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七、书面表达
你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Close to Nature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，叙述你接近大自然的一次经历（如：郊游、研学、劳动实践等）及感悟，或谈谈接近大自然的好处。
要求：
1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Getting Close to Nature
你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Close to Nature”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，叙述你接近大自然的一次经历（如：郊游、研学、劳动实践等）及感悟，或谈谈接近大自然的好处。
要求：
1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Getting Close to Nature
答案
One possible version:
Getting Close to Nature
In order to help students know more about farms, get close to nature, and experience labour practices, our school held a farm trip last month.
On that Sunday, we visited Red Star Farm with the help of the guide. After that, we did a lot of work on the farm. We learned to plant peanuts(花生) and tomatoes and pick strawberries. After lunch, we fed chickens and rode horses. We had great fun there and took a lot of beautiful pictures.
We enjoyed the farm trip very much. I think it's very meaningful to learn some basic farming skills and that we should take part in more activities like this. I hope it can be better in the future.
Getting Close to Nature
In order to help students know more about farms, get close to nature, and experience labour practices, our school held a farm trip last month.
On that Sunday, we visited Red Star Farm with the help of the guide. After that, we did a lot of work on the farm. We learned to plant peanuts(花生) and tomatoes and pick strawberries. After lunch, we fed chickens and rode horses. We had great fun there and took a lot of beautiful pictures.
We enjoyed the farm trip very much. I think it's very meaningful to learn some basic farming skills and that we should take part in more activities like this. I hope it can be better in the future.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“Getting Close to Nature”为题写英语短文，需围绕“接近大自然”的经历（如郊游、研学等）或好处展开，词数不少于80，不得出现真实姓名、校名。解题思路：1. 确定写作体裁为记叙文，需包含具体经历和个人感悟；2. 选取贴近学生生活的真实场景（如学校组织的农场研学），使内容真实可信；3. 按照“引出活动→叙述活动过程→表达感悟”的结构行文，确保逻辑清晰；4. 注意语言流畅，符合英语表达习惯，避免语法错误。
【解析】本题为英语书面表达题，需紧扣主题，结合具体经历阐述感悟。范文结构如下：1. 开头点明学校组织农场旅行的目的（帮助学生了解农场、接近自然、体验劳动实践）；2. 中间详细叙述农场活动：种植花生、番茄，采摘草莓，喂鸡、骑马等，体现活动的丰富性；3. 结尾表达对活动的喜爱，点明感悟（学习农耕技能、应多参与此类活动），升华主题。
【答案】One possible version:
Getting Close to Nature
In order to help students know more about farms, get close to nature, and experience labour practices, our school held a farm trip last month.
On that Sunday, we visited Red Star Farm with the help of the guide. After that, we did a lot of work on the farm. We learned to plant peanuts(花生) and tomatoes and pick strawberries. After lunch, we fed chickens and rode horses. We had great fun there and took a lot of beautiful pictures.
We enjoyed the farm trip very much. I think it's very meaningful to learn some basic farming skills and that we should take part in more activities like this. I hope it can be better in the future.
【知识点】英语书面表达、英语记叙文写作
【点评】本题为英语征文题，范文紧扣主题，选取学生熟悉的农场研学经历，内容具体充实，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，且未使用真实信息，完美契合题目要求，能为学生提供清晰的写作范例。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】本题为英语书面表达题，需紧扣主题，结合具体经历阐述感悟。范文结构如下：1. 开头点明学校组织农场旅行的目的（帮助学生了解农场、接近自然、体验劳动实践）；2. 中间详细叙述农场活动：种植花生、番茄，采摘草莓，喂鸡、骑马等，体现活动的丰富性；3. 结尾表达对活动的喜爱，点明感悟（学习农耕技能、应多参与此类活动），升华主题。
【答案】One possible version:
Getting Close to Nature
In order to help students know more about farms, get close to nature, and experience labour practices, our school held a farm trip last month.
On that Sunday, we visited Red Star Farm with the help of the guide. After that, we did a lot of work on the farm. We learned to plant peanuts(花生) and tomatoes and pick strawberries. After lunch, we fed chickens and rode horses. We had great fun there and took a lot of beautiful pictures.
We enjoyed the farm trip very much. I think it's very meaningful to learn some basic farming skills and that we should take part in more activities like this. I hope it can be better in the future.
【知识点】英语书面表达、英语记叙文写作
【点评】本题为英语征文题，范文紧扣主题，选取学生熟悉的农场研学经历，内容具体充实，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，且未使用真实信息，完美契合题目要求，能为学生提供清晰的写作范例。
【难度系数】0.6
