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Ⅳ. Think and write.
Your school forum wants students to share their friendship stories. Write a short post about you and a friend.
• Are you and your friend similar or different?
• What happened between you and your friend?
• What did you learn about friendship?
Your school forum wants students to share their friendship stories. Write a short post about you and a friend.
• Are you and your friend similar or different?
• What happened between you and your friend?
• What did you learn about friendship?
答案
One possible version:
My best friend and I are different in some ways, but we still support each other. She is quieter, while I am more outgoing. Once, we wanted to do different things after school. I wanted to play basketball, but she preferred to read in the library. At first, we were both unhappy. However, after talking with each other, we found a way to make us both satisfied. From this experience, I learnt that good friends do not always have to be the same. Although differences may sometimes cause problems, they can also make friendship more meaningful and help us grow.
My best friend and I are different in some ways, but we still support each other. She is quieter, while I am more outgoing. Once, we wanted to do different things after school. I wanted to play basketball, but she preferred to read in the library. At first, we were both unhappy. However, after talking with each other, we found a way to make us both satisfied. From this experience, I learnt that good friends do not always have to be the same. Although differences may sometimes cause problems, they can also make friendship more meaningful and help us grow.
解析
【分析】
本题要求为学校论坛撰写一篇关于友谊的短帖，需覆盖三个核心要求：①说明自己与朋友是相似还是不同；②列举和朋友之间发生的具体事件；③点明从事件中获得的关于友谊的感悟。解题思路为：先确定朋友与自身的差异点，再构思具体的生活化事件（如因兴趣分歧产生小矛盾后沟通解决的例子），最后提炼出贴合主题的友谊道理，确保内容紧扣要求、逻辑连贯、语言自然。
【解析】
按照题目要求，先明确自己与朋友的差异（性格、兴趣不同），再举例具体事件（放学后因想做的事不同产生不愉快，经沟通找到双方都满意的解决方式），最后总结关于友谊的感悟（朋友不必完全相同，差异能让友谊更有意义、促进成长），形成符合论坛风格的短帖，内容完整覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
One possible version: My best friend and I are different in some ways, but we still support each other. She is quieter, while I am more outgoing. Once, we wanted to do different things after school. I wanted to play basketball, but she preferred to read in the library. At first, we were both unhappy. However, after talking with each other, we found a way to make us both satisfied. From this experience, I learnt that good friends do not always have to be the same. Although differences may sometimes cause problems, they can also make friendship more meaningful and help us grow.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、友谊主题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要求，完整覆盖三个要点，逻辑清晰，语言流畅自然，符合学校论坛帖子的写作风格，准确传递了关于友谊的感悟，是一篇优质的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求为学校论坛撰写一篇关于友谊的短帖，需覆盖三个核心要求：①说明自己与朋友是相似还是不同；②列举和朋友之间发生的具体事件；③点明从事件中获得的关于友谊的感悟。解题思路为：先确定朋友与自身的差异点，再构思具体的生活化事件（如因兴趣分歧产生小矛盾后沟通解决的例子），最后提炼出贴合主题的友谊道理，确保内容紧扣要求、逻辑连贯、语言自然。
【解析】
按照题目要求，先明确自己与朋友的差异（性格、兴趣不同），再举例具体事件（放学后因想做的事不同产生不愉快，经沟通找到双方都满意的解决方式），最后总结关于友谊的感悟（朋友不必完全相同，差异能让友谊更有意义、促进成长），形成符合论坛风格的短帖，内容完整覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
One possible version: My best friend and I are different in some ways, but we still support each other. She is quieter, while I am more outgoing. Once, we wanted to do different things after school. I wanted to play basketball, but she preferred to read in the library. At first, we were both unhappy. However, after talking with each other, we found a way to make us both satisfied. From this experience, I learnt that good friends do not always have to be the same. Although differences may sometimes cause problems, they can also make friendship more meaningful and help us grow.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、友谊主题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要求，完整覆盖三个要点，逻辑清晰，语言流畅自然，符合学校论坛帖子的写作风格，准确传递了关于友谊的感悟，是一篇优质的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
