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81. 学校 Group Caring for Animals 正在招募新成员,请你以 "Love animals" 为主题写一篇参选的演讲稿。
内容提示：
(1)个人信息：七年级学生,乐于助人。
(2)加入原因：热爱大自然,想要更多地了解动物、保护它们。
(3)自然现状：有些动物处境危险。
(4)个人观点：动物的重要性……
要求：
(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
(3)词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good morning, everyone! Today I will give a speech about loving animals.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
内容提示：
(1)个人信息：七年级学生,乐于助人。
(2)加入原因：热爱大自然,想要更多地了解动物、保护它们。
(3)自然现状：有些动物处境危险。
(4)个人观点：动物的重要性……
要求：
(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
(3)词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good morning, everyone! Today I will give a speech about loving animals.
I'm in seventh grade. I am an animal lover and love to help people and animals in need.
I want to join in the group for some reasons. Firstly, I love nature. I want to do something for it. Secondly, I hope that I can learn more about animals to protect them. Some animals are in a dangerous situation now because people used to cut down trees and destroyed nature.
In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of the nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
答案
81. One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! Today I will give a speech about loving animals.
I'm in seventh grade. I am an animal lover and love to help people and animals in need.
I want to join in the group for some reasons. Firstly, I love nature. I want to do something for it. Secondly, I hope that I can learn more about animals to protect them. Some animals are in a dangerous situation now because people used to cut down trees and destroyed nature.
In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of the nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
Good morning, everyone! Today I will give a speech about loving animals.
I'm in seventh grade. I am an animal lover and love to help people and animals in need.
I want to join in the group for some reasons. Firstly, I love nature. I want to do something for it. Secondly, I hope that I can learn more about animals to protect them. Some animals are in a dangerous situation now because people used to cut down trees and destroyed nature.
In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of the nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是完成以“Love animals”为主题的参选演讲稿，需包含所有提示内容：个人信息（七年级、乐于助人）、加入原因（爱自然、想了解保护动物）、动物现状（部分动物处境危险）、个人观点（动物重要性），同时要符合词数要求、无真实信息、衔接给定开头结尾。思考时先梳理结构：先介绍自身情况，再说明加入组织的原因，接着点明动物生存现状，最后阐述对动物重要性的看法，确保所有提示点都覆盖，语言简洁符合七年级水平。
【解析】
1. 介绍个人信息：明确说明自己是七年级学生，乐于助人且热爱动物；
2. 说明加入原因：从热爱自然、想学习了解并保护动物两方面阐述；
3. 提及动物现状：指出部分动物因人类破坏自然而处境危险；
4. 表达个人观点：点明动物是自然的一部分、人类的朋友，我们有责任保护它们；
5. 整合内容，控制词数，衔接给定开头结尾，确保符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! Today I will give a speech about loving animals.
I'm in seventh grade. I am an animal lover and love to help people and animals in need.
I want to join in the group for some reasons. Firstly, I love nature. I want to do something for it. Secondly, I hope that I can learn more about animals to protect them. Some animals are in a dangerous situation now because people used to cut down trees and destroyed nature.
In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of the nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、爱护动物主题表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示内容，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合七年级学生的英语水平，准确传达了爱护动物的理念，适合作为参选演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.7
本次写作任务是完成以“Love animals”为主题的参选演讲稿，需包含所有提示内容：个人信息（七年级、乐于助人）、加入原因（爱自然、想了解保护动物）、动物现状（部分动物处境危险）、个人观点（动物重要性），同时要符合词数要求、无真实信息、衔接给定开头结尾。思考时先梳理结构：先介绍自身情况，再说明加入组织的原因，接着点明动物生存现状，最后阐述对动物重要性的看法，确保所有提示点都覆盖，语言简洁符合七年级水平。
【解析】
1. 介绍个人信息：明确说明自己是七年级学生，乐于助人且热爱动物；
2. 说明加入原因：从热爱自然、想学习了解并保护动物两方面阐述；
3. 提及动物现状：指出部分动物因人类破坏自然而处境危险；
4. 表达个人观点：点明动物是自然的一部分、人类的朋友，我们有责任保护它们；
5. 整合内容，控制词数，衔接给定开头结尾，确保符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! Today I will give a speech about loving animals.
I'm in seventh grade. I am an animal lover and love to help people and animals in need.
I want to join in the group for some reasons. Firstly, I love nature. I want to do something for it. Secondly, I hope that I can learn more about animals to protect them. Some animals are in a dangerous situation now because people used to cut down trees and destroyed nature.
In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of the nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、爱护动物主题表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示内容，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合七年级学生的英语水平，准确传达了爱护动物的理念，适合作为参选演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.7
