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One earth, one home
The yearly English Writing Competition is coming. You can write an article with the title “One earth, one home”.
You can write about: the problems wild animals are facing; the importance of protecting wild animals; the things students can do; ...
The closing date: 10 February 2025
Your article should be sent to englishwritings@126.com.
注意：1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
One earth, one home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
One earth, one home
The yearly English Writing Competition is coming. You can write an article with the title “One earth, one home”.
You can write about: the problems wild animals are facing; the importance of protecting wild animals; the things students can do; ...
The closing date: 10 February 2025
Your article should be sent to englishwritings@126.com.
注意：1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
One earth, one home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
People cut down trees for money. They also hunt animals for fur or bones. So many animals are in danger. It’s time for us to save the earth and wild animals. We should protect our earth and animals. This will make the earth comfortable for us and peaceful for animals. If we don’t, things will get worse and worse. First, we can be volunteers and start with small things. What’s more, we shouldn’t buy things like fur coats any more. Lastly, we should teach others to protect the earth and love animals. Let’s work together to make a better home for all the living things on this planet.
答案
Sample writing:
One earth, one home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. People cut down trees for money. They also hunt animals for fur or bones. So many animals are in danger. It’s time for us to save the earth and wild animals. We should protect our earth and animals. This will make the earth comfortable for us and peaceful for animals. If we don’t, things will get worse and worse.
First, we can be volunteers and start with small things. What’s more, we shouldn’t buy things like fur coats any more. Lastly, we should teach others to protect the earth and love animals.
Let’s work together to make a better home for all the living things on this planet.
One earth, one home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. People cut down trees for money. They also hunt animals for fur or bones. So many animals are in danger. It’s time for us to save the earth and wild animals. We should protect our earth and animals. This will make the earth comfortable for us and peaceful for animals. If we don’t, things will get worse and worse.
First, we can be volunteers and start with small things. What’s more, we shouldn’t buy things like fur coats any more. Lastly, we should teach others to protect the earth and love animals.
Let’s work together to make a better home for all the living things on this planet.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需以“One earth, one home”为题写英语作文，要涵盖野生动物面临的问题、保护野生动物的重要性、学生能做的事三个要点，词数80左右（开头不计），不得提及个人身份信息，同时符合竞赛提交要求。解题思路：先承接给定开头，具体说明野生动物面临的问题，接着阐述保护的重要性，再列举学生力所能及的行动，最后发出呼吁，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】写作时，第一步承接开头，具体写野生动物面临的问题：人类砍树破坏栖息地，为利益捕猎导致动物濒危；第二步说明保护的重要性：保护动物就是保护地球与人类自身；第三步列举学生能做的事：做志愿者、拒绝购买皮毛制品、宣传保护理念；第四步结尾呼吁共同行动，保证内容连贯，符合词数要求，不涉及个人信息。
【答案】One earth, one home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. People cut down trees for money. They also hunt animals for fur or bones. So many animals are in danger. It’s time for us to save the earth and wild animals. We should protect our earth and animals. This will make the earth comfortable for us and peaceful for animals. If we don’t, things will get worse and worse.
First, we can be volunteers and start with small things. What’s more, we shouldn’t buy things like fur coats any more. Lastly, we should teach others to protect the earth and love animals.
Let’s work together to make a better home for all the living things on this planet.
【知识点】英语书面表达、环境保护话题写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇符合竞赛要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时，第一步承接开头，具体写野生动物面临的问题：人类砍树破坏栖息地，为利益捕猎导致动物濒危；第二步说明保护的重要性：保护动物就是保护地球与人类自身；第三步列举学生能做的事：做志愿者、拒绝购买皮毛制品、宣传保护理念；第四步结尾呼吁共同行动，保证内容连贯，符合词数要求，不涉及个人信息。
【答案】One earth, one home
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. People cut down trees for money. They also hunt animals for fur or bones. So many animals are in danger. It’s time for us to save the earth and wild animals. We should protect our earth and animals. This will make the earth comfortable for us and peaceful for animals. If we don’t, things will get worse and worse.
First, we can be volunteers and start with small things. What’s more, we shouldn’t buy things like fur coats any more. Lastly, we should teach others to protect the earth and love animals.
Let’s work together to make a better home for all the living things on this planet.
【知识点】英语书面表达、环境保护话题写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇符合竞赛要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
