经典例题
请根据以下信息,以“The seasons of the year”为题,写一篇英语短文。

【要求】1.不要写成诗歌,词数90左右。
2.不要遗漏任何要点,句子表达正确,行文连贯。
请根据以下信息,以“The seasons of the year”为题,写一篇英语短文。
【要求】1.不要写成诗歌,词数90左右。
2.不要遗漏任何要点,句子表达正确,行文连贯。
答案
The seasons of the year
There are four different seasons in a year.
Spring is sunny and windy. People love to fly kites in the open, and bees and butterflies fly happily among the flowers.
Summer is very hot. We can go swimming to relax, and eating ice cream is also a great way to cool down.
When autumn arrives, all the tree leaves turn yellow, and farmers have a great harvest in their fields.
Winter is cold. We need to wear thick clothes to keep warm, and it is great fun to make snowmen on snowy days.
There are four different seasons in a year.
Spring is sunny and windy. People love to fly kites in the open, and bees and butterflies fly happily among the flowers.
Summer is very hot. We can go swimming to relax, and eating ice cream is also a great way to cool down.
When autumn arrives, all the tree leaves turn yellow, and farmers have a great harvest in their fields.
Winter is cold. We need to wear thick clothes to keep warm, and it is great fun to make snowmen on snowy days.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语话题写作题,主题为“The seasons of the year”。解题思路:1. 先总述一年有四个季节,引出核心内容;2. 按照表格中春、夏、秋、冬的顺序,对应每个季节的特点(如春季晴朗多风、夏季炎热等)和相关活动(如春季放风筝、夏季游泳等)组织内容;3. 确保不遗漏表格要点,句子表达准确、行文连贯,词数控制在90左右。
【解析】
写作步骤:①开头点明主题,说明一年有四个不同季节;②依次介绍每个季节:春季描述晴朗多风,人们放风筝,蜜蜂蝴蝶在花丛飞舞;夏季描述炎热,游泳和吃冰激凌;秋季描述树叶变黄,农民丰收;冬季描述寒冷,穿厚衣服保暖,堆雪人;③检查内容是否覆盖所有要点,语句通顺,符合词数要求。
【答案】
The seasons of the year
There are four different seasons in a year.
Spring is sunny and windy. People love to fly kites in the open, and bees and butterflies fly happily among the flowers.
Summer is very hot. We can go swimming to relax, and eating ice cream is also a great way to cool down.
When autumn arrives, all the tree leaves turn yellow, and farmers have a great harvest in their fields.
Winter is cold. We need to wear thick clothes to keep warm, and it is great fun to make snowmen on snowy days.
【知识点】
英语话题写作;季节相关词汇
【点评】
短文紧扣主题,完整覆盖表格所有要点,行文连贯、语句通顺,符合词数要求,是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语话题写作题,主题为“The seasons of the year”。解题思路:1. 先总述一年有四个季节,引出核心内容;2. 按照表格中春、夏、秋、冬的顺序,对应每个季节的特点(如春季晴朗多风、夏季炎热等)和相关活动(如春季放风筝、夏季游泳等)组织内容;3. 确保不遗漏表格要点,句子表达准确、行文连贯,词数控制在90左右。
【解析】
写作步骤:①开头点明主题,说明一年有四个不同季节;②依次介绍每个季节:春季描述晴朗多风,人们放风筝,蜜蜂蝴蝶在花丛飞舞;夏季描述炎热,游泳和吃冰激凌;秋季描述树叶变黄,农民丰收;冬季描述寒冷,穿厚衣服保暖,堆雪人;③检查内容是否覆盖所有要点,语句通顺,符合词数要求。
【答案】
The seasons of the year
There are four different seasons in a year.
Spring is sunny and windy. People love to fly kites in the open, and bees and butterflies fly happily among the flowers.
Summer is very hot. We can go swimming to relax, and eating ice cream is also a great way to cool down.
When autumn arrives, all the tree leaves turn yellow, and farmers have a great harvest in their fields.
Winter is cold. We need to wear thick clothes to keep warm, and it is great fun to make snowmen on snowy days.
【知识点】
英语话题写作;季节相关词汇
【点评】
短文紧扣主题,完整覆盖表格所有要点,行文连贯、语句通顺,符合词数要求,是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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