Ⅴ. Writing (书面表达)
假如你是一名中国航天员,正在天宫空间站生活。请参考本单元所学内容,写一篇关于“你在太空的一天”的日记。
写作要求:
1.列出至少3件你在太空做的事;
2.语句通顺,书写规范,不少于50词。

参考词汇:
get up, wash with a wet cloth, brush my teeth, work, grow plants, exercise, give a science class, see Earth, amazing, beautiful, stars

假如你是一名中国航天员,正在天宫空间站生活。请参考本单元所学内容,写一篇关于“你在太空的一天”的日记。
写作要求:
1.列出至少3件你在太空做的事;
2.语句通顺,书写规范,不少于50词。
参考词汇:
get up, wash with a wet cloth, brush my teeth, work, grow plants, exercise, give a science class, see Earth, amazing, beautiful, stars
答案
参考范文:
26 October, 2026 Sunny
Today was another busy day on the Tiangong space station! I got up early and washed my face with a wet cloth. After brushing my teeth, I started my work. First, I checked and watered the plants we are growing. Then, I did some exercise to keep my body strong. In the afternoon, I gave a fun science class to students on Earth. Before sleeping, I looked out of the window. Earth looked so beautiful, and the stars were amazing!
26 October, 2026 Sunny
Today was another busy day on the Tiangong space station! I got up early and washed my face with a wet cloth. After brushing my teeth, I started my work. First, I checked and watered the plants we are growing. Then, I did some exercise to keep my body strong. In the afternoon, I gave a fun science class to students on Earth. Before sleeping, I looked out of the window. Earth looked so beautiful, and the stars were amazing!
解析
【分析】本题要求以中国航天员的身份,写一篇关于“太空的一天”的日记,需遵循日记格式,包含至少3件太空活动,运用给定参考词汇,做到语句通顺、词数达标。解题思路:① 确定日记的日期与天气,符合日记文体要求;② 按时间顺序梳理太空日常活动,选用参考词汇(如洗漱、工作、锻炼、授课、观赏地球等);③ 确保活动数量≥3,语句连贯,满足不少于50词的要求。
【解析】首先采用标准日记格式标注日期与天气;接着按时间线叙述:起床后用湿布洗脸、刷牙,随后开展工作(照料种植的植物),之后进行锻炼,下午给地球学生上科学课,睡前观赏地球与星星;全程运用参考词汇,活动数量远超要求,语句连贯,符合所有写作要求。
【答案】26 October, 2026 Sunny
Today was another busy day on the Tiangong space station! I got up early and washed my face with a wet cloth. After brushing my teeth, I started my work. First, I checked and watered the plants we are growing. Then, I did some exercise to keep my body strong. In the afternoon, I gave a fun science class to students on Earth. Before sleeping, I looked out of the window. Earth looked so beautiful, and the stars were amazing!
【知识点】英语书面表达,日记写作
【点评】范文贴合中国航天员的身份设定,以时间为线索串联太空日常,合理运用参考词汇,满足写作要求,格式规范,语言通顺,是符合考查标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先采用标准日记格式标注日期与天气;接着按时间线叙述:起床后用湿布洗脸、刷牙,随后开展工作(照料种植的植物),之后进行锻炼,下午给地球学生上科学课,睡前观赏地球与星星;全程运用参考词汇,活动数量远超要求,语句连贯,符合所有写作要求。
【答案】26 October, 2026 Sunny
Today was another busy day on the Tiangong space station! I got up early and washed my face with a wet cloth. After brushing my teeth, I started my work. First, I checked and watered the plants we are growing. Then, I did some exercise to keep my body strong. In the afternoon, I gave a fun science class to students on Earth. Before sleeping, I looked out of the window. Earth looked so beautiful, and the stars were amazing!
【知识点】英语书面表达,日记写作
【点评】范文贴合中国航天员的身份设定,以时间为线索串联太空日常,合理运用参考词汇,满足写作要求,格式规范,语言通顺,是符合考查标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
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