任务情境
你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以“Giving Pandas a Good Life”为题的英文手抄报评选活动。你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制,而你负责文本的撰写。请根据以下提示,完成一篇介绍大熊猫的英语短文。

要求:
1. 短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数80左右。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称、第三人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:

素材积累
1. 主题词块
①……的象征
②拿起;举起
③互相
④照顾
⑤处于危险之中
⑥砍伐;减少
⑦太多
⑧由……制成的
⑨相当;非常
⑩一点也不;完全不
2. 句型仿写
①I love elephants because they are strong and clever. (教材p.6 1b)
句型:because引导的原因状语从句
仿写:因为人们砍伐了太多的树木,所以它们正处于极大的危险之中。
②Let's save the forests and not buy things made of ivory. (教材p.6 1b)
句型:Let's do ...
仿写:让我们一起行动,为大熊猫创造一个美丽的家园。
连句成篇
你和你的同桌正在参加学校举办的以“Giving Pandas a Good Life”为题的英文手抄报评选活动。你的同桌负责手抄报的绘制,而你负责文本的撰写。请根据以下提示,完成一篇介绍大熊猫的英语短文。
要求:
1. 短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数80左右。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称、第三人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①……的象征
②拿起;举起
③互相
④照顾
⑤处于危险之中
⑥砍伐;减少
⑦太多
⑧由……制成的
⑨相当;非常
⑩一点也不;完全不
2. 句型仿写
①I love elephants because they are strong and clever. (教材p.6 1b)
句型:because引导的原因状语从句
仿写:因为人们砍伐了太多的树木,所以它们正处于极大的危险之中。
②Let's save the forests and not buy things made of ivory. (教材p.6 1b)
句型:Let's do ...
仿写:让我们一起行动,为大熊猫创造一个美丽的家园。
连句成篇
答案
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①a symbol of ②pick up
③one another / each other
④take care of / look after ⑤in danger
⑥cut down ⑦too many ⑧made of
⑨quite a ⑩not ... at all
2. 句型仿写
①They are in great danger because people
cut down too many trees.
②Let's act together to make a beautiful
home for pandas.
【连句成篇】
Giving Pandas a Good Life
What animal wears a black and white
coat? Yes, it's the panda! Pandas are cute
and shy. They are also friendly to people.
They like eating bamboo and sleeping.
It is known that pandas are in danger
because people cut down too many trees.
What's worse, they die of illness easily.
I hope the government can build more
nature panda homes. Also, it is necessary
that everyone should treat them as our
friends and protect their homes. Let's act
together to make a beautiful home for pandas.
1. 主题词块
①a symbol of ②pick up
③one another / each other
④take care of / look after ⑤in danger
⑥cut down ⑦too many ⑧made of
⑨quite a ⑩not ... at all
2. 句型仿写
①They are in great danger because people
cut down too many trees.
②Let's act together to make a beautiful
home for pandas.
【连句成篇】
Giving Pandas a Good Life
What animal wears a black and white
coat? Yes, it's the panda! Pandas are cute
and shy. They are also friendly to people.
They like eating bamboo and sleeping.
It is known that pandas are in danger
because people cut down too many trees.
What's worse, they die of illness easily.
I hope the government can build more
nature panda homes. Also, it is necessary
that everyone should treat them as our
friends and protect their homes. Let's act
together to make a beautiful home for pandas.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语写作题,要求围绕“Giving Pandas a Good Life”主题撰写介绍大熊猫的短文,需涵盖给定素材的核心词汇与句型,使用一般现在时,人称结合第一、第三人称,词数约80,不得出现真实人名、校名。解题思路:先掌握素材中主题词块的英文对应,再仿写指定句型,最后按“引出大熊猫→介绍特征→说明现状→提出保护呼吁”的逻辑整合内容,形成连贯短文。
【解析】
1. 主题词块对应:①a symbol of ②pick up ③one another/each other ④take care of/look after ⑤in danger ⑥cut down ⑦too many ⑧made of ⑨quite a ⑩not ... at all;
2. 句型仿写:①They are in great danger because people cut down too many trees. ②Let's act together to make a beautiful home for pandas.;
3. 连句成篇:按逻辑顺序组织内容,先引出大熊猫的特征,再说明其濒危现状及原因,最后提出保护呼吁,形成完整短文。
【答案】
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①a symbol of ②pick up
③one another / each other
④take care of / look after ⑤in danger
⑥cut down ⑦too many ⑧made of
⑨quite a ⑩not ... at all
2. 句型仿写
①They are in great danger because people cut down too many trees.
②Let's act together to make a beautiful home for pandas.
【连句成篇】
Giving Pandas a Good Life
What animal wears a black and white coat? Yes, it's the panda! Pandas are cute and shy. They are also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo and sleeping. It is known that pandas are in danger because people cut down too many trees. What's worse, they die of illness easily. I hope the government can build more nature panda homes. Also, it is necessary that everyone should treat them as our friends and protect their homes. Let's act together to make a beautiful home for pandas.
【知识点】
英语写作;英语常用短语;英语句型运用
【点评】
本题围绕保护大熊猫的主题,考察学生对核心词汇、句型的掌握及篇章组织能力,要求内容完整、语言通顺,符合初中英语写作的基础要求,能引导学生关注动物保护。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语写作题,要求围绕“Giving Pandas a Good Life”主题撰写介绍大熊猫的短文,需涵盖给定素材的核心词汇与句型,使用一般现在时,人称结合第一、第三人称,词数约80,不得出现真实人名、校名。解题思路:先掌握素材中主题词块的英文对应,再仿写指定句型,最后按“引出大熊猫→介绍特征→说明现状→提出保护呼吁”的逻辑整合内容,形成连贯短文。
【解析】
1. 主题词块对应:①a symbol of ②pick up ③one another/each other ④take care of/look after ⑤in danger ⑥cut down ⑦too many ⑧made of ⑨quite a ⑩not ... at all;
2. 句型仿写:①They are in great danger because people cut down too many trees. ②Let's act together to make a beautiful home for pandas.;
3. 连句成篇:按逻辑顺序组织内容,先引出大熊猫的特征,再说明其濒危现状及原因,最后提出保护呼吁,形成完整短文。
【答案】
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①a symbol of ②pick up
③one another / each other
④take care of / look after ⑤in danger
⑥cut down ⑦too many ⑧made of
⑨quite a ⑩not ... at all
2. 句型仿写
①They are in great danger because people cut down too many trees.
②Let's act together to make a beautiful home for pandas.
【连句成篇】
Giving Pandas a Good Life
What animal wears a black and white coat? Yes, it's the panda! Pandas are cute and shy. They are also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo and sleeping. It is known that pandas are in danger because people cut down too many trees. What's worse, they die of illness easily. I hope the government can build more nature panda homes. Also, it is necessary that everyone should treat them as our friends and protect their homes. Let's act together to make a beautiful home for pandas.
【知识点】
英语写作;英语常用短语;英语句型运用
【点评】
本题围绕保护大熊猫的主题,考察学生对核心词汇、句型的掌握及篇章组织能力,要求内容完整、语言通顺,符合初中英语写作的基础要求,能引导学生关注动物保护。
【难度系数】
0.6
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