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五、书面表达
在我们的日常生活中，分享是一种可贵的美德，更是一种能传递温暖的快乐。分享美食、故事、经历等点滴小事，都能让我们收获别样的成长。请以 “The Happiness of Sharing” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你的一次分享经历及从中获得的快乐，并阐述分享的重要意义。
要求：1. 根据提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于 80。
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
在我们的日常生活中，分享是一种可贵的美德，更是一种能传递温暖的快乐。分享美食、故事、经历等点滴小事，都能让我们收获别样的成长。请以 “The Happiness of Sharing” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你的一次分享经历及从中获得的快乐，并阐述分享的重要意义。
要求：1. 根据提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于 80。
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
答案
The Happiness of Sharing
Sharing is a valuable virtue that brings warmth and joy to both others and ourselves. I still remember a rainy day last term when my deskmate Lily forgot her umbrella and stood at the school gate, looking worried. I shared my umbrella with her, even though I had to run a little way to the bus stop. Later, she brought me a delicious homemade cookie as a thank-you. That small act of sharing made our friendship closer.
From this experience, I learn that sharing is not only about giving things but also about passing on kindness. Whether it’s sharing a story, a snack or a helping hand, it can make our lives more beautiful. The happiness of sharing is something we can always hold in our hearts.
Sharing is a valuable virtue that brings warmth and joy to both others and ourselves. I still remember a rainy day last term when my deskmate Lily forgot her umbrella and stood at the school gate, looking worried. I shared my umbrella with her, even though I had to run a little way to the bus stop. Later, she brought me a delicious homemade cookie as a thank-you. That small act of sharing made our friendship closer.
From this experience, I learn that sharing is not only about giving things but also about passing on kindness. Whether it’s sharing a story, a snack or a helping hand, it can make our lives more beautiful. The happiness of sharing is something we can always hold in our hearts.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“The Happiness of Sharing”为题写英语短文，需包含分享经历、从中的快乐、分享的重要意义三部分内容。解题思路为：1. 开头点明分享是可贵美德，引出主题；2. 选取真实感强的生活小事例（如雨天分享雨伞），具体描述经历细节；3. 结尾结合事例阐述分享的深层意义，升华主题，同时注意词数达标、语言流畅、无真实个人信息。
【解析】
采用“总-分-总”结构写作：开头总述分享的价值；中间叙述雨天分享雨伞的经历，体现分享带来的快乐；结尾升华分享的意义，呼应主题，确保语言流畅、词数符合要求。
【答案】
The Happiness of Sharing
Sharing is a valuable virtue that brings warmth and joy to both others and ourselves. I still remember a rainy day last term when my deskmate Lily forgot her umbrella and stood at the school gate, looking worried. I shared my umbrella with her, even though I had to run a little way to the bus stop. Later, she brought me a delicious homemade cookie as a thank-you. That small act of sharing made our friendship closer.
From this experience, I learn that sharing is not only about giving things but also about passing on kindness. Whether it’s sharing a story, a snack or a helping hand, it can make our lives more beautiful. The happiness of sharing is something we can always hold in our hearts.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、主题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
短文紧扣主题，选取具体生活事例，结构清晰，语言流畅，准确传达分享的快乐与意义，符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“The Happiness of Sharing”为题写英语短文，需包含分享经历、从中的快乐、分享的重要意义三部分内容。解题思路为：1. 开头点明分享是可贵美德，引出主题；2. 选取真实感强的生活小事例（如雨天分享雨伞），具体描述经历细节；3. 结尾结合事例阐述分享的深层意义，升华主题，同时注意词数达标、语言流畅、无真实个人信息。
【解析】
采用“总-分-总”结构写作：开头总述分享的价值；中间叙述雨天分享雨伞的经历，体现分享带来的快乐；结尾升华分享的意义，呼应主题，确保语言流畅、词数符合要求。
【答案】
The Happiness of Sharing
Sharing is a valuable virtue that brings warmth and joy to both others and ourselves. I still remember a rainy day last term when my deskmate Lily forgot her umbrella and stood at the school gate, looking worried. I shared my umbrella with her, even though I had to run a little way to the bus stop. Later, she brought me a delicious homemade cookie as a thank-you. That small act of sharing made our friendship closer.
From this experience, I learn that sharing is not only about giving things but also about passing on kindness. Whether it’s sharing a story, a snack or a helping hand, it can make our lives more beautiful. The happiness of sharing is something we can always hold in our hearts.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、主题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
短文紧扣主题，选取具体生活事例，结构清晰，语言流畅，准确传达分享的快乐与意义，符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
