Ⅴ. 书面表达。
参与志愿者工作是一件非常有意义的事情,既能增长阅历,也能帮助别人。假如你是张华,请你根据表格要点提示和要求,写一篇英语短文,在本周的英语口语课上给大家分享一次你自己做志愿者的经历及感受。

要求:1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 80词左右,短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, I am Zhang Hua. Now I'd like to share one of my volunteer experiences with you.
参与志愿者工作是一件非常有意义的事情,既能增长阅历,也能帮助别人。假如你是张华,请你根据表格要点提示和要求,写一篇英语短文,在本周的英语口语课上给大家分享一次你自己做志愿者的经历及感受。
要求:1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 80词左右,短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, I am Zhang Hua. Now I'd like to share one of my volunteer experiences with you.
答案
I volunteered to look after the old people at the nearby community home with my classmates last Sunday.
To start with, we helped clean their rooms and windows. Then we spent an hour talking with them, sharing our interesting school stories. In the end, we sang old songs together and had a great time.
I played a part in bringing warmth to the lonely old people. I felt proud of myself because I learned that helping others can also bring me strong happiness.
To start with, we helped clean their rooms and windows. Then we spent an hour talking with them, sharing our interesting school stories. In the end, we sang old songs together and had a great time.
I played a part in bringing warmth to the lonely old people. I felt proud of myself because I learned that helping others can also bring me strong happiness.
解析
这是一篇记叙文类的志愿经历分享写作,写作思路如下:
1. 承接给定开头,先交代志愿活动的基本信息:时间、同行伙伴、活动内容,使用提示给出的"I volunteered to do..."句型;
2. 用提示的"To start with...; Then...; In the end..."逻辑词梳理志愿活动的完整过程,清晰说明活动的开展细节;
3. 最后使用提示给出的指定表达点明自身感受,紧扣主题,全文控制在80词左右,不出现真实人名地名,覆盖所有写作要点。
1. 承接给定开头,先交代志愿活动的基本信息:时间、同行伙伴、活动内容,使用提示给出的"I volunteered to do..."句型;
2. 用提示的"To start with...; Then...; In the end..."逻辑词梳理志愿活动的完整过程,清晰说明活动的开展细节;
3. 最后使用提示给出的指定表达点明自身感受,紧扣主题,全文控制在80词左右,不出现真实人名地名,覆盖所有写作要点。
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