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我们在世上最亲的人是父母,是他们给予我们生命、抚养我们长大。请根据以下要点提示以“Care for Our Parents”为题,联系实际,适当发挥,写一篇80~100词的短文。
要点提示:1. 父母尽力给我们提供最好的生活和教育;
2. 希望父母锻炼身体,保持健康;
3. 帮助父母做家务等。
提示词:offer... to... 为……提供……
要求:1. 不少于80词;
2. 书写规范,语句通顺,意思连贯,合理想象,适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和老师姓名等相关信息。
Care for Our Parents
我们在世上最亲的人是父母,是他们给予我们生命、抚养我们长大。请根据以下要点提示以“Care for Our Parents”为题,联系实际,适当发挥,写一篇80~100词的短文。
要点提示:1. 父母尽力给我们提供最好的生活和教育;
2. 希望父母锻炼身体,保持健康;
3. 帮助父母做家务等。
提示词:offer... to... 为……提供……
要求:1. 不少于80词;
2. 书写规范,语句通顺,意思连贯,合理想象,适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和老师姓名等相关信息。
Care for Our Parents
Our dear parents, you love us more than anybody else in the world. As your children, how should we care for you? You have tried to offer the best life and education to us, so you are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep healthy, you should do more exercise. You shouldn't stay up so that you can get enough sleep. You should also eat healthy food.
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we should study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
We love you—our parents!
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we should study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
We love you—our parents!
答案
Care for Our Parents
Our dear parents, you love us more than anybody else in the world. As your children, how should we care for you? You have tried to offer the best life and education to us, so you are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep healthy, you should do more exercise. You shouldn't stay up so that you can get enough sleep. You should also eat healthy food.
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we should study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
We love you—our parents!
Our dear parents, you love us more than anybody else in the world. As your children, how should we care for you? You have tried to offer the best life and education to us, so you are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep healthy, you should do more exercise. You shouldn't stay up so that you can get enough sleep. You should also eat healthy food.
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we should study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
We love you—our parents!
解析
【分析】
拿到题目后,首先明确写作主题是“Care for Our Parents”,需覆盖三个核心要点:父母尽力提供最好的生活和教育、建议父母锻炼身体保持健康、帮助父母做家务等。写作时应先引出父母的付出,再分别阐述对父母健康的建议,最后说明我们应如何关爱父母,确保结构清晰、内容连贯,符合80~100词的要求。
【解析】
1. 开头:点明父母是最亲的人,引出父母为我们提供最好的生活和教育(对应要点1);
2. 中间第一部分:针对父母的辛苦,给出保持健康的建议,如多锻炼、不熬夜、吃健康食物(对应要点2);
3. 中间第二部分:说明我们应采取的行动,如帮做家务、努力学习、尊重父母(对应要点3);
4. 结尾:表达对父母的爱,使文章完整。
【答案】
Care for Our Parents
Our dear parents, you love us more than anybody else in the world. As your children, how should we care for you? You have tried to offer the best life and education to us, so you are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep healthy, you should do more exercise. You shouldn't stay up so that you can get enough sleep. You should also eat healthy food.
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we should study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
We love you—our parents!
【知识点】
英语短文写作、要点式作文写作、常用短语运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要点,结构层次分明,语言流畅自然,情感真挚,符合初中英语写作的规范要求,准确表达了对父母的关爱之情。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到题目后,首先明确写作主题是“Care for Our Parents”,需覆盖三个核心要点:父母尽力提供最好的生活和教育、建议父母锻炼身体保持健康、帮助父母做家务等。写作时应先引出父母的付出,再分别阐述对父母健康的建议,最后说明我们应如何关爱父母,确保结构清晰、内容连贯,符合80~100词的要求。
【解析】
1. 开头:点明父母是最亲的人,引出父母为我们提供最好的生活和教育(对应要点1);
2. 中间第一部分:针对父母的辛苦,给出保持健康的建议,如多锻炼、不熬夜、吃健康食物(对应要点2);
3. 中间第二部分:说明我们应采取的行动,如帮做家务、努力学习、尊重父母(对应要点3);
4. 结尾:表达对父母的爱,使文章完整。
【答案】
Care for Our Parents
Our dear parents, you love us more than anybody else in the world. As your children, how should we care for you? You have tried to offer the best life and education to us, so you are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep healthy, you should do more exercise. You shouldn't stay up so that you can get enough sleep. You should also eat healthy food.
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we should study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
We love you—our parents!
【知识点】
英语短文写作、要点式作文写作、常用短语运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要点,结构层次分明,语言流畅自然,情感真挚,符合初中英语写作的规范要求,准确表达了对父母的关爱之情。
【难度系数】
0.6
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