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What is one new thing you tried this summer? It could be a sport, a hobby, a skill, or even a new game. Write 3 ~ 4 sentences in English to describe what you tried, how you felt, and whether you succeeded or not.
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What is one new thing you tried this summer? It could be a sport, a hobby, a skill, or even a new game. Write 3 ~ 4 sentences in English to describe what you tried, how you felt, and whether you succeeded or not.
This summer I tried to make a paper airplane that could fly far.
I folded it many times. The first five crashed, but the sixth one flew across the yard.
I felt so proud!
答案
This summer I tried to make a paper airplane that could fly far. I folded it many times. The first five crashed, but the sixth one flew across the yard. I felt so proud!（答案不唯一，合理即可）
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：用3~4句英语描述夏天尝试的新事物（如运动、爱好、技能等），需包含尝试的内容、过程、感受及是否成功。解题思路：1. 选定一个具体的新事物（如制作纸飞机）；2. 分步骤描述尝试的过程（如折叠多次，前几次失败）；3. 表达成功后的感受；4. 控制句子数量在3-4句，确保语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】本题为开放性话题写作，需紧扣题目要求的四个要素：尝试的新事物、尝试的过程、个人感受、是否成功。写作时选择具体易描述的内容，用简单的英语句子串联，确保句子数量符合要求，逻辑清晰，情感真实。
【答案】This summer I tried to make a paper airplane that could fly far. I folded it many times. The first five crashed, but the sixth one flew across the yard. I felt so proud!
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语句子表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语基础写作能力，围绕个人经历展开，难度适中，答案具有开放性，只要符合要求即可得分，能有效考查学生的英语组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】本题为开放性话题写作，需紧扣题目要求的四个要素：尝试的新事物、尝试的过程、个人感受、是否成功。写作时选择具体易描述的内容，用简单的英语句子串联，确保句子数量符合要求，逻辑清晰，情感真实。
【答案】This summer I tried to make a paper airplane that could fly far. I folded it many times. The first five crashed, but the sixth one flew across the yard. I felt so proud!
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语句子表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语基础写作能力，围绕个人经历展开，难度适中，答案具有开放性，只要符合要求即可得分，能有效考查学生的英语组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】0.6
