. He's handsome and he likes playing basketball. My mum has long hair. She's kind and she enjoys cooking delicious food. My brother is tall with brown hair. He's lively and he loves playing with toys. I have a round face and I like playing basketball, too.
I love my family deeply—we're always full of love.
解析
【分析】首先明确身份为Sally,需围绕全家福介绍四口之家的成员,分别从外貌、性格、爱好三个核心要点展开,最后表达对家人的爱。写作时要确保涵盖所有要求的信息,适当补充细节使语句连贯,注意词数控制在60-70之间,避免真实信息。
【解析】先开篇点明身份和全家福,再依次介绍爸爸(外貌高、帅气,爱好篮球)、妈妈(长发、善良,爱好做饭)、哥哥(高、棕发,活泼,爱好玩玩具)、自己(圆脸,爱好篮球),最后抒发对家人的爱,确保内容完整连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
I'm Sally. This is my family photo.
There are four people in my family. My dad is tall. He's handsome and he likes playing basketball. My mum has long hair. She's kind and she enjoys cooking delicious food. My brother is tall with brown hair. He's lively and he loves playing with toys. I have a round face and I like playing basketball, too.
I love my family deeply—we're always full of love.
【知识点】英语写作、词汇运用(外貌/性格/爱好相关)
【点评】短文紧扣要求,完整涵盖外貌、性格、爱好等要点,语句通顺,情感真挚,符合七年级英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】先开篇点明身份和全家福,再依次介绍爸爸(外貌高、帅气,爱好篮球)、妈妈(长发、善良,爱好做饭)、哥哥(高、棕发,活泼,爱好玩玩具)、自己(圆脸,爱好篮球),最后抒发对家人的爱,确保内容完整连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
I'm Sally. This is my family photo.
There are four people in my family. My dad is tall. He's handsome and he likes playing basketball. My mum has long hair. She's kind and she enjoys cooking delicious food. My brother is tall with brown hair. He's lively and he loves playing with toys. I have a round face and I like playing basketball, too.
I love my family deeply—we're always full of love.
【知识点】英语写作、词汇运用(外貌/性格/爱好相关)
【点评】短文紧扣要求,完整涵盖外貌、性格、爱好等要点,语句通顺,情感真挚,符合七年级英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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