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某英文网站正在开展以“难忘的旅行”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最难忘的一次旅行经历。主要内容包括：你去了哪里，什么时候去的，做了什么以及为什么这是一次难忘的旅行。
要求：1. 根据提示，完成一篇不少于70词的英语短文（开头已给出的内容不计入总词数）；2. 所给提示词汇仅供选用，请不要透露你的个人真实信息。
提示词汇：
famous places，take photos，present，wonderful
I still remember the trip.
要求：1. 根据提示，完成一篇不少于70词的英语短文（开头已给出的内容不计入总词数）；2. 所给提示词汇仅供选用，请不要透露你的个人真实信息。
提示词汇：
famous places，take photos，present，wonderful
I still remember the trip.
Last summer vacation I travelled to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is an ancient city with a long history. There are many old buildings in Beijing. We visited many famous places, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. We also took a lot of photos. Before coming back, I also bought some presents for my good friends. It was a wonderful trip because I learnt more about Chinese history and tasted delicious local food. I love Beijing. If I have another chance, I will travel there again.
答案
One possible version:
I still remember the trip. Last summer vacation I travelled to Beijing with my parents.
Beijing is an ancient city with a long history. There are many old buildings in Beijing. We visited many famous places, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on.
We also took a lot of photos. Before coming back, I also bought some presents for my good friends. It was a wonderful trip because I learnt more about Chinese history and tasted delicious local food. I love Beijing. If I have another chance, I will travel there again.
I still remember the trip. Last summer vacation I travelled to Beijing with my parents.
Beijing is an ancient city with a long history. There are many old buildings in Beijing. We visited many famous places, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on.
We also took a lot of photos. Before coming back, I also bought some presents for my good friends. It was a wonderful trip because I learnt more about Chinese history and tasted delicious local food. I love Beijing. If I have another chance, I will travel there again.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语应用文写作题，主题为“难忘的旅行”，要求以李华身份投稿。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，明确旅行的时间、同行人员；2. 介绍旅行地点，列举参观的著名景点；3. 描述具体活动，如拍照、买礼物；4. 说明难忘的原因，需运用提示词汇，确保词数达标，不透露个人真实信息。
【解析】
按照写作要求，先承接给定开头，依次点明旅行时间、地点、同行人，介绍地点的特点，列举参观的著名景点，描述具体活动，最后说明难忘的原因，使用提示词汇，保证内容完整、语句通顺，符合征文要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I still remember the trip. Last summer vacation I travelled to Beijing with my parents.
Beijing is an ancient city with a long history. There are many old buildings in Beijing. We visited many famous places, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on.
We also took a lot of photos. Before coming back, I also bought some presents for my good friends. It was a wonderful trip because I learnt more about Chinese history and tasted delicious local food. I love Beijing. If I have another chance, I will travel there again.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用
【点评】
本题围绕“难忘的旅行”主题考查英语写作能力，要求学生围绕提示要点组织内容，运用指定词汇完成短文，是初中英语常见的写作题型，注重内容完整性与语言实用性。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道英语应用文写作题，主题为“难忘的旅行”，要求以李华身份投稿。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，明确旅行的时间、同行人员；2. 介绍旅行地点，列举参观的著名景点；3. 描述具体活动，如拍照、买礼物；4. 说明难忘的原因，需运用提示词汇，确保词数达标，不透露个人真实信息。
【解析】
按照写作要求，先承接给定开头，依次点明旅行时间、地点、同行人，介绍地点的特点，列举参观的著名景点，描述具体活动，最后说明难忘的原因，使用提示词汇，保证内容完整、语句通顺，符合征文要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I still remember the trip. Last summer vacation I travelled to Beijing with my parents.
Beijing is an ancient city with a long history. There are many old buildings in Beijing. We visited many famous places, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on.
We also took a lot of photos. Before coming back, I also bought some presents for my good friends. It was a wonderful trip because I learnt more about Chinese history and tasted delicious local food. I love Beijing. If I have another chance, I will travel there again.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用
【点评】
本题围绕“难忘的旅行”主题考查英语写作能力，要求学生围绕提示要点组织内容，运用指定词汇完成短文，是初中英语常见的写作题型，注重内容完整性与语言实用性。
【难度系数】
0.5
