至今,我们已经学习了许多关于历史与文化的知识。请根据以下提示信息,以“My Favourite Chinese Cultural Relic—The Terracotta Army”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍兵马俑,并谈谈你的看法。
要点提示:
兵马俑
位置 陕西西安
地位
世界闻名,历史奇迹
意义 展现古代中国人民的智慧与创造力,帮助我们了解历史
做法 我们应该学习历史、传承文化
参考词汇:the Terracotta Army 兵马俑;wonder 奇迹;wisdom 智慧;pass on 传承
要求:1. 短文必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数80左右。
要点提示:
兵马俑
位置 陕西西安
地位
意义 展现古代中国人民的智慧与创造力,帮助我们了解历史
做法 我们应该学习历史、传承文化
参考词汇:the Terracotta Army 兵马俑;wonder 奇迹;wisdom 智慧;pass on 传承
要求:1. 短文必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数80左右。
答案
My Favourite Chinese Cultural Relic—The Terracotta Army
My favourite Chinese cultural relic is the Terracotta Army. It lies in Xi'an, Shaanxi Province.
The Terracotta Army is famous all over the world, and it is a great wonder of Chinese history. It shows the great wisdom and creativity of ancient Chinese people. It also helps us learn more about the history of that time.
As students, we should learn more about our national history, and try our best to pass on our excellent traditional culture.
My favourite Chinese cultural relic is the Terracotta Army. It lies in Xi'an, Shaanxi Province.
The Terracotta Army is famous all over the world, and it is a great wonder of Chinese history. It shows the great wisdom and creativity of ancient Chinese people. It also helps us learn more about the history of that time.
As students, we should learn more about our national history, and try our best to pass on our excellent traditional culture.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My Favourite Chinese Cultural Relic—The Terracotta Army”为题写英语短文,需涵盖所有给定要点(位置、地位、意义、做法),词数80左右,可适当发挥。解题思路:1. 开头点明主题,介绍兵马俑的位置;2. 接着阐述其地位和意义,结合参考词汇;3. 最后说明作为学生应有的做法,传承文化,确保语句通顺、要点完整。
【解析】
按照题目要求分三段写作:第一段引出最喜欢的文物是兵马俑,说明其位于陕西西安;第二段介绍兵马俑的地位(世界闻名,历史奇迹)和意义(展现古代中国人民的智慧与创造力,帮助了解历史);第三段结合学生身份,说明应学习历史、传承文化,控制词数在80左右,用词准确。
【答案】
My Favourite Chinese Cultural Relic—The Terracotta Army
My favourite Chinese cultural relic is the Terracotta Army. It lies in Xi'an, Shaanxi Province.
The Terracotta Army is famous all over the world, and it is a great wonder of Chinese history. It shows the great wisdom and creativity of ancient Chinese people. It also helps us learn more about the history of that time.
As students, we should learn more about our national history, and try our best to pass on our excellent traditional culture.
【知识点】
英语写作、文化类英语表达
【点评】
本题考查学生对文化话题的英语写作能力,要求涵盖所有要点并适当发挥,能有效检验学生的语言组织和知识运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“My Favourite Chinese Cultural Relic—The Terracotta Army”为题写英语短文,需涵盖所有给定要点(位置、地位、意义、做法),词数80左右,可适当发挥。解题思路:1. 开头点明主题,介绍兵马俑的位置;2. 接着阐述其地位和意义,结合参考词汇;3. 最后说明作为学生应有的做法,传承文化,确保语句通顺、要点完整。
【解析】
按照题目要求分三段写作:第一段引出最喜欢的文物是兵马俑,说明其位于陕西西安;第二段介绍兵马俑的地位(世界闻名,历史奇迹)和意义(展现古代中国人民的智慧与创造力,帮助了解历史);第三段结合学生身份,说明应学习历史、传承文化,控制词数在80左右,用词准确。
【答案】
My Favourite Chinese Cultural Relic—The Terracotta Army
My favourite Chinese cultural relic is the Terracotta Army. It lies in Xi'an, Shaanxi Province.
The Terracotta Army is famous all over the world, and it is a great wonder of Chinese history. It shows the great wisdom and creativity of ancient Chinese people. It also helps us learn more about the history of that time.
As students, we should learn more about our national history, and try our best to pass on our excellent traditional culture.
【知识点】
英语写作、文化类英语表达
【点评】
本题考查学生对文化话题的英语写作能力,要求涵盖所有要点并适当发挥,能有效检验学生的语言组织和知识运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
[范文评析]
1. 总评:全文围绕“兵马俑”展开,内容覆盖位置、地位、意义和做法,写作要点齐全。
2. 结构布局:采用“开篇介绍文物→正文说明意义→结尾表达个人感悟”的三段式结构,条理清楚,过渡自然。

写作实践
我们知道“History is not a burden, but a light to guide us forward”。我们还知道“The best way to predict the future is to study the past”。可见,学习历史并把历史与现实结合起来非常有必要。通过创意、科技、文创产品让历史“活起来”是当代人的历史使命。请以“Bringing History to Life”为题,根据以下要点提示用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示:
★过去:人们只能在书本、博物馆里了解历史,比较枯燥。
★现在:有很多新方式让历史更生动;科技帮助历史“活起来”(如动态古画、数字博物馆);文创产品让文化走进日常生活;文化表演、汉服秀等让人们亲身体验历史。
★感受:学习历史让我们更了解自己,增强文化自信。
要求:1.包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2.词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Bringing History to Life
We know history is not a burden, but a light to guide us forward. And the best way to predict the future is to study the past. So
1. 总评:全文围绕“兵马俑”展开,内容覆盖位置、地位、意义和做法,写作要点齐全。
2. 结构布局:采用“开篇介绍文物→正文说明意义→结尾表达个人感悟”的三段式结构,条理清楚,过渡自然。
写作实践
我们知道“History is not a burden, but a light to guide us forward”。我们还知道“The best way to predict the future is to study the past”。可见,学习历史并把历史与现实结合起来非常有必要。通过创意、科技、文创产品让历史“活起来”是当代人的历史使命。请以“Bringing History to Life”为题,根据以下要点提示用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示:
★过去:人们只能在书本、博物馆里了解历史,比较枯燥。
★现在:有很多新方式让历史更生动;科技帮助历史“活起来”(如动态古画、数字博物馆);文创产品让文化走进日常生活;文化表演、汉服秀等让人们亲身体验历史。
★感受:学习历史让我们更了解自己,增强文化自信。
要求:1.包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2.词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Bringing History to Life
We know history is not a burden, but a light to guide us forward. And the best way to predict the future is to study the past. So
it is highly necessary to connect history with life.
In the past, people learned history only from books or museums. It was so boring that few of them were interested in it. Now, great changes have taken place. With the development of technology, history comes alive. We can enjoy lively ancient paintings and visit online museums easily. What's more, wonderful creative products bring traditional culture into our daily life. Cultural shows and hanfu shows also let us experience history for ourselves.
I strongly believe that learning history helps us know who we are and builds up our confidence. We should keep bringing history to life and pass on our great culture wisely.
答案
第七课时 Writing
标准提分版:
Bringing History to Life
We know history is not a burden, but a light to guide us forward. And the best way to predict the future is to study the past. So it is highly necessary to connect history with life.
In the past, people learned history only from books or museums. It was so boring that few of them were interested in it. Now, great changes have taken place. With the development of technology, history comes alive. We can enjoy lively ancient paintings and visit online museums easily. What's more, wonderful creative products bring traditional culture into our daily life. Cultural shows and hanfu shows also let us experience history for ourselves.
I strongly believe that learning history helps us know who we are and builds up our confidence. We should keep bringing history to life and pass on our great culture wisely.
进阶优化版:
Bringing History to Life
We know history is not a burden, but a light to guide us forward. And the best way to predict the future is to study the past. So it is highly necessary to connect history with life.
In the past, learning history often meant reading dull textbooks or viewing static displays in museums. Now, however, remarkable changes have taken place. Thanks to the rapid development of technology, history truly comes alive. We can now appreciate lively ancient paintings through digital exhibitions and visit online museums. What's more, wonderful creative products, such as historical blind boxes and traditional handicrafts, bring ancient culture directly into our daily lives. Cultural performances and magnificent hanfu shows allow us to personally experience history.
I strongly believe that learning history helps us understand who we are and builds up our cultural confidence. We should continue bringing history to life and pass on our great heritage wisely for generations to come.
标准提分版:
Bringing History to Life
We know history is not a burden, but a light to guide us forward. And the best way to predict the future is to study the past. So it is highly necessary to connect history with life.
In the past, people learned history only from books or museums. It was so boring that few of them were interested in it. Now, great changes have taken place. With the development of technology, history comes alive. We can enjoy lively ancient paintings and visit online museums easily. What's more, wonderful creative products bring traditional culture into our daily life. Cultural shows and hanfu shows also let us experience history for ourselves.
I strongly believe that learning history helps us know who we are and builds up our confidence. We should keep bringing history to life and pass on our great culture wisely.
进阶优化版:
Bringing History to Life
We know history is not a burden, but a light to guide us forward. And the best way to predict the future is to study the past. So it is highly necessary to connect history with life.
In the past, learning history often meant reading dull textbooks or viewing static displays in museums. Now, however, remarkable changes have taken place. Thanks to the rapid development of technology, history truly comes alive. We can now appreciate lively ancient paintings through digital exhibitions and visit online museums. What's more, wonderful creative products, such as historical blind boxes and traditional handicrafts, bring ancient culture directly into our daily lives. Cultural performances and magnificent hanfu shows allow us to personally experience history.
I strongly believe that learning history helps us understand who we are and builds up our cultural confidence. We should continue bringing history to life and pass on our great heritage wisely for generations to come.
解析
【分析】
首先承接已给出的开头,点明将历史与生活结合的必要性;接着分两部分:过去人们仅能通过书本、博物馆了解历史,方式枯燥;现在借助科技(动态古画、数字博物馆)、文创产品、文化表演等新方式让历史生动起来,让人们亲身体验;最后表达学习历史的感受(了解自我、增强文化自信),确保所有要点都覆盖,结构清晰,词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,用“So it is highly necessary to connect history with life.”引出主题,点明核心观点;
2. 描述过去的情况:“In the past, people learned history only from books or museums. It was so boring that few of them were interested in it.”说明过去了解历史的方式及不足;
3. 描述现在的变化:“Now, great changes have taken place. With the development of technology, history comes alive. We can enjoy lively ancient paintings and visit online museums easily. What's more, wonderful creative products bring traditional culture into our daily life. Cultural shows and hanfu shows also let us experience history for ourselves.”列举科技、文创、表演等新方式,体现历史“活起来”;
4. 表达感受:“I strongly believe that learning history helps us know who we are and builds up our confidence. We should keep bringing history to life and pass on our great culture wisely.”总结学习历史的意义,发出传承呼吁。
【答案】
Bringing History to Life
We know history is not a burden, but a light to guide us forward. And the best way to predict the future is to study the past. So it is highly necessary to connect history with life.
In the past, people learned history only from books or museums. It was so boring that few of them were interested in it. Now, great changes have taken place. With the development of technology, history comes alive. We can enjoy lively ancient paintings and visit online museums easily. What's more, wonderful creative products bring traditional culture into our daily life. Cultural shows and hanfu shows also let us experience history for ourselves.
I strongly believe that learning history helps us know who we are and builds up our confidence. We should keep bringing history to life and pass on our great culture wisely.
【知识点】
英语写作、要点式短文、历史主题表达
【点评】
本文结构清晰,严格围绕“Bringing History to Life”主题,完整覆盖过去、现在、感受三个要点,语言流畅自然,用词准确,符合词数要求,体现了历史与现实结合的核心思想,是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先承接已给出的开头,点明将历史与生活结合的必要性;接着分两部分:过去人们仅能通过书本、博物馆了解历史,方式枯燥;现在借助科技(动态古画、数字博物馆)、文创产品、文化表演等新方式让历史生动起来,让人们亲身体验;最后表达学习历史的感受(了解自我、增强文化自信),确保所有要点都覆盖,结构清晰,词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,用“So it is highly necessary to connect history with life.”引出主题,点明核心观点;
2. 描述过去的情况:“In the past, people learned history only from books or museums. It was so boring that few of them were interested in it.”说明过去了解历史的方式及不足;
3. 描述现在的变化:“Now, great changes have taken place. With the development of technology, history comes alive. We can enjoy lively ancient paintings and visit online museums easily. What's more, wonderful creative products bring traditional culture into our daily life. Cultural shows and hanfu shows also let us experience history for ourselves.”列举科技、文创、表演等新方式,体现历史“活起来”;
4. 表达感受:“I strongly believe that learning history helps us know who we are and builds up our confidence. We should keep bringing history to life and pass on our great culture wisely.”总结学习历史的意义,发出传承呼吁。
【答案】
Bringing History to Life
We know history is not a burden, but a light to guide us forward. And the best way to predict the future is to study the past. So it is highly necessary to connect history with life.
In the past, people learned history only from books or museums. It was so boring that few of them were interested in it. Now, great changes have taken place. With the development of technology, history comes alive. We can enjoy lively ancient paintings and visit online museums easily. What's more, wonderful creative products bring traditional culture into our daily life. Cultural shows and hanfu shows also let us experience history for ourselves.
I strongly believe that learning history helps us know who we are and builds up our confidence. We should keep bringing history to life and pass on our great culture wisely.
【知识点】
英语写作、要点式短文、历史主题表达
【点评】
本文结构清晰,严格围绕“Bringing History to Life”主题,完整覆盖过去、现在、感受三个要点,语言流畅自然,用词准确,符合词数要求,体现了历史与现实结合的核心思想,是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
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