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新学期开始了,你所在的阳光中学英语俱乐部(English Club)正在招募新成员。假设你叫安娜(Anna),是一名新生,请根据以下信息,用英语写一封邮件申请加入该俱乐部,词数不少于60个。
English Club
Can you speak English? Do you want to speak it well? Come and join our English club. It is from 5:30 p.m. to 7:30 p.m. on Mondays, Fridays and Sundays. Please email Helen at 2356792helen@123.com.
新学期开始了,你所在的阳光中学英语俱乐部(English Club)正在招募新成员。假设你叫安娜(Anna),是一名新生,请根据以下信息,用英语写一封邮件申请加入该俱乐部,词数不少于60个。
English Club
Can you speak English? Do you want to speak it well? Come and join our English club. It is from 5:30 p.m. to 7:30 p.m. on Mondays, Fridays and Sundays. Please email Helen at 2356792helen@123.com.
答案
Dear Helen,
My name is Anna. I am a new student in Sunshine Middle School. I can speak a little English now, but I really want to speak English much better and make more friends who love English. I know the English club has activities from 5:30 p.m. to 7:30 p.m. on Mondays, Fridays and Sundays. I am free at those times, so I can join all the club activities on time. I really hope I can be a member of your English club. Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Anna
My name is Anna. I am a new student in Sunshine Middle School. I can speak a little English now, but I really want to speak English much better and make more friends who love English. I know the English club has activities from 5:30 p.m. to 7:30 p.m. on Mondays, Fridays and Sundays. I am free at those times, so I can join all the club activities on time. I really hope I can be a member of your English club. Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Anna
解析
这是一篇七年级水平的申请类英语邮件写作,写作时需要注意:1. 符合邮件基本格式,开篇称呼收件人Helen,结尾落款自己的名字Anna;2. 覆盖全部核心要点:自我介绍是阳光中学新生Anna,说明自身的英语能力、想要提升英语口语的诉求,确认自己可以在俱乐部的活动时段(周一、周五、周日下午5:30到7:30)按时参加活动,礼貌表达加入俱乐部的申请和期待;3. 使用七年级已学的简单句式,避免超纲词汇,保证词数达标,语句通顺连贯。
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