二、语法填空。
Dear Mr Hunt,
My problem is that I can't get on with my family. Relations 1.
my parents have become difficult. They fight a lot, and I 2.
like it. It's the 3.
say anything to them 4.
cloud 5.
nice 6.
favourite TV show. Instead he watches whatever he wants 8.
at night. I think this is 9.
10.
Sad and Thirteen
Dear Mr Hunt,
My problem is that I can't get on with my family. Relations 1.
between
my parents have become difficult. They fight a lot, and I 2.
really
don'tlike it. It's the 3.
only
communication they have. I don't know if I shouldsay anything to them 4.
about
this. When they argue, it's like a big, blackcloud 5.
hanging
hang over our home. Also, my elder brother is not verynice 6.
to
me. He always refuses to let me 7.watch
watch myfavourite TV show. Instead he watches whatever he wants 8.
until
lateat night. I think this is 9.
unfair
fair. At home I always feel lonely10.
and
nervous. Is that normal? What can I do?Sad and Thirteen
答案
1. between 2. really 3. only 4. about
5. hanging 6. to 7. watch 8. until 9. unfair
10. and
5. hanging 6. to 7. watch 8. until 9. unfair
10. and
解析
【分析】
拿到这篇语法填空,首先先通读全文,明确这是一封求助信,核心内容是作者倾诉自己无法和家人和睦相处的困扰,理清整体语境后,逐句分析每个空格的逻辑、所需词性和对应搭配:
1. 第一空后是my parents,指代父母两个人,要表达“在两者之间”的含义,对应合适的介词;
2. 第二空修饰后面的don't like,需要填入副词加强语气,表达“确实、实在”不喜欢他们吵架;
3. 第三空前文提到父母经常吵架,说明吵架是他们仅有的交流方式,填入表“唯一的”的限定词;
4. 第四空要表达“关于这件事和他们沟通”,填入表“关于”的介词;
5. 第五空修饰前面的名词a big, black cloud,云和“笼罩”是主动关系,需要用现在分词作后置定语;
6. 第六空是固定搭配“对某人友好”,填入对应的介词;
7. 第七空是使役动词let的固定搭配,后面接动词原形;
8. 第八空表达一直看电视到深夜,填入表“直到”的连词;
9. 前文描述哥哥的不合理行为,可知这里要表达“不公平”,给fair加否定前缀变形即可;
10. 第十空并列两个感受lonely和nervous,填入表并列关系的连词。
【解析】
1. between:此处表示“我父母之间的关系变得很糟糕”,表示在两者之间用介词between。
2. really:此处用副词really修饰动词短语don't like,加强语气,表达“我真的很不喜欢他们吵架”。
3. only:此处指代吵架是他们之间仅有的交流方式,only作定语修饰名词communication,表“唯一的”。
4. about:此处构成say sth. to sb. about sth.的结构,意为“关于某事和某人说些什么”,填介词about。
5. hanging:此处现在分词hanging作后置定语,修饰名词cloud,cloud和hang是主动关系,表“笼罩在我们家上空的乌云”。
6. to:固定搭配be nice to sb. 意为“对某人友好”,填介词to。
7. watch:固定搭配let sb. do sth. 意为“让某人做某事”,let后接不带to的不定式,即动词原形watch。
8. until:此处表达“他想看什么就看什么,一直到深夜”,until表“直到……为止”,符合语境。
9. unfair:根据前文哥哥的不合理行为,可知此处表达“我认为这是不公平的”,fair的反义词是unfair。
10. and:此处并列两个形容词lonely和nervous,表并列顺承关系,用并列连词and。
【答案】
1. between 2. really 3. only 4. about
5. hanging 6. to 7. watch 8. until 9. unfair
10. and
【知识点】
介词固定搭配,非谓语动词,词形变换
【点评】
本题是初中英语典型的基础类语法填空,所有考点都来自八年级课内核心知识点,既考察了固定短语的识记,也考察了结合上下文语境推理词义的能力,没有偏题怪题,适合用来巩固基础语法点。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这篇语法填空,首先先通读全文,明确这是一封求助信,核心内容是作者倾诉自己无法和家人和睦相处的困扰,理清整体语境后,逐句分析每个空格的逻辑、所需词性和对应搭配:
1. 第一空后是my parents,指代父母两个人,要表达“在两者之间”的含义,对应合适的介词;
2. 第二空修饰后面的don't like,需要填入副词加强语气,表达“确实、实在”不喜欢他们吵架;
3. 第三空前文提到父母经常吵架,说明吵架是他们仅有的交流方式,填入表“唯一的”的限定词;
4. 第四空要表达“关于这件事和他们沟通”,填入表“关于”的介词;
5. 第五空修饰前面的名词a big, black cloud,云和“笼罩”是主动关系,需要用现在分词作后置定语;
6. 第六空是固定搭配“对某人友好”,填入对应的介词;
7. 第七空是使役动词let的固定搭配,后面接动词原形;
8. 第八空表达一直看电视到深夜,填入表“直到”的连词;
9. 前文描述哥哥的不合理行为,可知这里要表达“不公平”,给fair加否定前缀变形即可;
10. 第十空并列两个感受lonely和nervous,填入表并列关系的连词。
【解析】
1. between:此处表示“我父母之间的关系变得很糟糕”,表示在两者之间用介词between。
2. really:此处用副词really修饰动词短语don't like,加强语气,表达“我真的很不喜欢他们吵架”。
3. only:此处指代吵架是他们之间仅有的交流方式,only作定语修饰名词communication,表“唯一的”。
4. about:此处构成say sth. to sb. about sth.的结构,意为“关于某事和某人说些什么”,填介词about。
5. hanging:此处现在分词hanging作后置定语,修饰名词cloud,cloud和hang是主动关系,表“笼罩在我们家上空的乌云”。
6. to:固定搭配be nice to sb. 意为“对某人友好”,填介词to。
7. watch:固定搭配let sb. do sth. 意为“让某人做某事”,let后接不带to的不定式,即动词原形watch。
8. until:此处表达“他想看什么就看什么,一直到深夜”,until表“直到……为止”,符合语境。
9. unfair:根据前文哥哥的不合理行为,可知此处表达“我认为这是不公平的”,fair的反义词是unfair。
10. and:此处并列两个形容词lonely和nervous,表并列顺承关系,用并列连词and。
【答案】
1. between 2. really 3. only 4. about
5. hanging 6. to 7. watch 8. until 9. unfair
10. and
【知识点】
介词固定搭配,非谓语动词,词形变换
【点评】
本题是初中英语典型的基础类语法填空,所有考点都来自八年级课内核心知识点,既考察了固定短语的识记,也考察了结合上下文语境推理词义的能力,没有偏题怪题,适合用来巩固基础语法点。
【难度系数】
0.7
三、书面表达。
假如你是李平,你近日收到了英国网友Alan的邮件。请根据邮件内
容进行回复。

Dear Alan,
Yours,
Li Ping
假如你是李平,你近日收到了英国网友Alan的邮件。请根据邮件内
容进行回复。
Dear Alan,
Yours,
Li Ping
答案
One possible version:
Dear Alan,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling lonely and
having trouble with your parents. But don't worry,
here are some suggestions for you.
To make friends, you can join clubs or take part
in some school activities. This way, you'll meet
people who share your interests. Also, be friendly
and start a conversation with your classmates, like
asking about their hobbies or favourite subjects.
As for getting on with your parents, try to
communicate with them calmly. When you have
different opinions, don't argue. Instead, listen to
their ideas and explain yours politely. You can also
spend some free time with them, such as watching a
movie or taking a walk together.
I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.
Everything will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
Dear Alan,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling lonely and
having trouble with your parents. But don't worry,
here are some suggestions for you.
To make friends, you can join clubs or take part
in some school activities. This way, you'll meet
people who share your interests. Also, be friendly
and start a conversation with your classmates, like
asking about their hobbies or favourite subjects.
As for getting on with your parents, try to
communicate with them calmly. When you have
different opinions, don't argue. Instead, listen to
their ideas and explain yours politely. You can also
spend some free time with them, such as watching a
movie or taking a walk together.
I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.
Everything will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
解析
【分析】
首先第一步先通读Alan的来信,提取出他的两个核心困扰:一是刚到新学校几乎没有朋友,感到孤独;二是经常和父母争吵,不知道如何和父母和睦相处,来信的核心诉求是希望得到对应的建议。接下来构思回复的逻辑:首先开篇要先表达共情,对他现在的糟糕情绪表示理解和关切,安抚他不用太焦虑;之后分两个模块对应他的两个困扰给出具体可行的建议,注意建议要贴合校园生活、亲子相处的真实场景,不要空泛;最后收尾送上祝福,希望他的情况能好转,整体符合英文书信的格式要求,语言通顺自然即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位:本题属于应用文类的建议书信写作,主体时态使用一般现在时,人称以第二人称为主,需要完整覆盖来信的两个核心问题,不能遗漏要点。
2. 结构搭建:
① 开篇段:礼貌回应来信,表达得知你近况不佳我很遗憾,引出下文我会给你提供对应的建议。
② 主体第一段:针对交友难的问题给出建议:比如可以参加学校社团、参与校园活动,认识有共同爱好的同学;待人友善,主动和同学搭话,聊爱好、喜欢的学科这类轻松的话题,快速拉近距离。
③ 主体第二段:针对和父母相处不好的问题给出建议:和父母有分歧的时候先冷静沟通,不要争吵,耐心听他们的想法,也礼貌说出自己的观点;平时空余时间可以多和父母一起活动,比如看电影、散步,增进感情。
④ 收尾段:表达希望这些建议能帮到你,一切很快都会变好。
3. 行文时使用合适的衔接词(如To make friends, Also, As for等)让逻辑更清晰,符合英语书信的表达习惯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Alan,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling lonely and having trouble with your parents. But don't worry, here are some suggestions for you.
To make friends, you can join clubs or take part in some school activities. This way, you'll meet people who share your interests. Also, be friendly and start a conversation with your classmates, like asking about their hobbies or favourite subjects.
As for getting on with your parents, try to communicate with them calmly. When you have different opinions, don't argue. Instead, listen to their ideas and explain yours politely. You can also spend some free time with them, such as watching a movie or taking a walk together.
I hope these suggestions are helpful to you. Everything will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英文书信格式,建议类表达,情景作文写作
【点评】
本题是非常贴近日常练习的建议类书信写作,核心要点非常明确,只要审题时不遗漏交友、亲子相处两个核心问题,给出的建议贴合实际生活、逻辑通顺,就能拿到不错的分数,很适合锻炼学生应用文写作的要点覆盖能力和逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先第一步先通读Alan的来信,提取出他的两个核心困扰:一是刚到新学校几乎没有朋友,感到孤独;二是经常和父母争吵,不知道如何和父母和睦相处,来信的核心诉求是希望得到对应的建议。接下来构思回复的逻辑:首先开篇要先表达共情,对他现在的糟糕情绪表示理解和关切,安抚他不用太焦虑;之后分两个模块对应他的两个困扰给出具体可行的建议,注意建议要贴合校园生活、亲子相处的真实场景,不要空泛;最后收尾送上祝福,希望他的情况能好转,整体符合英文书信的格式要求,语言通顺自然即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位:本题属于应用文类的建议书信写作,主体时态使用一般现在时,人称以第二人称为主,需要完整覆盖来信的两个核心问题,不能遗漏要点。
2. 结构搭建:
① 开篇段:礼貌回应来信,表达得知你近况不佳我很遗憾,引出下文我会给你提供对应的建议。
② 主体第一段:针对交友难的问题给出建议:比如可以参加学校社团、参与校园活动,认识有共同爱好的同学;待人友善,主动和同学搭话,聊爱好、喜欢的学科这类轻松的话题,快速拉近距离。
③ 主体第二段:针对和父母相处不好的问题给出建议:和父母有分歧的时候先冷静沟通,不要争吵,耐心听他们的想法,也礼貌说出自己的观点;平时空余时间可以多和父母一起活动,比如看电影、散步,增进感情。
④ 收尾段:表达希望这些建议能帮到你,一切很快都会变好。
3. 行文时使用合适的衔接词(如To make friends, Also, As for等)让逻辑更清晰,符合英语书信的表达习惯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Alan,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling lonely and having trouble with your parents. But don't worry, here are some suggestions for you.
To make friends, you can join clubs or take part in some school activities. This way, you'll meet people who share your interests. Also, be friendly and start a conversation with your classmates, like asking about their hobbies or favourite subjects.
As for getting on with your parents, try to communicate with them calmly. When you have different opinions, don't argue. Instead, listen to their ideas and explain yours politely. You can also spend some free time with them, such as watching a movie or taking a walk together.
I hope these suggestions are helpful to you. Everything will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英文书信格式,建议类表达,情景作文写作
【点评】
本题是非常贴近日常练习的建议类书信写作,核心要点非常明确,只要审题时不遗漏交友、亲子相处两个核心问题,给出的建议贴合实际生活、逻辑通顺,就能拿到不错的分数,很适合锻炼学生应用文写作的要点覆盖能力和逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
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