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Ⅶ. 书面表达。
学校将在五一劳动节开展“最美劳动家庭”评选。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己家周末的劳动情况，包括你家周末劳动分工、家人劳动时的互动和感受以及劳动给家庭带来的变化或意义等。
要求：
1. 语意连贯，内容完整，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3. 词数80词左右。
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁：
时态：
人称：
二、思路点拨。
三、写作要点和词汇联想
1. 打扫房间
2. 扫地
3. 悬挂照片
4. 做午餐
5. 给植物浇水
四、句型提示。
1. 上周日，我和家人进行了一次大扫除。
Last Sunday, my family and I (have) a big cleaning.
2. 上午，我整理了房间并扫了地。
In the morning, I (tidy) my
学校将在五一劳动节开展“最美劳动家庭”评选。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己家周末的劳动情况，包括你家周末劳动分工、家人劳动时的互动和感受以及劳动给家庭带来的变化或意义等。
要求：
1. 语意连贯，内容完整，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3. 词数80词左右。
【写作指导】
一、审题
体裁：
时态：
人称：
二、思路点拨。
三、写作要点和词汇联想
1. 打扫房间
2. 扫地
3. 悬挂照片
4. 做午餐
5. 给植物浇水
四、句型提示。
1. 上周日，我和家人进行了一次大扫除。
Last Sunday, my family and I (have) a big cleaning.
2. 上午，我整理了房间并扫了地。
In the morning, I (tidy) my
答案
【解析】：
1. 审题指导：
体裁：介绍家庭周末劳动情况的记叙文
时态：以一般过去时为主，描述已发生的劳动行为，表达劳动意义可搭配一般现在时
人称：第一人称
2. 核心短语对应：给出题目要求的劳动相关常用英文表达，符合八年级词汇范围
3. 语法提示：两个句型句都指向过去发生的动作，谓语动词需要使用对应的动词过去式变形
4. 写作逻辑：按照"引入大扫除主题→介绍家人分工+劳动时的互动感受→点明劳动的意义"的结构展开，控制词数在80左右，符合题目所有要求。
【答案】：
一、审题答案：
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般过去时（为主）
人称：第一人称
二、写作要点词汇答案：
1. clean the room
2. sweep the floor
3. put up the photos
4. cook/make lunch
5. water the plants
三、句型提示答案：
1. had
2. tidied
参考范文：
Last Sunday, my family and I had a big cleaning. In the morning, I tidied my bedroom and swept the floor. My father cleaned the windows and put up our family photos on the wall. My mother cooked delicious lunch and watered the plants. We talked and laughed while working, and we felt very happy. After the work, our home became warm and tidy. Sharing housework makes our family much closer.
1. 审题指导：
体裁：介绍家庭周末劳动情况的记叙文
时态：以一般过去时为主，描述已发生的劳动行为，表达劳动意义可搭配一般现在时
人称：第一人称
2. 核心短语对应：给出题目要求的劳动相关常用英文表达，符合八年级词汇范围
3. 语法提示：两个句型句都指向过去发生的动作，谓语动词需要使用对应的动词过去式变形
4. 写作逻辑：按照"引入大扫除主题→介绍家人分工+劳动时的互动感受→点明劳动的意义"的结构展开，控制词数在80左右，符合题目所有要求。
【答案】：
一、审题答案：
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般过去时（为主）
人称：第一人称
二、写作要点词汇答案：
1. clean the room
2. sweep the floor
3. put up the photos
4. cook/make lunch
5. water the plants
三、句型提示答案：
1. had
2. tidied
参考范文：
Last Sunday, my family and I had a big cleaning. In the morning, I tidied my bedroom and swept the floor. My father cleaned the windows and put up our family photos on the wall. My mother cooked delicious lunch and watered the plants. We talked and laughed while working, and we felt very happy. After the work, our home became warm and tidy. Sharing housework makes our family much closer.
解析
【分析】
先明确题目要求是写一篇介绍家庭周末劳动情况的英语短文，需先审题确定体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，人称用第一人称；再依据思维导图的结构，写作时要包含开头引入大扫除主题，正文介绍家庭劳动分工、劳动时的互动和感受，结尾点明劳动的意义；同时要正确运用给定的劳动相关短语，注意动词过去式的变形，控制词数在80左右，不出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
1. 审题指导：体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，人称用第一人称；2. 核心短语对应：打扫房间对应clean the room，扫地对应sweep the floor，悬挂照片对应put up the photos，做午餐对应cook/make lunch，给植物浇水对应water the plants；3. 语法提示：句型中的动词需用过去式，have的过去式是had，tidy的过去式是tidied；4. 写作逻辑：按照“引入大扫除主题→介绍家人分工+劳动互动感受→点明劳动意义”的结构展开，确保内容完整、语意连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
一、审题答案：体裁：记叙文；时态：一般过去时（为主）；人称：第一人称；二、写作要点词汇答案：1. clean the room；2. sweep the floor；3. put up the photos；4. cook/make lunch；5. water the plants；三、句型提示答案：1. had；2. tidied；参考范文：Last Sunday, my family and I had a big cleaning. In the morning, I tidied my bedroom and swept the floor. My father cleaned the windows and put up our family photos on the wall. My mother cooked delicious lunch and watered the plants. We talked and laughed while working, and we felt very happy. After the work, our home became warm and tidy. Sharing housework makes our family much closer.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去式、常用动词短语
【点评】
本题结合劳动主题考察英语写作，贴近学生生活，要求根据给定结构完成短文，既考察词汇短语的运用，也考察语法和篇章结构，难度适中，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
先明确题目要求是写一篇介绍家庭周末劳动情况的英语短文，需先审题确定体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，人称用第一人称；再依据思维导图的结构，写作时要包含开头引入大扫除主题，正文介绍家庭劳动分工、劳动时的互动和感受，结尾点明劳动的意义；同时要正确运用给定的劳动相关短语，注意动词过去式的变形，控制词数在80左右，不出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
1. 审题指导：体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，人称用第一人称；2. 核心短语对应：打扫房间对应clean the room，扫地对应sweep the floor，悬挂照片对应put up the photos，做午餐对应cook/make lunch，给植物浇水对应water the plants；3. 语法提示：句型中的动词需用过去式，have的过去式是had，tidy的过去式是tidied；4. 写作逻辑：按照“引入大扫除主题→介绍家人分工+劳动互动感受→点明劳动意义”的结构展开，确保内容完整、语意连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
一、审题答案：体裁：记叙文；时态：一般过去时（为主）；人称：第一人称；二、写作要点词汇答案：1. clean the room；2. sweep the floor；3. put up the photos；4. cook/make lunch；5. water the plants；三、句型提示答案：1. had；2. tidied；参考范文：Last Sunday, my family and I had a big cleaning. In the morning, I tidied my bedroom and swept the floor. My father cleaned the windows and put up our family photos on the wall. My mother cooked delicious lunch and watered the plants. We talked and laughed while working, and we felt very happy. After the work, our home became warm and tidy. Sharing housework makes our family much closer.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去式、常用动词短语
【点评】
本题结合劳动主题考察英语写作，贴近学生生活，要求根据给定结构完成短文，既考察词汇短语的运用，也考察语法和篇章结构，难度适中，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
room and
3. 爸爸帮助我在墙上挂了一些照片。
My father
4. 妈妈做了一顿美味的午餐，包括番茄炒蛋。
My mother
5. 下午，我们一起给植物浇水。
In the afternoon, we
6. 我觉得和家人一起劳动让我们的家更美了。
I
【写作练习】
Last Sunday, my family and I got the whole house cleaned up.
I love my home because it is full of warmth and teamwork.
swept
(sweep) the floor.3. 爸爸帮助我在墙上挂了一些照片。
My father
helped
(help) me hang
(hang) some photos on the wall.4. 妈妈做了一顿美味的午餐，包括番茄炒蛋。
My mother
cooked
(cook) a delicious lunch, including
(include) stir-fried tomato and egg.5. 下午，我们一起给植物浇水。
In the afternoon, we
watered
(water) the plants together.6. 我觉得和家人一起劳动让我们的家更美了。
I
felt
(feel) that working with my family made
(make) our home more beautiful.【写作练习】
Last Sunday, my family and I got the whole house cleaned up.
In the morning, I tidied my room and swept the floor.
My father helped me hang some photos on the wall, which made my room more beautiful.
My mother cooked a delicious lunch, including tomato and egg stir-fry.
We enjoyed the meal together.
In the afternoon, we watered the plants in our garden. While working, we talked and laughed.
My father also shared funny stories with us. It was great fun!
I felt that working with my family made our home more beautiful.
I love my home because it is full of warmth and teamwork.
答案
2. tidied; swept
3. helped; hang
4. cooked; including
5. watered
6. felt; made
In the morning, I tidied my room and swept the floor. My father helped me hang some photos on the wall, which made my room more beautiful. My mother cooked a delicious lunch, including tomato and egg stir-fry. We enjoyed the meal together. In the afternoon, we watered the plants in our garden. While working, we talked and laughed. My father also shared funny stories with us. It was great fun! I felt that working with my family made our home more beautiful.
I love my home because it is full of warmth and teamwork.
解析
【分析】
本题分为动词形式填空和写作续写两部分。动词填空需根据时间状语Last Sunday确定用一般过去式，同时掌握固定搭配和介词用法；写作续写要围绕“上周日家庭劳动”的主题，按时间顺序（早、中、晚）展开，使用一般过去式，保证内容连贯、符合逻辑。
【解析】
1. 动词填空：
2. 时间为Last Sunday，用一般过去式，tidy的过去式是tidied，sweep的过去式是swept，故填tidied; swept。
3. help的过去式是helped，固定搭配help sb (to) do sth，故填helped; hang。
4. cook的过去式是cooked，including作介词表“包括”，故填cooked; including。
5. water的过去式是watered，故填watered。
6. feel的过去式是felt，动名词短语作主语，谓语用make的过去式made，故填felt; made。
2. 写作续写：根据开头的家庭大扫除，按时间顺序补充早上整理房间、中午吃午饭、下午浇花的内容，加入家人互动，用一般过去式，贴合主题。
【答案】
2. tidied; swept
3. helped; hang
4. cooked; including
5. watered
6. felt; made
In the morning, I tidied my room and swept the floor. My father helped me hang some photos on the wall, which made my room more beautiful. My mother cooked a delicious lunch, including tomato and egg stir-fry. We enjoyed the meal together. In the afternoon, we watered the plants in our garden. While working, we talked and laughed. My father also shared funny stories with us. It was great fun! I felt that working with my family made our home more beautiful.
I love my home because it is full of warmth and teamwork.
【知识点】
一般过去时，动词过去式，英语写作
【点评】
本题结合语法基础与写作能力考查，主题贴近学生生活，既巩固了一般过去式的用法，又锻炼了英语表达的连贯性，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题分为动词形式填空和写作续写两部分。动词填空需根据时间状语Last Sunday确定用一般过去式，同时掌握固定搭配和介词用法；写作续写要围绕“上周日家庭劳动”的主题，按时间顺序（早、中、晚）展开，使用一般过去式，保证内容连贯、符合逻辑。
【解析】
1. 动词填空：
2. 时间为Last Sunday，用一般过去式，tidy的过去式是tidied，sweep的过去式是swept，故填tidied; swept。
3. help的过去式是helped，固定搭配help sb (to) do sth，故填helped; hang。
4. cook的过去式是cooked，including作介词表“包括”，故填cooked; including。
5. water的过去式是watered，故填watered。
6. feel的过去式是felt，动名词短语作主语，谓语用make的过去式made，故填felt; made。
2. 写作续写：根据开头的家庭大扫除，按时间顺序补充早上整理房间、中午吃午饭、下午浇花的内容，加入家人互动，用一般过去式，贴合主题。
【答案】
2. tidied; swept
3. helped; hang
4. cooked; including
5. watered
6. felt; made
In the morning, I tidied my room and swept the floor. My father helped me hang some photos on the wall, which made my room more beautiful. My mother cooked a delicious lunch, including tomato and egg stir-fry. We enjoyed the meal together. In the afternoon, we watered the plants in our garden. While working, we talked and laughed. My father also shared funny stories with us. It was great fun! I felt that working with my family made our home more beautiful.
I love my home because it is full of warmth and teamwork.
【知识点】
一般过去时，动词过去式，英语写作
【点评】
本题结合语法基础与写作能力考查，主题贴近学生生活，既巩固了一般过去式的用法，又锻炼了英语表达的连贯性，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
