书面表达
丰富多彩的暑假生活即将开始,除了复习功课、预习新知识、参加社会劳动等,游学也是一个重要的假期活动。你认为最美丽的自然景观是哪里呢?请根据下面的导图要求向同学们介绍一下。词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。

In my opinion,the most beautiful place is
丰富多彩的暑假生活即将开始,除了复习功课、预习新知识、参加社会劳动等,游学也是一个重要的假期活动。你认为最美丽的自然景观是哪里呢?请根据下面的导图要求向同学们介绍一下。词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
In my opinion,the most beautiful place is
答案
One possible version:
In my opinion, the most beautiful place is Qinghai Lake. It lies in Qinghai Province, in the northwest of China.
The lake looks like a huge blue mirror under the sun. There are green grasslands and colourful flowers around it in summer. Flocks of seagulls fly over the water, making it even more lively.
I like it because the air there is fresh and the view is peaceful. It helps me forget tiredness from study and feel close to nature. It's really a wonderful place to visit during the summer vacation!
In my opinion, the most beautiful place is Qinghai Lake. It lies in Qinghai Province, in the northwest of China.
The lake looks like a huge blue mirror under the sun. There are green grasslands and colourful flowers around it in summer. Flocks of seagulls fly over the water, making it even more lively.
I like it because the air there is fresh and the view is peaceful. It helps me forget tiredness from study and feel close to nature. It's really a wonderful place to visit during the summer vacation!
解析
【分析】本题要求根据导图中“最美丽的自然景观”的四个问题(名称、位置、景观特点、喜欢的原因),结合已给开头写一篇70词左右的短文。解题思路:1. 选定具体的自然景观(如青海湖);2. 对应导图的四个要点依次展开内容,确保衔接自然;3. 控制词数,语言符合初中英语表达规范。
【解析】首先确定介绍对象为青海湖,按导图要点写作:先点明名称,再说明其位于中国西北的青海省;接着描述景观:阳光下像巨大的蓝色镜子,夏季周边有绿草和鲜花,水面有海鸥飞舞;最后说明喜欢的原因:空气清新,景色宁静,能让人亲近自然、缓解学习疲劳,适合暑假游玩。
【答案】One possible version:
In my opinion, the most beautiful place is Qinghai Lake. It lies in Qinghai Province, in the northwest of China.
The lake looks like a huge blue mirror under the sun. There are green grasslands and colourful flowers around it in summer. Flocks of seagulls fly over the water, making it even more lively.
I like it because the air there is fresh and the view is peaceful. It helps me forget tiredness from study and feel close to nature. It's really a wonderful place to visit during the summer vacation!
【知识点】英语书面表达、自然景观描述
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,围绕导图要点展开,结构清晰,内容具体,语言流畅,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先确定介绍对象为青海湖,按导图要点写作:先点明名称,再说明其位于中国西北的青海省;接着描述景观:阳光下像巨大的蓝色镜子,夏季周边有绿草和鲜花,水面有海鸥飞舞;最后说明喜欢的原因:空气清新,景色宁静,能让人亲近自然、缓解学习疲劳,适合暑假游玩。
【答案】One possible version:
In my opinion, the most beautiful place is Qinghai Lake. It lies in Qinghai Province, in the northwest of China.
The lake looks like a huge blue mirror under the sun. There are green grasslands and colourful flowers around it in summer. Flocks of seagulls fly over the water, making it even more lively.
I like it because the air there is fresh and the view is peaceful. It helps me forget tiredness from study and feel close to nature. It's really a wonderful place to visit during the summer vacation!
【知识点】英语书面表达、自然景观描述
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,围绕导图要点展开,结构清晰,内容具体,语言流畅,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】0.5
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