典例赏析
假如你是Nick，长大后你想成为一名科学家，研发不同的机器人。请你根据下面的思维导图，写一篇80~100词的短文，描写你的梦想。

My Dream
审题指导：
1.体裁:记叙文 2.时态:一般将来时 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架：

优秀范文：

My Dream
I'm Nick. What do you want to be in the future? As for me, I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
I'm going to study hard to go to a good university and learn science there. Then I will work in Beijing. I plan to make different robots to help protect the environment. They can clean the streets, pick up the rubbish and plant trees in different places.
It's my dream. What about yours?

【分析】本题要求以Nick的身份写一篇80~100词的记叙文，主题是成为科学家研发机器人的梦想。解题思路：1.明确体裁为记叙文，时态用一般将来时，人称采用第一人称；2.开头点明身份及核心梦想（长大后成为科学家）；3.中间阐述实现梦想的具体计划：努力学习考取好大学、去北京工作，研发能帮助环保的机器人（如清洁街道、捡垃圾、种树）；4.结尾呼应梦想，确保内容贴合要求且字数达标。
【解析】按照审题指导的要求，以第一人称、一般将来时写作，结构分为三部分：开头介绍身份与梦想，中间说明实现梦想的行动及研发机器人的环保功能，结尾呼应主题，控制字数在80~100词，内容符合思维导图的研发机器人、环保相关的设定。
【答案】My Dream
I'm Nick. What do you want to be in the future? As for me, I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
I'm going to study hard to go to a good university and learn science there. Then I will work in Beijing. I plan to make different robots to help protect the environment. They can clean the streets, pick up the rubbish and plant trees in different places.
It's my dream. What about yours?
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、一般将来时运用、梦想主题英语表达
【点评】范文严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰，内容具体，时态人称正确，字数达标，准确表达了成为科学家研发环保机器人的梦想，是符合要求的优秀写作范例。
【难度系数】0.6