Ⅸ. 书面表达。(20分)
(A) 三年快乐而充实的初中生活结束了,你将进入高中学习。回顾过去,展望未来,你对高中生活充满期待。请根据要点提示写一篇 40 词左右的英语短文。文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。(5 分)
要点提示:1. 简单回顾初中的学习生活,感恩老师的教导;
2. 设想高中的生活、学习环境 (如餐厅,图书馆,运动场……) 及与老师、同学融洽相处;
3. 生活多彩,学业进步。
写作要求:表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。
I am graduating from this Junior middle school and I will study in a high school soon. I'm so excited now.
(A) 三年快乐而充实的初中生活结束了,你将进入高中学习。回顾过去,展望未来,你对高中生活充满期待。请根据要点提示写一篇 40 词左右的英语短文。文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。(5 分)
要点提示:1. 简单回顾初中的学习生活,感恩老师的教导;
2. 设想高中的生活、学习环境 (如餐厅,图书馆,运动场……) 及与老师、同学融洽相处;
3. 生活多彩,学业进步。
写作要求:表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。
I am graduating from this Junior middle school and I will study in a high school soon. I'm so excited now.
First of all, I thank my teachers because they always try their best to make the lessons lively and interesting. I have learned a lot from them.
Everything is new for me in High School. I expect that it is big and clean with a large dining room.
And the library is full of different kind of interesting books so that I can read them in my spare time.
I also expect the life out of class is colorful so that I can enjoy all kinds of activities.
答案
One possible version:
I am graduating from this Junior middle school and I will study in a high school soon. I'm so excited now. First of all, I thank my teachers because they always try their best to make the lessons lively and interesting. I have learned a lot from them.
Everything is new for me in High School. I expect that it is big and clean with a large dining room. And the library is full of different kind of interesting books so that I can read them in my spare time. I also expect the life out of class is colorful so that I can enjoy all kinds of activities.
I am graduating from this Junior middle school and I will study in a high school soon. I'm so excited now. First of all, I thank my teachers because they always try their best to make the lessons lively and interesting. I have learned a lot from them.
Everything is new for me in High School. I expect that it is big and clean with a large dining room. And the library is full of different kind of interesting books so that I can read them in my spare time. I also expect the life out of class is colorful so that I can enjoy all kinds of activities.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇初中毕业展望高中生活的英语续写短文,写作时需紧扣三个要点:首先承接开头回顾初中生活,表达对老师的感恩;接着描述高中的学习生活环境(如餐厅、图书馆等);最后展望高中多彩的生活与学业进步。需注意语句通顺、衔接自然,符合英语表达习惯,字数符合要求。
【解析】
续写部分需衔接开头内容:1. 先表达对初中老师的感恩,说明老师的教导让自己收获良多;2. 再介绍对高中环境的期待,如干净的校园、大餐厅、藏书丰富的图书馆;3. 最后提及对高中多彩课外活动和学业进步的期待。写作时要确保语句连贯,用词准确,符合初中英语水平。
【答案】
First of all, I thank my teachers because they always try their best to make the lessons lively and interesting. I have learned a lot from them. Everything is new for me in High School. I expect that it is big and clean with a large dining room. And the library is full of different kind of interesting books so that I can read them in my spare time. I also expect the life out of class is colorful so that I can enjoy all kinds of activities.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、初中英语写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要点,内容连贯,语句通顺,准确表达了对初中老师的感恩和对高中生活的期待,符合初中英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇初中毕业展望高中生活的英语续写短文,写作时需紧扣三个要点:首先承接开头回顾初中生活,表达对老师的感恩;接着描述高中的学习生活环境(如餐厅、图书馆等);最后展望高中多彩的生活与学业进步。需注意语句通顺、衔接自然,符合英语表达习惯,字数符合要求。
【解析】
续写部分需衔接开头内容:1. 先表达对初中老师的感恩,说明老师的教导让自己收获良多;2. 再介绍对高中环境的期待,如干净的校园、大餐厅、藏书丰富的图书馆;3. 最后提及对高中多彩课外活动和学业进步的期待。写作时要确保语句连贯,用词准确,符合初中英语水平。
【答案】
First of all, I thank my teachers because they always try their best to make the lessons lively and interesting. I have learned a lot from them. Everything is new for me in High School. I expect that it is big and clean with a large dining room. And the library is full of different kind of interesting books so that I can read them in my spare time. I also expect the life out of class is colorful so that I can enjoy all kinds of activities.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、初中英语写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要点,内容连贯,语句通顺,准确表达了对初中老师的感恩和对高中生活的期待,符合初中英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
(B) 年岁渐长,临近毕业,青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力。请以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题,结合自身的经历,用英语写一篇词数 80 左右的小短文向校刊的 School Life 英文专栏投稿,谈谈自我管理能力的感悟。(15 分)
要点提示:1. 自我管理的重要性;
2. 自我管理的经历;
3. 提高自我管理能力感悟 (至少两条建议)。
写作要求:1. 内容必须包括所有的要点。
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得透露个人信息。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It's reported that Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days.
要点提示:1. 自我管理的重要性;
2. 自我管理的经历;
3. 提高自我管理能力感悟 (至少两条建议)。
写作要求:1. 内容必须包括所有的要点。
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得透露个人信息。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It's reported that Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days.
We can't deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it's important for us to learn to manage our own lives.
I remember once I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it is our parents' work. When my mother was on business on one night, I was hungry, I hardly cooked either.
At that time, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. I had to cook for myself. After that, I found that cooking was not as difficult as it seems.
In short, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future.
答案
One possible version:
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It's reported that Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days. We can't deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it's important for us to learn to manage our own lives.
I remember once I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it is our parents' work. When my mother was on business on one night, I was hungry, I hardly cooked either. At that time, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. I had to cook for myself. After that, I found that cooking was not as difficult as it seems.
In short, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future.
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It's reported that Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days. We can't deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it's important for us to learn to manage our own lives.
I remember once I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it is our parents' work. When my mother was on business on one night, I was hungry, I hardly cooked either. At that time, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. I had to cook for myself. After that, I found that cooking was not as difficult as it seems.
In short, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文向校刊专栏投稿,需涵盖三个要点:自我管理的重要性、相关个人经历、自我管理的感悟(含建议)。解题思路:首先承接给定开头,点明当下青少年依赖父母的现状,引出自我管理的重要性;其次选取贴近生活的个人经历(如不会做饭的事例),体现对自我管理的认知转变;最后从经历中提炼感悟,说明自我管理的意义,确保行文连贯、符合词数要求,不透露个人信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇衔接:承接给定开头,指出青少年过度依赖父母的问题,明确自我管理对青少年的重要性(对应要点1);
2. 经历叙述:结合自身经历,讲述过去因依赖父母不会做饭,妈妈出差时遇到饮食困难,从而意识到必须学习自我管理(对应要点2);
3. 感悟总结:从经历中提炼感悟,说明学会自我管理能为未来打下基础(对应要点3),注意控制词数,语言简洁流畅,符合投稿要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It's reported that Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days. We can't deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it's important for us to learn to manage our own lives.
I remember once I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it is our parents' work. When my mother was on business one night, I was hungry and hardly cooked either. At that time, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. I had to cook for myself. After that, I found that cooking was not as difficult as it seems.
In short, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、要点式写作、英语表达连贯
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求,完整覆盖所有要点,选取真实贴切的个人经历支撑观点,语言连贯自然,词数符合要求,适合向校刊专栏投稿,体现了对自我管理的正确认知。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文向校刊专栏投稿,需涵盖三个要点:自我管理的重要性、相关个人经历、自我管理的感悟(含建议)。解题思路:首先承接给定开头,点明当下青少年依赖父母的现状,引出自我管理的重要性;其次选取贴近生活的个人经历(如不会做饭的事例),体现对自我管理的认知转变;最后从经历中提炼感悟,说明自我管理的意义,确保行文连贯、符合词数要求,不透露个人信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 开篇衔接:承接给定开头,指出青少年过度依赖父母的问题,明确自我管理对青少年的重要性(对应要点1);
2. 经历叙述:结合自身经历,讲述过去因依赖父母不会做饭,妈妈出差时遇到饮食困难,从而意识到必须学习自我管理(对应要点2);
3. 感悟总结:从经历中提炼感悟,说明学会自我管理能为未来打下基础(对应要点3),注意控制词数,语言简洁流畅,符合投稿要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It's reported that Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days. We can't deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it's important for us to learn to manage our own lives.
I remember once I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it is our parents' work. When my mother was on business one night, I was hungry and hardly cooked either. At that time, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. I had to cook for myself. After that, I found that cooking was not as difficult as it seems.
In short, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、要点式写作、英语表达连贯
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求,完整覆盖所有要点,选取真实贴切的个人经历支撑观点,语言连贯自然,词数符合要求,适合向校刊专栏投稿,体现了对自我管理的正确认知。
【难度系数】
0.5
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