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Ⅲ. 书面表达
假如你是李华，你校正在开展以"体育有益身心"为主题的英文演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍你最喜欢的体育运动及参与该项体育运动的感受。
(1)你对打排球感兴趣，每周六早上在校队训练。
(2)体育对大家是有益的。
首先，你感觉比以前更健康，晚上睡眠也更好。
其次，你学会与其他队员合作，团队合作很重要。
此外，你会永不放弃，获得勇气去应对每一个挑战。
(3)你认为……
要求:
(1)词数: 60 — 80。
(2)题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
My favourite sport
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Here I'd like to introduce my favourite sport to you. I
假如你是李华，你校正在开展以"体育有益身心"为主题的英文演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍你最喜欢的体育运动及参与该项体育运动的感受。
(1)你对打排球感兴趣，每周六早上在校队训练。
(2)体育对大家是有益的。
首先，你感觉比以前更健康，晚上睡眠也更好。
其次，你学会与其他队员合作，团队合作很重要。
此外，你会永不放弃，获得勇气去应对每一个挑战。
(3)你认为……
要求:
(1)词数: 60 — 80。
(2)题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
My favourite sport
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Here I'd like to introduce my favourite sport to you. I
am interested in playing volleyball because it can make me happy. I train every Saturday morning in our school volleyball team.
Sports are good for us. First, I feel healthier than before. After training, I can sleep better at night. Second, it teaches me to work with the other team members. Team work is important to us. Third, I should never give up. It also helps me get the courage to rise to every challenge.
Last but not least, I love volleyball and our team members have the same goal. If possible, I will keep playing volleyball.
Sports are good for us. First, I feel healthier than before. After training, I can sleep better at night. Second, it teaches me to work with the other team members. Team work is important to us. Third, I should never give up. It also helps me get the courage to rise to every challenge.
Last but not least, I love volleyball and our team members have the same goal. If possible, I will keep playing volleyball.
答案
(One possible version)
My favourite sport
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Here I'd like to
introduce my favorite sport to you. I am interested in
playing volleyball because it can make me happy. I
train every Saturday morning in our school volleyball
team.
Sports are good for us. First, I feel healthier than
before. After training, I can sleep better at night.
Second, it teaches me to work with the other team
members. Team work is important to us. Third, I
should never give up. It also helps me get the courage to
rise to every challenge.
Last but not least, I love volleyball and our team
members have the same goal. If possible, I will keep
playing volleyball.
My favourite sport
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Here I'd like to
introduce my favorite sport to you. I am interested in
playing volleyball because it can make me happy. I
train every Saturday morning in our school volleyball
team.
Sports are good for us. First, I feel healthier than
before. After training, I can sleep better at night.
Second, it teaches me to work with the other team
members. Team work is important to us. Third, I
should never give up. It also helps me get the courage to
rise to every challenge.
Last but not least, I love volleyball and our team
members have the same goal. If possible, I will keep
playing volleyball.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先明确文体是校园主题英文发言稿，人称统一用第一人称，核心时态为一般现在时。解题思路分三步：第一步，承接已给出的开头，首先点明自己的爱好是打排球，对应题干第一个要点，说明每周六早上在校队训练的信息；第二步，按照题干给出的三个层次，依次阐述体育运动的益处，分别对应“比以前更健康、夜间睡眠更好”“学会和队员协作，明白团队合作的重要性”“永不放弃，获得应对挑战的勇气”这三个要求，用逻辑连接词串联内容避免混乱；第三步，补充简短合理的收尾，表达自己对排球的热爱和坚持运动的想法，最后调整语句让行文流畅，把总词数控制在要求区间内，确保所有要点无遗漏。
【解析】
本篇发言稿按照要求完成所有要点，行文逻辑清晰：
1. 承接开篇内容，首先说明自己对打排球很感兴趣，补充合理的小铺垫说明排球能带来快乐，紧接着交代自己每周六早上都在校排球队训练，完成第一个指定要点。
2. 用过渡句引出“体育对大家有益”的核心观点，依次用First、Second、Third作为逻辑引导：首先说明自己运动后比之前更健康，夜间睡眠质量也更好；其次点明排球运动教会自己和其他队员协作，突出团队合作的重要性；最后说明运动让自己学会永不放弃，获得了直面每一个挑战的勇气，完整覆盖全部给定的益处类要点。
3. 最后用Last but not least引出收尾，点明自己十分热爱排球，未来也会坚持打排球，内容贴合校园演讲的语境，表达自然连贯。
【答案】
(One possible version)
My favourite sport
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Here I'd like to introduce my favorite sport to you. I am interested in playing volleyball because it can make me happy. I train every Saturday morning in our school volleyball team.
Sports are good for us. First, I feel healthier than before. After training, I can sleep better at night. Second, it teaches me to work with the other team members. Team work is important to us. Third, I should never give up. It also helps me get the courage to rise to every challenge.
Last but not least, I love volleyball and our team members have the same goal. If possible, I will keep playing volleyball.
【知识点】
英文发言稿写作
逻辑连接词运用
要点类书面表达
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干给出的所有要求要点，使用清晰的逻辑连接词划分内容层次，行文流畅自然，符合校园英文演讲的语境，词数符合题目限定要求，补充的收尾内容贴合主题没有冗余，是非常规范的参考例文。同学们写作时要注意优先把所有指定要点全部准确表达出来，再适当补充衔接内容，避免出现要点遗漏的扣分问题。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先明确文体是校园主题英文发言稿，人称统一用第一人称，核心时态为一般现在时。解题思路分三步：第一步，承接已给出的开头，首先点明自己的爱好是打排球，对应题干第一个要点，说明每周六早上在校队训练的信息；第二步，按照题干给出的三个层次，依次阐述体育运动的益处，分别对应“比以前更健康、夜间睡眠更好”“学会和队员协作，明白团队合作的重要性”“永不放弃，获得应对挑战的勇气”这三个要求，用逻辑连接词串联内容避免混乱；第三步，补充简短合理的收尾，表达自己对排球的热爱和坚持运动的想法，最后调整语句让行文流畅，把总词数控制在要求区间内，确保所有要点无遗漏。
【解析】
本篇发言稿按照要求完成所有要点，行文逻辑清晰：
1. 承接开篇内容，首先说明自己对打排球很感兴趣，补充合理的小铺垫说明排球能带来快乐，紧接着交代自己每周六早上都在校排球队训练，完成第一个指定要点。
2. 用过渡句引出“体育对大家有益”的核心观点，依次用First、Second、Third作为逻辑引导：首先说明自己运动后比之前更健康，夜间睡眠质量也更好；其次点明排球运动教会自己和其他队员协作，突出团队合作的重要性；最后说明运动让自己学会永不放弃，获得了直面每一个挑战的勇气，完整覆盖全部给定的益处类要点。
3. 最后用Last but not least引出收尾，点明自己十分热爱排球，未来也会坚持打排球，内容贴合校园演讲的语境，表达自然连贯。
【答案】
(One possible version)
My favourite sport
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. Here I'd like to introduce my favorite sport to you. I am interested in playing volleyball because it can make me happy. I train every Saturday morning in our school volleyball team.
Sports are good for us. First, I feel healthier than before. After training, I can sleep better at night. Second, it teaches me to work with the other team members. Team work is important to us. Third, I should never give up. It also helps me get the courage to rise to every challenge.
Last but not least, I love volleyball and our team members have the same goal. If possible, I will keep playing volleyball.
【知识点】
英文发言稿写作
逻辑连接词运用
要点类书面表达
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干给出的所有要求要点，使用清晰的逻辑连接词划分内容层次，行文流畅自然，符合校园英文演讲的语境，词数符合题目限定要求，补充的收尾内容贴合主题没有冗余，是非常规范的参考例文。同学们写作时要注意优先把所有指定要点全部准确表达出来，再适当补充衔接内容，避免出现要点遗漏的扣分问题。
【难度系数】
0.7
