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六、书面表达。
你校英文网站正面向全校学生举办题为“How to go green at school”的征文活动。请你根据以下要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意：1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺；2. 词数 90 左右(已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数)；3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should
Thanks for your reading!
你校英文网站正面向全校学生举办题为“How to go green at school”的征文活动。请你根据以下要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意：1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺；2. 词数 90 左右(已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数)；3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should
protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering. To make our school greener, here's my advice. First, turn off the lights and fans when leaving classrooms. Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third, bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Thanks for your reading!
答案
六、One possible version:
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering. To make our school greener, here's my advice. First, turn off the lights and fans when leaving classrooms. Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third, bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make big differences. Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering. To make our school greener, here's my advice. First, turn off the lights and fans when leaving classrooms. Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third, bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make big differences. Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
解析
【分析】
本题为环保主题的英语书面表达，需围绕“How to go green at school”展开，要覆盖三个核心要点：“going green”的含义、学校里的不环保行为、让学校更环保的建议。写作时先明确“going green”是节约资源、减少污染的环保行为；再列举学校常见的浪费纸张、忘关灯、乱扔垃圾等不良行为；接着给出具体可操作的环保建议，最后用呼吁性语句收尾，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求，不提及个人身份信息。
【解析】
1. 开头：解释“going green”的含义，点明是通过节约资源、减少污染来保护环境；
2. 中间：列举学校里的不良行为，如浪费纸张、离开教室忘关电源、乱扔垃圾等；
3. 建议部分：分点给出具体做法，如随手关电源、回收纸张、用可重复使用的水瓶、种植树木等；
4. 结尾：用总结性语句呼吁大家共同行动，呼应主题。
写作时使用简单易懂的词汇和句式，保证语句通顺，覆盖所有要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering. To make our school greener, here's my advice. First, turn off the lights and fans when leaving classrooms. Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third, bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make big differences. Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保主题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，语言简洁符合学生水平，是一篇优秀的参赛范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为环保主题的英语书面表达，需围绕“How to go green at school”展开，要覆盖三个核心要点：“going green”的含义、学校里的不环保行为、让学校更环保的建议。写作时先明确“going green”是节约资源、减少污染的环保行为；再列举学校常见的浪费纸张、忘关灯、乱扔垃圾等不良行为；接着给出具体可操作的环保建议，最后用呼吁性语句收尾，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求，不提及个人身份信息。
【解析】
1. 开头：解释“going green”的含义，点明是通过节约资源、减少污染来保护环境；
2. 中间：列举学校里的不良行为，如浪费纸张、离开教室忘关电源、乱扔垃圾等；
3. 建议部分：分点给出具体做法，如随手关电源、回收纸张、用可重复使用的水瓶、种植树木等；
4. 结尾：用总结性语句呼吁大家共同行动，呼应主题。
写作时使用简单易懂的词汇和句式，保证语句通顺，覆盖所有要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should protect the environment by saving resources and reducing pollution. However, I often see bad behaviours in our school, such as wasting paper, leaving lights on, and littering. To make our school greener, here's my advice. First, turn off the lights and fans when leaving classrooms. Second, reuse notebooks and recycle waste paper. Third, bring reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones. Finally, plant more trees in school gardens.
Small actions make big differences. Let's work together for a greener school!
Thanks for your reading!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保主题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，语言简洁符合学生水平，是一篇优秀的参赛范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
