学校生活
【写作要求】
假如下表是你周一到周五的学校生活日程表。请根据表格中的信息写一篇以“My school life”为题的英语短文,不少于70词,向大家描述一下你的学校生活。

要求:(1)包括表格中的所有提示信息,可适当发挥。
(2)不得出现个人的真实信息。





【思路分析】
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 构思:
① 开头介绍主题是学校生活。
② 中间按时间顺序描述一天的学校生活。
③ 结尾表达对学校生活的感受。
【写作步骤】
1. 如何写好开篇
① 直接点明要介绍学校生活,如:
I'm going to tell you about my school life.
② 以疑问句开头,引起读者兴趣,如:
Do you want to know what my school life is like?
2. 如何写好中间
按照时间顺序描述,可以简单说明每个时间点做的事情,如:
In the morning, I get up...
I usually get up at half past six in the morning. Then I have breakfast at seven.
At seven twenty, I go to school.
At nine forty, we have a break and do sports.
In the afternoon, classes begin at two thirty and finish at five ten. I go home at half past five.
3. 如何写好结尾
① 表达对学校生活的感受,如:
I like my school life very much.
My school life is busy but I think it's very interesting.
② 询问读者的看法,如:
What about your school life?
How do you like your school life?
【范文借鉴】
My school life
I'm going to tell you about my school life. (开头点明主题)
I usually get up at half past six in the morning. Then I have breakfast at seven. At seven twenty, I go to school. Classes start at eight. We have four lessons in the morning. At nine forty, we have a break and do sports. At twelve o'clock, we have lunch. In the afternoon, classes begin at two thirty and finish at five ten. I go home at half past five.(按时间顺序描述一天的学校生活)
My school life is busy but I think it's very interesting. How do you like your school life? (结尾表达感受并询问读者的看法)

My school life
I'm going to tell you about my school life.
I usually get up at half past six in the morning. Then I have breakfast at seven. At seven twenty, I go to school. Classes start at eight, and we have different lessons from 8:00 to 11:40. At nine forty, we have a break and do sports for half an hour. At twelve o'clock, we have lunch at school. In the afternoon, classes begin at two thirty and finish at five ten. I go home at half past five after school.
My school life is busy but I think it's very interesting. I love my school life very much. How do you like your school life?

【分析】
本题要求以“My school life”为题写英语短文，需用第一人称、一般现在时，完整覆盖表格中所有日程信息，按时间顺序组织内容；开头点明主题，中间按早中晚顺序描述日常，结尾表达对学校生活的感受，适当发挥，且不得出现真实个人信息，字数不少于70词。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点明要介绍学校生活，如“I'm going to tell you about my school life.”；
2. 中间：按时间顺序描述：早上6:30起床，7:00吃早饭，7:20去上学；上午8:00开始上课至11:40，9:40-10:10是运动休息时间；中午12:00吃午饭；下午2:30上课至5:10，5:30放学回家；
3. 结尾：表达对学校生活的感受，如“Busy but interesting”，可询问对方的学校生活。
【答案】
My school life
I'm going to tell you about my school life.
I usually get up at half past six in the morning. Then I have breakfast at seven. At seven twenty, I go to school. Classes start at eight, and we have different lessons from 8:00 to 11:40. At nine forty, we have a break and do sports for half an hour. At twelve o'clock, we have lunch at school. In the afternoon, classes begin at two thirty and finish at five ten. I go home at half past five after school.
My school life is busy but I think it's very interesting. I love my school life very much. How do you like your school life?
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；一般现在时；时间表达法
【点评】
本文符合写作要求，完整覆盖所有日程信息，第一人称、一般现在时运用准确，时间顺序清晰，语言流畅自然，结尾表达了真实感受，适当发挥内容，无真实个人信息，符合字数要求，是优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6