鼓舞人心的人能给我们力量和启发,帮助我们成长。请以 “The Inspiring Person in My Life” 为题,根据以下提示与要求,用英语写一篇短文。
提示:
1. Who is the inspiring person in your life? (He / She can be a famous person, a relative, a teacher, etc. )
2. What qualities does he / she have? (bravery, selflessness, persistence, curiosity, etc. )
3. What inspired you the most? Talk about your feelings.
要求:
1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。
2. 不少于80词。
The Inspiring Person in My Life
提示:
1. Who is the inspiring person in your life? (He / She can be a famous person, a relative, a teacher, etc. )
2. What qualities does he / she have? (bravery, selflessness, persistence, curiosity, etc. )
3. What inspired you the most? Talk about your feelings.
要求:
1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。
2. 不少于80词。
The Inspiring Person in My Life
答案
The Inspiring Person in My Life
The most inspiring person in my life is my English teacher. She is a warm and patient person, and she has great persistence and full selfless love for every student.
I used to be very poor at English and nearly gave up learning it. She noticed my problem, and spent her spare time helping me build up my basic knowledge little by little. When I failed my exams and felt upset, she always encouraged me instead of blaming me.
It is her persistence and kindness that inspire me most. Now I become confident in English and can get good grades. I learn that if I keep working hard and never give up when meeting difficulties, I can finally make my dream come true.
The most inspiring person in my life is my English teacher. She is a warm and patient person, and she has great persistence and full selfless love for every student.
I used to be very poor at English and nearly gave up learning it. She noticed my problem, and spent her spare time helping me build up my basic knowledge little by little. When I failed my exams and felt upset, she always encouraged me instead of blaming me.
It is her persistence and kindness that inspire me most. Now I become confident in English and can get good grades. I learn that if I keep working hard and never give up when meeting difficulties, I can finally make my dream come true.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“The Inspiring Person in My Life”为题写英语短文,需紧扣三个提示要点:确定鼓舞人心的人物、描述其品质、阐述最受启发的内容与感受,同时要避免真实信息、满足词数要求。解题思路为:选取贴近自身生活的人物(如老师),围绕人物品质结合具体事例展开,最后点明人物带来的启发,确保结构清晰、内容完整。
【解析】
第一步:确定写作对象为英语老师,明确其品质为耐心、坚持、无私;第二步:结合具体事例,讲述自己曾英语薄弱,老师利用课余时间帮自己补基础、考试失利时鼓励自己;第三步:点明受启发的点,即学会遇到困难不放弃,最终实现目标;第四步:确保语言通顺,无真实信息,词数达标。
【答案】
The Inspiring Person in My Life
The most inspiring person in my life is my English teacher. She is a warm and patient person, and she has great persistence and full selfless love for every student.
I used to be very poor at English and nearly gave up learning it. She noticed my problem, and spent her spare time helping me build up my basic knowledge little by little. When I failed my exams and felt upset, she always encouraged me instead of blaming me.
It is her persistence and kindness that inspire me most. Now I become confident in English and can get good grades. I learn that if I keep working hard and never give up when meeting difficulties, I can finally make my dream come true.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、人物品质描述、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,要点齐全,选取贴近学生生活的人物,通过具体事例体现人物的优秀品质,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合词数要求,是一篇合格的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“The Inspiring Person in My Life”为题写英语短文,需紧扣三个提示要点:确定鼓舞人心的人物、描述其品质、阐述最受启发的内容与感受,同时要避免真实信息、满足词数要求。解题思路为:选取贴近自身生活的人物(如老师),围绕人物品质结合具体事例展开,最后点明人物带来的启发,确保结构清晰、内容完整。
【解析】
第一步:确定写作对象为英语老师,明确其品质为耐心、坚持、无私;第二步:结合具体事例,讲述自己曾英语薄弱,老师利用课余时间帮自己补基础、考试失利时鼓励自己;第三步:点明受启发的点,即学会遇到困难不放弃,最终实现目标;第四步:确保语言通顺,无真实信息,词数达标。
【答案】
The Inspiring Person in My Life
The most inspiring person in my life is my English teacher. She is a warm and patient person, and she has great persistence and full selfless love for every student.
I used to be very poor at English and nearly gave up learning it. She noticed my problem, and spent her spare time helping me build up my basic knowledge little by little. When I failed my exams and felt upset, she always encouraged me instead of blaming me.
It is her persistence and kindness that inspire me most. Now I become confident in English and can get good grades. I learn that if I keep working hard and never give up when meeting difficulties, I can finally make my dream come true.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、人物品质描述、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,要点齐全,选取贴近学生生活的人物,通过具体事例体现人物的优秀品质,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合词数要求,是一篇合格的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
一、词汇储备
1. 无私的
2. 坚持不懈的
3. 勇敢的
4. 充满好奇心的
5. 有智慧的
6. 致力于
7. 取得成就
8. 克服困难
9. 树立榜样
10. 受到启发
1. 无私的
selfless
2. 坚持不懈的
persistent
3. 勇敢的
brave
4. 充满好奇心的
curious
5. 有智慧的
wise
6. 致力于
devote oneself to
7. 取得成就
make achievements
8. 克服困难
overcome difficulties
9. 树立榜样
set an example
10. 受到启发
be inspired
答案
1. selfless
2. persistent
3. brave
4. curious
5. wise
6. devote oneself to
7. make achievements
8. overcome difficulties
9. set an example
10. be inspired
2. persistent
3. brave
4. curious
5. wise
6. devote oneself to
7. make achievements
8. overcome difficulties
9. set an example
10. be inspired
解析
【分析】本题是汉译英的词汇与短语匹配题,需运用所学的英语基础词汇及固定搭配,将每个中文含义准确转换为对应的英文表达,逐一对应完成即可。
【解析】1. “无私的”对应的英文形容词为selfless;2. “坚持不懈的”对应的英文形容词为persistent;3. “勇敢的”对应的英文形容词为brave;4. “充满好奇心的”对应的英文形容词为curious;5. “有智慧的”对应的英文形容词为wise;6. “致力于”是固定短语,英文为devote oneself to;7. “取得成就”对应的英文短语为make achievements;8. “克服困难”对应的英文短语为overcome difficulties;9. “树立榜样”对应的英文短语为set an example;10. “受到启发”对应的英文短语为be inspired。
【答案】1. selfless;2. persistent;3. brave;4. curious;5. wise;6. devote oneself to;7. make achievements;8. overcome difficulties;9. set an example;10. be inspired
【知识点】英语词汇、固定短语
【点评】本题考查英语基础词汇与常用短语的汉译英,属于英语学习的基础内容,难度较低,主要用于巩固词汇储备。
【难度系数】0.9
【解析】1. “无私的”对应的英文形容词为selfless;2. “坚持不懈的”对应的英文形容词为persistent;3. “勇敢的”对应的英文形容词为brave;4. “充满好奇心的”对应的英文形容词为curious;5. “有智慧的”对应的英文形容词为wise;6. “致力于”是固定短语,英文为devote oneself to;7. “取得成就”对应的英文短语为make achievements;8. “克服困难”对应的英文短语为overcome difficulties;9. “树立榜样”对应的英文短语为set an example;10. “受到启发”对应的英文短语为be inspired。
【答案】1. selfless;2. persistent;3. brave;4. curious;5. wise;6. devote oneself to;7. make achievements;8. overcome difficulties;9. set an example;10. be inspired
【知识点】英语词汇、固定短语
【点评】本题考查英语基础词汇与常用短语的汉译英,属于英语学习的基础内容,难度较低,主要用于巩固词汇储备。
【难度系数】0.9
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