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六、书面表达(25 分)
Amy 想为学校网站撰写一篇文章,以此帮助七年级的新生更好地了解学校。请根据表格中的信息,以 Amy 的身份写一篇英语短文。文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
要求:1. 必须包含所有要点,并适当补充;2. 语言通顺,意思连贯;3. 书写工整,100 词左右;4. 不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Hi guys,
My name is Amy. I am in Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle School. Now let me introduce our school to you.
I believe you will have a good time here.
Amy 想为学校网站撰写一篇文章,以此帮助七年级的新生更好地了解学校。请根据表格中的信息,以 Amy 的身份写一篇英语短文。文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
要求:1. 必须包含所有要点,并适当补充;2. 语言通顺,意思连贯;3. 书写工整,100 词左右;4. 不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Hi guys,
My name is Amy. I am in Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle School. Now let me introduce our school to you.
I believe you will have a good time here.
答案
六、
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁：本文是一篇说明文。②时态：主要为一般现在时。
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括师生情况、学校设施以及学校生活等情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍学校；第二步，具体介绍学校设施等情况；第三步，介绍师生、学习的科目、俱乐部以及学校旅行的情况；第四步，书写结语，表达对新生度过愉快的校园生活的祝愿。
[词句积累]
①do morning exercises 做早操 ②places of interest 名胜古迹
③learn from 从……中学习
④There are Chinese, English, Maths, Science, Art, Music and so on. (there be 句型)
⑤ We usually go to some places of interest to learn something that we can't learn from books. (that 引导定语从句)
One possible version:
Hi guys,
My name is Amy. I am in Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle School. Now let me introduce our school to you.
Our school has three teaching buildings. All classrooms are very tidy and beautiful. There is a beautiful library. We can go there to borrow books. There is a big playground in→常用搭配：borrow sth from sb 向某人借某物the school. We do morning exercises in the playground. Our teachers and students are helpful and kind. We study different subjects every day. There are Chinese, English, Maths, Science, Art, Music and so on. There are many clubs in the school, such as the Swimming Club, the Music Club. Our school also has two school trips every year. We usually go to some places of interest to learn something that we can't learn from books.
I believe you will have a good time here.
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁：本文是一篇说明文。②时态：主要为一般现在时。
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括师生情况、学校设施以及学校生活等情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍学校；第二步，具体介绍学校设施等情况；第三步，介绍师生、学习的科目、俱乐部以及学校旅行的情况；第四步，书写结语，表达对新生度过愉快的校园生活的祝愿。
[词句积累]
①do morning exercises 做早操 ②places of interest 名胜古迹
③learn from 从……中学习
④There are Chinese, English, Maths, Science, Art, Music and so on. (there be 句型)
⑤ We usually go to some places of interest to learn something that we can't learn from books. (that 引导定语从句)
One possible version:
Hi guys,
My name is Amy. I am in Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle School. Now let me introduce our school to you.
Our school has three teaching buildings. All classrooms are very tidy and beautiful. There is a beautiful library. We can go there to borrow books. There is a big playground in→常用搭配：borrow sth from sb 向某人借某物the school. We do morning exercises in the playground. Our teachers and students are helpful and kind. We study different subjects every day. There are Chinese, English, Maths, Science, Art, Music and so on. There are many clubs in the school, such as the Swimming Club, the Music Club. Our school also has two school trips every year. We usually go to some places of interest to learn something that we can't learn from books.
I believe you will have a good time here.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作核心任务：以Amy的身份为七年级新生介绍校园，帮助新生快速了解学校。第一步先审题：确定体裁是介绍类说明文，全文使用一般现在时，以第一人称叙述即可。第二步梳理所有必须覆盖的要点：①师生特点：友善、乐于助人；②学校特色场地：图书馆、操场等；③校园生活相关：开设的学习科目、校内俱乐部、课后/校外活动。第三步搭建行文逻辑：承接题目给出的开头，先介绍学校的特色场地，补充合理细节比如在操场做早操、去图书馆借书，接着介绍师生的友好氛围，再依次介绍学习的科目、各类俱乐部、课后相关活动，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾，全程注意不要出现真实校名和个人姓名，把词数控制在100词左右，保证语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 审题确认：
体裁：校园介绍类说明文
时态：全文以一般现在时为主
必写要点：师生特质、学校特色场所、学习科目、校内俱乐部、课后活动，所有表格信息不能遗漏。
2. 行文分步完成：
第一步：承接开头，先介绍学校的特色场地：点明学校有藏书丰富的图书馆，可借阅各类书籍，还有宽敞的大操场，日常可以在操场做早操、课后运动，覆盖"Best places at the school"的要点。
第二步：接着介绍师生情况：点明校内所有老师和同学都非常友善、乐于助人，遇到问题大家都会主动提供帮助，覆盖"Teachers and students"的要点。
第三步：展开校园生活部分：先列举日常学习的科目，比如语文、英语、数学、科学、艺术、音乐等，再介绍学校开设了很多丰富的俱乐部，比如游泳俱乐部、音乐俱乐部等，最后补充课后相关活动，比如每年会组织两次校外研学活动，去名胜古迹体验书本上学不到的知识，覆盖"School life"下的全部子要点。
第四步：自然衔接题目给出的结尾句，完成全文。
参考完整短文：
Hi guys,
My name is Amy. I am in Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle School. Now let me introduce our school to you.
Our school has three teaching buildings. All classrooms are very tidy and beautiful. There is a beautiful library. We can go there to borrow books. There is a big playground in the school. We do morning exercises in the playground. Our teachers and students are helpful and kind. We study different subjects every day. There are Chinese, English, Maths, Science, Art, Music and so on. There are many clubs in the school, such as the Swimming Club, the Music Club. Our school also has two school trips every year. We usually go to some places of interest to learn something that we can't learn from books.
I believe you will have a good time here.
【答案】
参考范文如上，覆盖全部要点，符合所有写作要求。
【知识点】
校园话题写作，一般现在时，there be句型
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的校园介绍类基础书面表达，难度不高，只需要将表格给出的所有提示要点全部覆盖，补充少量符合真实校园场景的合理细节，保证语句通顺、词数达标，避免出现真实个人信息即可获得高分，平时多积累校园相关的常用词汇和句型就能轻松完成这类写作。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确写作核心任务：以Amy的身份为七年级新生介绍校园，帮助新生快速了解学校。第一步先审题：确定体裁是介绍类说明文，全文使用一般现在时，以第一人称叙述即可。第二步梳理所有必须覆盖的要点：①师生特点：友善、乐于助人；②学校特色场地：图书馆、操场等；③校园生活相关：开设的学习科目、校内俱乐部、课后/校外活动。第三步搭建行文逻辑：承接题目给出的开头，先介绍学校的特色场地，补充合理细节比如在操场做早操、去图书馆借书，接着介绍师生的友好氛围，再依次介绍学习的科目、各类俱乐部、课后相关活动，最后自然衔接题目给出的结尾，全程注意不要出现真实校名和个人姓名，把词数控制在100词左右，保证语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 审题确认：
体裁：校园介绍类说明文
时态：全文以一般现在时为主
必写要点：师生特质、学校特色场所、学习科目、校内俱乐部、课后活动，所有表格信息不能遗漏。
2. 行文分步完成：
第一步：承接开头，先介绍学校的特色场地：点明学校有藏书丰富的图书馆，可借阅各类书籍，还有宽敞的大操场，日常可以在操场做早操、课后运动，覆盖"Best places at the school"的要点。
第二步：接着介绍师生情况：点明校内所有老师和同学都非常友善、乐于助人，遇到问题大家都会主动提供帮助，覆盖"Teachers and students"的要点。
第三步：展开校园生活部分：先列举日常学习的科目，比如语文、英语、数学、科学、艺术、音乐等，再介绍学校开设了很多丰富的俱乐部，比如游泳俱乐部、音乐俱乐部等，最后补充课后相关活动，比如每年会组织两次校外研学活动，去名胜古迹体验书本上学不到的知识，覆盖"School life"下的全部子要点。
第四步：自然衔接题目给出的结尾句，完成全文。
参考完整短文：
Hi guys,
My name is Amy. I am in Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle School. Now let me introduce our school to you.
Our school has three teaching buildings. All classrooms are very tidy and beautiful. There is a beautiful library. We can go there to borrow books. There is a big playground in the school. We do morning exercises in the playground. Our teachers and students are helpful and kind. We study different subjects every day. There are Chinese, English, Maths, Science, Art, Music and so on. There are many clubs in the school, such as the Swimming Club, the Music Club. Our school also has two school trips every year. We usually go to some places of interest to learn something that we can't learn from books.
I believe you will have a good time here.
【答案】
参考范文如上，覆盖全部要点，符合所有写作要求。
【知识点】
校园话题写作，一般现在时，there be句型
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的校园介绍类基础书面表达，难度不高，只需要将表格给出的所有提示要点全部覆盖，补充少量符合真实校园场景的合理细节，保证语句通顺、词数达标，避免出现真实个人信息即可获得高分，平时多积累校园相关的常用词汇和句型就能轻松完成这类写作。
【难度系数】
0.7
