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学校正在评选“健康生活推广大使”，你需要写一篇以“My healthy life”为题的短文来参加评选。要求：不少于50词。
My healthy life
My healthy life
I have a healthy life. Let me share it with you. First，I eat healthy food. I eat fruit and vegetables every day. I don’t eat too much candy or ice cream.
Second，I do exercise every day. I run in the morning and play basketball after school. Exercise makes me strong.
Third，I sleep well. I go to bed before 10:00 p. m. and get up early.
I’m happy and healthy. I hope you can be healthy too!
答案
范文：
My healthy life
I have a healthy life. Let me share it with you. First，I eat healthy food. I eat fruit and vegetables every day. I don’t eat too much candy or ice cream. Second，I do exercise every day. I run in the morning and play basketball after school. Exercise makes me strong. Third，I sleep well. I go to bed before 10:00 p. m. and get up early. I’m happy and healthy. I hope you can be healthy too！
My healthy life
I have a healthy life. Let me share it with you. First，I eat healthy food. I eat fruit and vegetables every day. I don’t eat too much candy or ice cream. Second，I do exercise every day. I run in the morning and play basketball after school. Exercise makes me strong. Third，I sleep well. I go to bed before 10:00 p. m. and get up early. I’m happy and healthy. I hope you can be healthy too！
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语命题短文写作，主题为“My healthy life”，需围绕健康生活展开写作。解题思路为：先总起引出自己的健康生活，再从饮食、运动、睡眠三个常见健康维度分点阐述具体做法，最后总结自身状态并发出健康倡议，确保内容不少于50词，语言通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇总起，点明自己有健康的生活并引出分享；2. 分点说明健康生活的具体表现：饮食上多吃蔬果、少吃甜食；运动上坚持日常锻炼；睡眠上保持规律作息；3. 结尾总结自身状态并发出健康倡议，保证内容连贯、符合题目要求。
【答案】
My healthy life
I have a healthy life. Let me share it with you. First，I eat healthy food. I eat fruit and vegetables every day. I don’t eat too much candy or ice cream. Second，I do exercise every day. I run in the morning and play basketball after school. Exercise makes me strong. Third，I sleep well. I go to bed before 10:00 p. m. and get up early. I’m happy and healthy. I hope you can be healthy too！
【知识点】
英语命题写作、健康生活主题表达
【点评】
范文结构清晰，从饮食、运动、睡眠三个维度具体阐述健康生活，语言通顺，符合评选短文的写作要求，内容充实且贴合主题。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语命题短文写作，主题为“My healthy life”，需围绕健康生活展开写作。解题思路为：先总起引出自己的健康生活，再从饮食、运动、睡眠三个常见健康维度分点阐述具体做法，最后总结自身状态并发出健康倡议，确保内容不少于50词，语言通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇总起，点明自己有健康的生活并引出分享；2. 分点说明健康生活的具体表现：饮食上多吃蔬果、少吃甜食；运动上坚持日常锻炼；睡眠上保持规律作息；3. 结尾总结自身状态并发出健康倡议，保证内容连贯、符合题目要求。
【答案】
My healthy life
I have a healthy life. Let me share it with you. First，I eat healthy food. I eat fruit and vegetables every day. I don’t eat too much candy or ice cream. Second，I do exercise every day. I run in the morning and play basketball after school. Exercise makes me strong. Third，I sleep well. I go to bed before 10:00 p. m. and get up early. I’m happy and healthy. I hope you can be healthy too！
【知识点】
英语命题写作、健康生活主题表达
【点评】
范文结构清晰，从饮食、运动、睡眠三个维度具体阐述健康生活，语言通顺，符合评选短文的写作要求，内容充实且贴合主题。
【难度系数】
0.6
