【主题写作实践】
假如现在是晚上七点半,请你根据Tony提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文描述Tony一家人此刻的活动情况。

注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
(2)写作词数为80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It's 7:30 p. m. Tony's family are doing different things.
写作点拨:
审题
本题要求描述Tony一家在晚上七点半时进行的不同的活动。文章体裁为记叙文,人称使用第三人称,时态为现在进行时。
提纲

参考句型
1. sb is doing sth in+地点.
2. How busy they are!
规范作文:
It's 7:30 p. m. Tony's family are doing different things.
假如现在是晚上七点半,请你根据Tony提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文描述Tony一家人此刻的活动情况。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
(2)写作词数为80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It's 7:30 p. m. Tony's family are doing different things.
Tony is doing his homework in his room. Tony's grandfather is watching TV in the living room. Tony's father is reading a book in the living room too. Tony's mother is cleaning the room. Tony's sister Nancy is playing with a cat near her father in the living room. She thinks it is very interesting. How busy they are!
写作点拨:
审题
本题要求描述Tony一家在晚上七点半时进行的不同的活动。文章体裁为记叙文,人称使用第三人称,时态为现在进行时。
提纲
参考句型
1. sb is doing sth in+地点.
2. How busy they are!
规范作文:
It's 7:30 p. m. Tony's family are doing different things.
Tony is doing his homework in his room. Tony's grandfather is watching TV in the living room. Tony's father is reading a book in the living room too. Tony's mother is cleaning the room. Tony's sister Nancy is playing with a cat near her father in the living room. She thinks it is very interesting. How busy they are!
答案
It's 7: 30 p. m. Tony's family are doing
different things. Tony is doing his homework in his
room. Tony's grandfather is watching TV in the
living room. Tony's father is reading a book in the
living room too. Tony's mother is cleaning the room.
Tony's sister Nancy is playing with a cat near her
father in the living room. She thinks it is very
interesting. How busy they are!
different things. Tony is doing his homework in his
room. Tony's grandfather is watching TV in the
living room. Tony's father is reading a book in the
living room too. Tony's mother is cleaning the room.
Tony's sister Nancy is playing with a cat near her
father in the living room. She thinks it is very
interesting. How busy they are!
解析
【分析】
首先审题明确要求:时间为晚上7:30,需用英语描述Tony一家此刻的活动,时态用现在进行时,人称第三人称,不得出现真实信息,词数80左右,开头已给出。解题思路:先确定各家庭成员的活动及对应地点,用现在进行时表达动作,最后用参考句型“How busy they are!”收尾,确保语句通顺、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定时态:描述此刻正在进行的动作,采用现在进行时(结构:主语+am/is/are+现在分词);
2. 安排内容:分别写出Tony、祖父、父亲、母亲、姐妹的活动及所在地点,避免真实信息;
3. 衔接语句:用简单句串联内容,最后添加感叹句,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
It's 7: 30 p. m. Tony's family are doing different things. Tony is doing his homework in his room. Tony's grandfather is watching TV in the living room. Tony's father is reading a book in the living room too. Tony's mother is cleaning the room. Tony's sister Nancy is playing with a cat near her father in the living room. She thinks it is very interesting. How busy they are!
【知识点】
现在进行时,英语记叙文写作,家庭成员活动描述
【点评】
本题为英语基础写作题,聚焦现在进行时的实际运用,要求学生结合给定场景完成短文,考察语言组织和时态运用能力,是初中英语常见写作题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先审题明确要求:时间为晚上7:30,需用英语描述Tony一家此刻的活动,时态用现在进行时,人称第三人称,不得出现真实信息,词数80左右,开头已给出。解题思路:先确定各家庭成员的活动及对应地点,用现在进行时表达动作,最后用参考句型“How busy they are!”收尾,确保语句通顺、符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定时态:描述此刻正在进行的动作,采用现在进行时(结构:主语+am/is/are+现在分词);
2. 安排内容:分别写出Tony、祖父、父亲、母亲、姐妹的活动及所在地点,避免真实信息;
3. 衔接语句:用简单句串联内容,最后添加感叹句,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
It's 7: 30 p. m. Tony's family are doing different things. Tony is doing his homework in his room. Tony's grandfather is watching TV in the living room. Tony's father is reading a book in the living room too. Tony's mother is cleaning the room. Tony's sister Nancy is playing with a cat near her father in the living room. She thinks it is very interesting. How busy they are!
【知识点】
现在进行时,英语记叙文写作,家庭成员活动描述
【点评】
本题为英语基础写作题,聚焦现在进行时的实际运用,要求学生结合给定场景完成短文,考察语言组织和时态运用能力,是初中英语常见写作题型,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
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