写作练兵
航天梦，中国梦。航天梦的背后，是无数科研人员日夜兼程的奋斗。假如你是李华，你校在英语节期间将举办一场主题为“My space dream”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列要点写一篇词数100左右的演讲稿，谈谈你为实现航天梦将做何准备。
写作要点：
1. What do you think of flying to the moon?
2. What are you going to do? Why?
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua.








Thanks for your listening!

Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm glad to stand here to give a speech about my space dream.
When I was a child, a thought of traveling in space appeared in my heart. I know becoming an astronaut is not easy, but I will still try my best to achieve it. Space life is full of danger. Only with enough knowledge can I have the confidence and ability to face the unknown environment in space. So I am going to study hard and get more knowledge about space. In addition, I am going to take more exercise to get a stronger body. Unless I have a healthy body, it is impossible for me to get to the space station. There is an old saying that goes "Everything comes to him who waits. "I believe that with my continuous efforts, my dream will come true one day.
Thanks for your listening!

【分析】本题要求以李华的身份参加英语节“My space dream”主题英语演讲比赛，需围绕两个指定要点写作：一是表达对登月的看法，二是说明为实现航天梦的准备及原因。解题思路：① 开头遵循演讲稿格式，问候并点明演讲主题；② 回应第一个要点，结合自身感受（如儿时的航天想法）表达对登月的向往，明确登月是航天梦的重要部分；③ 回应第二个要点，分两点阐述准备内容及对应原因：努力学习太空知识（原因：应对太空未知环境）、坚持锻炼（原因：宇航员需要强健体魄）；④ 结尾用简洁表达升华主题，呼应梦想，控制词数在100左右，符合要求。
【解析】按照演讲稿结构依次写作：
1. 开头：Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm glad to stand here to give a speech about my space dream.
2. 阐述对登月的看法：When I was a child, a thought of traveling in space appeared in my heart. I know becoming an astronaut is not easy, but I will still try my best to achieve it.
3. 说明准备及原因：Space life is full of danger. Only with enough knowledge can I have the confidence and ability to face the unknown environment in space. So I am going to study hard and get more knowledge about space. In addition, I am going to take more exercise to get a stronger body. Unless I have a healthy body, it is impossible for me to get to the space station.
4. 结尾：There is an old saying that goes "Everything comes to him who waits. "I believe that with my continuous efforts, my dream will come true one day. Thanks for your listening!
【答案】Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm glad to stand here to give a speech about my space dream.
When I was a child, a thought of traveling in space appeared in my heart. I know becoming an astronaut is not easy, but I will still try my best to achieve it. Space life is full of danger. Only with enough knowledge can I have the confidence and ability to face the unknown environment in space. So I am going to study hard and get more knowledge about space. In addition, I am going to take more exercise to get a stronger body. Unless I have a healthy body, it is impossible for me to get to the space station. There is an old saying that goes "Everything comes to him who waits. "I believe that with my continuous efforts, my dream will come true one day.
Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】英语演讲稿写作；话题作文（航天梦）
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰（开头引入-主体阐述-结尾升华），语言流畅自然，符合演讲稿的语气要求，词数符合100左右的要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.5