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七、书面表达(本大题共20分)
时光荏苒,一学期的学习让同学们收获满满。学校英语社团举办了"成长分享会"。假如你是Judy,请你以"My wonderful life in Grade 7"为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的校园生活和成长经历。
要点包括:(至少挑选2点)
1. Helping with class chores(e. g. , cleaning...);
2. Having a healthy lifestyle(e. g. , sports, food...);
3. Wearing suitable clothes(e. g. , choose the right colours to wear);
4. Managing pocket money wisely.
注意事项:
1. 短文须涵盖以上要点,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人或学校信息。
My wonderful life in Grade 7
Hi, I'm Judy. How time flies! I will finish my first term in Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my school life and growth.
时光荏苒,一学期的学习让同学们收获满满。学校英语社团举办了"成长分享会"。假如你是Judy,请你以"My wonderful life in Grade 7"为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的校园生活和成长经历。
要点包括:(至少挑选2点)
1. Helping with class chores(e. g. , cleaning...);
2. Having a healthy lifestyle(e. g. , sports, food...);
3. Wearing suitable clothes(e. g. , choose the right colours to wear);
4. Managing pocket money wisely.
注意事项:
1. 短文须涵盖以上要点,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人或学校信息。
My wonderful life in Grade 7
Hi, I'm Judy. How time flies! I will finish my first term in Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my school life and growth.
答案
七、
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:说明文。②时态:主要为一般现在时(介绍自己的校园生活和成长经历)。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,应结合自身经历,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍自己;第二步,分述自己的校园生活和成长经历;第三步,表达感悟与收获。
[词句积累]
①class chores 班级事务 ②sweep the floor 扫地
③contribute to 贡献 ④instead of 代替,而不是
⑤Besides, I know how to manage my pocket money wisely.(“how+动词不定式”结构)
One possible version:
My wonderful life in Grade 7
Hi, I'm Judy. How time flies! I will finish my first term in Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my school life and growth.
First, I always help with class chores. I often clean the windows and sweep the floor with my classmates. It makes our classroom clean and tidy, and I feel proud to contribute to our class.
Second, I have a healthy lifestyle. I play badminton with my friends after school twice a week. It keeps me strong and energetic. I also eat more vegetables and fruit instead of too much junk food.
Besides, I know how to manage my pocket money wisely. I save most of it in a small box and only spend it on useful
things like books or stationery. This helps me form a good habit of saving.
I really enjoy my wonderful life in Grade 7, and I have learned a lot from these experiences.
Besides同义短语: in addition to/as well as
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:说明文。②时态:主要为一般现在时(介绍自己的校园生活和成长经历)。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,应结合自身经历,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍自己;第二步,分述自己的校园生活和成长经历;第三步,表达感悟与收获。
[词句积累]
①class chores 班级事务 ②sweep the floor 扫地
③contribute to 贡献 ④instead of 代替,而不是
⑤Besides, I know how to manage my pocket money wisely.(“how+动词不定式”结构)
One possible version:
My wonderful life in Grade 7
Hi, I'm Judy. How time flies! I will finish my first term in Grade 7. Now let me tell you something about my school life and growth.
First, I always help with class chores. I often clean the windows and sweep the floor with my classmates. It makes our classroom clean and tidy, and I feel proud to contribute to our class.
Second, I have a healthy lifestyle. I play badminton with my friends after school twice a week. It keeps me strong and energetic. I also eat more vegetables and fruit instead of too much junk food.
Besides, I know how to manage my pocket money wisely. I save most of it in a small box and only spend it on useful
things like books or stationery. This helps me form a good habit of saving.
I really enjoy my wonderful life in Grade 7, and I have learned a lot from these experiences.
Besides同义短语: in addition to/as well as
解析
【分析】
这是一道要点提示类的七年级英语书面表达题，解题时首先要完成审题步骤：先明确体裁是介绍个人校园成长经历的说明文，主体时态使用一般现在时，符合介绍日常校园生活的语境，同时要满足至少选2个题干给出的成长要点、词数不少于70、不得出现真实个人/学校信息的要求。接下来搭建写作框架：题干已经给出开篇内容，主体部分逐个展开选定的要点，每个要点不能只罗列短语，要补充对应的具体行为细节和个人感受，最后收尾总结本学期的收获，抒发对七年级生活的喜爱，就能写出逻辑通顺、符合要求的短文。
【解析】
我们按照规范写作流程完成作答：
1. 审题确认
体裁：个人成长类说明文
时态：以一般现在时为主
核心要求：覆盖至少2个给定成长要点，语句连贯，词数达标，无真实敏感信息
2. 谋篇布局
① 开篇：题干已给出，无需自行创作，直接承接内容即可
② 主体部分：依次展开选定的成长要点，每个要点补充具体细节，比如写参与班级家务就补充擦窗、扫地的具体行为，写健康生活就补充运动频率、饮食选择的细节，写管理零花钱就说明自己储蓄、只买有用物品的做法
③ 收尾：总结本学期的收获，表达对七年级生活的喜爱
3. 完整参考文段：
First, I always help with class chores. I often clean the windows and sweep the floor with my classmates. It makes our classroom clean and tidy, and I feel proud to contribute to our class.
Second, I have a healthy lifestyle. I play badminton with my friends after school twice a week. It keeps me strong and energetic. I also eat more vegetables and fruit instead of too much junk food.
Besides, I know how to manage my pocket money wisely. I save most of it in a small box and only spend it on useful things like books or stationery. This helps me form a good habit of saving.
I really enjoy my wonderful life in Grade 7, and I have learned a lot from these experiences.
【答案】
参考范文如上所示，符合所有题干要求，要点完整、语句通顺、词数达标。
【知识点】
要点类作文写作，一般现在时运用，短文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题贴合七年级学生的真实校园生活，话题熟悉度高，写作门槛较低，主要考察学生将所学基础词汇、句式结合给定要点组织成连贯文段的能力。同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏选定的要点，适当补充细节避免内容空洞，同时要注意词数达标，不要出现真实的个人、学校相关信息，避免违规扣分。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一道要点提示类的七年级英语书面表达题，解题时首先要完成审题步骤：先明确体裁是介绍个人校园成长经历的说明文，主体时态使用一般现在时，符合介绍日常校园生活的语境，同时要满足至少选2个题干给出的成长要点、词数不少于70、不得出现真实个人/学校信息的要求。接下来搭建写作框架：题干已经给出开篇内容，主体部分逐个展开选定的要点，每个要点不能只罗列短语，要补充对应的具体行为细节和个人感受，最后收尾总结本学期的收获，抒发对七年级生活的喜爱，就能写出逻辑通顺、符合要求的短文。
【解析】
我们按照规范写作流程完成作答：
1. 审题确认
体裁：个人成长类说明文
时态：以一般现在时为主
核心要求：覆盖至少2个给定成长要点，语句连贯，词数达标，无真实敏感信息
2. 谋篇布局
① 开篇：题干已给出，无需自行创作，直接承接内容即可
② 主体部分：依次展开选定的成长要点，每个要点补充具体细节，比如写参与班级家务就补充擦窗、扫地的具体行为，写健康生活就补充运动频率、饮食选择的细节，写管理零花钱就说明自己储蓄、只买有用物品的做法
③ 收尾：总结本学期的收获，表达对七年级生活的喜爱
3. 完整参考文段：
First, I always help with class chores. I often clean the windows and sweep the floor with my classmates. It makes our classroom clean and tidy, and I feel proud to contribute to our class.
Second, I have a healthy lifestyle. I play badminton with my friends after school twice a week. It keeps me strong and energetic. I also eat more vegetables and fruit instead of too much junk food.
Besides, I know how to manage my pocket money wisely. I save most of it in a small box and only spend it on useful things like books or stationery. This helps me form a good habit of saving.
I really enjoy my wonderful life in Grade 7, and I have learned a lot from these experiences.
【答案】
参考范文如上所示，符合所有题干要求，要点完整、语句通顺、词数达标。
【知识点】
要点类作文写作，一般现在时运用，短文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题贴合七年级学生的真实校园生活，话题熟悉度高，写作门槛较低，主要考察学生将所学基础词汇、句式结合给定要点组织成连贯文段的能力。同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏选定的要点，适当补充细节避免内容空洞，同时要注意词数达标，不要出现真实的个人、学校相关信息，避免违规扣分。
【难度系数】
0.7
