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(2025·江苏无锡·调研)假如你是Lucy,你想给你的美国笔友Tom写一封邮件,介绍你的学校和学校生活。要点如下:
【要求】1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 必须包含所有要点,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、完整。
Hi, Tom!
Thanks for your email. Now I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
I think my school is great and my school life is colourful. I have much fun here.
All the best,
Lucy
【要求】1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 必须包含所有要点,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、完整。
Hi, Tom!
Thanks for your email. Now I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
I think my school is great and my school life is colourful. I have much fun here.
All the best,
Lucy
答案
I am a Grade 8 student now. Our school starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m., and we have one hour for lunch to relax or talk with friends. We have bright and clean classrooms, and there is also a modern library with thousands of books in our school. We have many different subjects and we can choose our favourite ones to learn. We only spend about an hour on our homework every day. After school, there are all kinds of clubs for us, and we can take part in many interesting and colourful activities.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语邮件写作题，写作身份为八年级学生Lucy，写作目的是向美国笔友Tom介绍自己的学校及校园生活。解题思路为：1. 明确需覆盖的所有要点：个人情况（八年级学生）、学校作息（8点上课、5点放学、1小时午餐）、学校设施（明亮整洁的教室、现代化图书馆）、学科设置（丰富且可自由选择）、作业时长（每天1小时）、课外活动（各类俱乐部，活动丰富）；2. 对要点进行整合，适当添加合理细节（如午餐时可放松或和朋友交流），使语句连贯自然，避免逐句翻译；3. 控制词数在90左右，结合已给出的开头结尾完成内容填充。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 确定写作身份与核心内容：以八年级学生Lucy的身份，围绕“学校和校园生活”展开，确保覆盖所有给定要点；2. 整合要点并润色：将个人情况（Grade 8）、学校作息（Our school starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m., with one hour for lunch）、设施（bright clean classrooms, modern library）、学科（many subjects to choose）、作业（one hour homework daily）、课外活动（all kinds of clubs, colourful activities）用连贯的语句连接，适当添加细节（如午餐时relax or talk with friends），使内容流畅；3. 检查词数与要点：确保词数符合要求，所有要点均包含在内，语句通顺。
【答案】
I am a Grade 8 student now. Our school starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m., and we have one hour for lunch to relax or talk with friends. We have bright and clean classrooms, and there is also a modern library with thousands of books in our school. We have many different subjects and we can choose our favourite ones to learn. We only spend about an hour on our homework every day. After school, there are all kinds of clubs for us, and we can take part in many interesting and colourful activities.
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、要点整合、语句连贯
【点评】
本题考查初中英语应用文写作能力，要求学生准确覆盖给定要点，合理整合内容并适当发挥，符合邮件的表达逻辑，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语邮件写作题，写作身份为八年级学生Lucy，写作目的是向美国笔友Tom介绍自己的学校及校园生活。解题思路为：1. 明确需覆盖的所有要点：个人情况（八年级学生）、学校作息（8点上课、5点放学、1小时午餐）、学校设施（明亮整洁的教室、现代化图书馆）、学科设置（丰富且可自由选择）、作业时长（每天1小时）、课外活动（各类俱乐部，活动丰富）；2. 对要点进行整合，适当添加合理细节（如午餐时可放松或和朋友交流），使语句连贯自然，避免逐句翻译；3. 控制词数在90左右，结合已给出的开头结尾完成内容填充。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 确定写作身份与核心内容：以八年级学生Lucy的身份，围绕“学校和校园生活”展开，确保覆盖所有给定要点；2. 整合要点并润色：将个人情况（Grade 8）、学校作息（Our school starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m., with one hour for lunch）、设施（bright clean classrooms, modern library）、学科（many subjects to choose）、作业（one hour homework daily）、课外活动（all kinds of clubs, colourful activities）用连贯的语句连接，适当添加细节（如午餐时relax or talk with friends），使内容流畅；3. 检查词数与要点：确保词数符合要求，所有要点均包含在内，语句通顺。
【答案】
I am a Grade 8 student now. Our school starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m., and we have one hour for lunch to relax or talk with friends. We have bright and clean classrooms, and there is also a modern library with thousands of books in our school. We have many different subjects and we can choose our favourite ones to learn. We only spend about an hour on our homework every day. After school, there are all kinds of clubs for us, and we can take part in many interesting and colourful activities.
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、要点整合、语句连贯
【点评】
本题考查初中英语应用文写作能力，要求学生准确覆盖给定要点，合理整合内容并适当发挥，符合邮件的表达逻辑，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
