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你现在的初中生活是怎样的？是不是有新颖的课程、有趣的活动、先进的设施和丰富多彩的社团活动？和小学生活又有什么不同呢？假如你是Ken，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，给Mary写一封回信。要求：词数60~70。参考词汇：club俱乐部。
审题指导 体裁：应用文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一人称
写作框架
优秀范文：
Dear Mary,
I’m glad to hear that you enjoy your school life ① very much. Now let me tell you something about ② my new school.
My school is big and beautiful. I like the school library best because I can read books there. ⑤ There are many interesting activities in my school, such as sports meetings and the science week. The life in junior high is different from ③ that in the primary school. We have more subjects to study, such as ④ chemistry and geography. And we can join many clubs, such as the swimming club and the music club.
I am looking forward to getting good grades in the new term. ⑥
Yours,
Ken
亮点词块
① enjoy one’s school life 享受校园生活
② tell sb about sth 告诉某人关于某事
③ different from 与……不同
④ such as 例如
高分句子
⑤ I like the school library best because I can read books there.（because 引导原因状语从句）我最喜欢学校图书馆，因为我可以在那里看书。
⑥ I am looking forward to getting good grades in the new term.（look forward to doing sth 是写作常用句型，表达期待）我期待在新学期取得好成绩。
你现在的初中生活是怎样的？是不是有新颖的课程、有趣的活动、先进的设施和丰富多彩的社团活动？和小学生活又有什么不同呢？假如你是Ken，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，给Mary写一封回信。要求：词数60~70。参考词汇：club俱乐部。
审题指导 体裁：应用文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一人称
写作框架
优秀范文：
Dear Mary,
I’m glad to hear that you enjoy your school life ① very much. Now let me tell you something about ② my new school.
My school is big and beautiful. I like the school library best because I can read books there. ⑤ There are many interesting activities in my school, such as sports meetings and the science week. The life in junior high is different from ③ that in the primary school. We have more subjects to study, such as ④ chemistry and geography. And we can join many clubs, such as the swimming club and the music club.
I am looking forward to getting good grades in the new term. ⑥
Yours,
Ken
亮点词块
① enjoy one’s school life 享受校园生活
② tell sb about sth 告诉某人关于某事
③ different from 与……不同
④ such as 例如
高分句子
⑤ I like the school library best because I can read books there.（because 引导原因状语从句）我最喜欢学校图书馆，因为我可以在那里看书。
⑥ I am looking forward to getting good grades in the new term.（look forward to doing sth 是写作常用句型，表达期待）我期待在新学期取得好成绩。
答案
Dear Mary,
I’m glad to hear that you enjoy your school life very much. Now let me tell you something about my new school.
My school is big and beautiful. I like the school library best because I can read books there. There are many interesting activities. The junior high life is different from primary school: we have more subjects and we can join many different clubs.
I am looking forward to getting good grades in the new term.
Yours,
Ken
I’m glad to hear that you enjoy your school life very much. Now let me tell you something about my new school.
My school is big and beautiful. I like the school library best because I can read books there. There are many interesting activities. The junior high life is different from primary school: we have more subjects and we can join many different clubs.
I am looking forward to getting good grades in the new term.
Yours,
Ken
解析
【分析】
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求以第一人称Ken的身份给Mary写回信介绍初中生活，需遵循书信格式，使用一般现在时，围绕学校环境、课程活动、社团等要点展开，运用指定亮点词块和高分句型，控制词数在60~70之间。
【解析】
1. 书信开头：用“Dear Mary,”问候，点明很高兴收到Mary的来信并引出介绍初中生活的主题；
2. 主体部分：描述学校外观（大且美丽）、最喜欢的图书馆（原因是能读书）、学校活动，说明初中与小学的不同（更多科目、可加入俱乐部）；
3. 结尾：表达对新学期取得好成绩的期待，最后用“Yours, Ken”署名，确保符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Mary,
I’m glad to hear that you enjoy your school life very much. Now let me tell you something about my new school.
My school is big and beautiful. I like the school library best because I can read books there. There are many interesting activities. The junior high life is different from primary school: we have more subjects and we can join many different clubs.
I am looking forward to getting good grades in the new term.
Yours,
Ken
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时、常用短语运用
【点评】
本题考查初中英语应用文写作能力，要求学生掌握书信格式，运用一般现在时介绍校园生活，结合提示要点完成内容，难度适中，注重基础表达的运用。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求以第一人称Ken的身份给Mary写回信介绍初中生活，需遵循书信格式，使用一般现在时，围绕学校环境、课程活动、社团等要点展开，运用指定亮点词块和高分句型，控制词数在60~70之间。
【解析】
1. 书信开头：用“Dear Mary,”问候，点明很高兴收到Mary的来信并引出介绍初中生活的主题；
2. 主体部分：描述学校外观（大且美丽）、最喜欢的图书馆（原因是能读书）、学校活动，说明初中与小学的不同（更多科目、可加入俱乐部）；
3. 结尾：表达对新学期取得好成绩的期待，最后用“Yours, Ken”署名，确保符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Mary,
I’m glad to hear that you enjoy your school life very much. Now let me tell you something about my new school.
My school is big and beautiful. I like the school library best because I can read books there. There are many interesting activities. The junior high life is different from primary school: we have more subjects and we can join many different clubs.
I am looking forward to getting good grades in the new term.
Yours,
Ken
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时、常用短语运用
【点评】
本题考查初中英语应用文写作能力，要求学生掌握书信格式，运用一般现在时介绍校园生活，结合提示要点完成内容，难度适中，注重基础表达的运用。
【难度系数】
0.5
